1、Unit 4,Earthquakes,Writing,一、文体感知 1文体特点 新闻报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准确性、及时性。语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂。,新闻报道,2亮点句式 (1) It is reported that an activity was organized to get the students close to nature. (2) As is reported/According to the report, a terrible earthquake happened. (3)
2、 They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. (4) What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. (5) Apart from knowledge, we also learned to cooperate with each other and came to realize the importance of teamwork. (6)The activity benefited us a
3、lot./The activity was of great benefit to us./The activity was beneficial to us.,3写作模板 (导语)In order to encourage the students to _ ，our school organized a _ on _ (时间) at _ (地点)，which _ . (正文)It was a _ day(介绍天气)First(ly)/First of all _ .Then _ (介绍活动的过程)Finally， _ . (评价) _ benefited us a lot/was of b
4、enefit to usNot only did it _，it also _ .What a(n) _ activity!,二、典题演练 星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括： 1时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain)； 2活动的过程； 3你对于这次活动的评论。 注意：1.词数120个左右。 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,1完成句子 (1)为了鼓励同学们参加户外运动，我们学校于4月10日组织了登山活动。 _，our school organized a moun
5、tainclimbing activity on April 10. (2)我们几百个人参加了这项活动。 Hundreds of us _ this activity. (3)有些人落后了。 Some _ .,In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise,took part in,fell behind,(4)其他的人愿意来提供帮助。 Others would come and _ . (5)我们沐浴在阳光下。 We were _ sunshine. (6)我们高兴地欢呼跳跃。 We jumped and cheered
6、 _ . (7)这不仅让我们接近了大自然，从沉重的学业中得以放松，也增强了我们的友谊。 It not only got us _ nature and gave us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us.,offer help,bathed in,with joy,close to,2句式升级。 (8)用定语从句合并(1)、(2)句。 In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school o
7、rganized a mountainclimbing activity on April 10， _ . (9)用when合并(3)、(4)句。 _ (10)用非谓语动词合并(5)、(6)句。 _，we jumped and cheered with joy. (11)用倒装句改写第(7)句。 _ us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us.,which hundreds of us took part in,When so
8、me fell behind, others would come and offer help.,Bathed in sunshine,Not only did it get,_ _,In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountainclimbing activity on April 10, which hundreds of us took part in. It was a nice dayAt 8：00 am, we gathered on the f
9、oot of Daqing Mountain and set off for the top in high spiritsAll the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful sceneryWhen some fell behind, others would come and offer helpAbout 2 hours later, we all reached the topBathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheere
10、d with joy.,_,The activity benefited us a lotNot only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among usWhat a wonderful activity！,5月1日，高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英
11、语写一篇100词左右的新闻报道。内容包括： 1时间、地点、人物、活动； 2老人们的反应； 3简短评论。 注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出。,Student volunteers brought sunshine to the elderly _ By Chen Jie，School Newspaper,答案： Student volunteers brought sunshine to the elderly On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nurs
12、ing Home and did some voluntary workUpon their arrival，Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruitsThen, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floorEverything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the
13、 elderly people.,When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindnessThey said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happyWhat they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. By Chen Jie，School Newspaper,
