1、how to write a suggestive letter,writing,如何写建议信,What is a good writing？,Lets enjoy some compositions.,语法篇,这第一句写的,I strongly recommend that This is right we as a senior high student.,你再看这开头,I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a da
2、y. The main reasons accounting for it are as follows.,这动词错的,Short students time in school can have a good effect on study, it can important for students study xiaolu, and increase students own time.,卷面篇,养眼的,当批到下午两点看到了它们,太挤了,太乱了,太空了,太潦草了,太花了,太没谱了,老师最恨的作文,大锅，标点呢？段呢？,姐，你长发及腰的字体难掩你每句都错的事实啊！,老师最喜欢的作文,Gre
3、at minds think alike!,What is a good writing？How to catch the experts eye?,What is a good writing？,What is a good writing？Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)* With exactly
4、used words and relatively changed sentence patterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化),三个步骤,Step 1 Identify overall requirements and list the key points（审题列要点）,Step 2 Make sentences,Step3. Form a passage and polish （成文润色）,How to write a write a letter of advice ？,A sample of a suggestive letter Dear Jack:I am sorry t
5、o hear that you feel extremly nervous before an important exam. Id like to give you some advice.First, make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Second , take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and
6、energetic. Last but not least, dont stay up late studying. It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them.,Layout （谋篇布局）,Ending express your hope,Beginning state yo
7、ur purpose,Body give advice & reasons,A. state your purpose,sentence patterns,B. give your advice,C. express your hope,A. state your purpose,1. Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on 2. I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter. Here Id like to give some suggestions. 3. Kno
8、wing that, Id like to give some suggestions. 4. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on,B. give your advice,1. Its helpful/ important / necessary to 2. It would be a good idea to 3. I would like to suggest that 4. I think it would be more beneficial if you could 5. If I were you, I would 6. Fi
9、rst of all. I think it would be better if. 7. It will certainly help a lot to do sth / It also helps to do sth,C. express your hope,1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. 2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 3. Im sure if you take my advice, you will 4
10、. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 5. Im sure you will.,常见连接词罗列观点,Firstly, First of all, Above all, To begin with, In the first place, For one thing,Secondly, Besides, Moreover, In addition, Whats more, Furthermore, Worse still, To make matters worse, For another thing,Finally,
11、 At last, In the end, Last but not least,A template of a suggestive letter Dear_,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _. Im glad to write the letter to you on _. Here are a few suggestions for your reference.First, it is important to _. As youll _. Then, it also helps if you _. Bes
12、ides, it should be a good idea to _. Because_. you can also _. Im sure that_.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Sincerely yours,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。1. 参加中文学习班； 2. 看中文书刊、电视；3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。,小试牛刀：请用上面的模板写出下面的作文,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking
13、for my advice on Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to , as youll . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to because In addition, you can also Im sure that.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes, Li Hua,
14、take a Chinese course,be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.,watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese.,learn and sing Chinese songs,by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.,make more Chinese friends.,how to learn Chinese
15、well.,Youll learn Chinese well,SummaryWhat is a good writing？Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns(词语的准确运用和句
16、式的富于变化),How to write a write a letter of advice ？,Summary,Summary Dear Jack:I am sorry to hear that you feel extremly nervous before an important exam. Id like to give you some advice.First, make careful plans before exams to master what you have learned completely. It will help you build up your co
17、nfidence. Second , take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last but not least, dont stay up late studying. It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of e
18、xams and perform well in them.,Layout （谋篇布局）,Ending express your hope,Beginning state your purpose,Body give advice & reasons,1. Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on 2. I am writing to express my views concerning 3. Knowing that, Id like to give some suggestions.,A. state your purp
19、ose,sentence patterns,B. give your advice,1. Its helpful/ important to 2. It would be a good idea to 3. I would like to suggest that,C. express your hope,1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. 2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 3. Im sure if you take
20、 my advice, you will ,Summary,Homework,假设你叫李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数100左右。1、健康饮食 2、多锻炼 3、喝足够多的水,Dear Jane,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on_ First, it is important to _. As youll _. Then, it also helps if you _. Besides, it should be a good ide
21、a to _. Because_. you can also _. Im sure that_.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Sincerely yours,how to lose weight,表达愿望： 5、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变得更加苗条和保持健康。,The use of sentence patterns,表明意图： 1. 你给Jane 回信就如何减肥提建议。,提出建议： 2、健康饮食 3、多锻炼 4、喝足够多的水,Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight,
22、Id like to give some suggestions.,It is important to have a healthy diet.,It is helpful to do more exercise.,It would be a good idea to drink enough water.,I am sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy.,假设你叫李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数100左右
23、。1、健康饮食 2、多锻炼 3、喝足够多的水,It is helpful to do more exercise.,It would be a good idea to drink enough water.,It is important to have a healthy diet.,Dear Jane,Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, Id like to give some suggestions.,First, it is important to have a healthy diet.,In addition, it
24、would be a good idea to drink enough water.,Besides, it is helpful to do more exercise.,I am sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy.,In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and fruits.,The more exercise you take, the more fat you will burn off, and you will
25、 be thinner.,Because water can support our body and activities, and help us lose weight.,Dear Jane,Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, Id like to give some suggestions. First, it is important to have a healthy diet. In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and fruits. Besides
26、, it also helps if you take more exercise. The more exercise you take, the more fat you will burn off, and you will be thinner. In addition, it should be a good idea to drink enough water, because water can support our body and activities, and help us lose weight. Im sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua,引出话题，表明写作意图,1. 参加中文学习班； 2. 看中文书刊、电视； 3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。,提出建议：,总结，表达愿望,连接词,(多个建议+多个理由),Outline,评分标准,
