1、1第五节 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号“”，并在其下面写出该增加的词；删除：把多余的词用“”划掉；修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写 出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Mary Jo Ray turned 113 in May，2008.She was the twelfth oldest person in the world.Ray was one of
2、 a few people who lived to more than 110 years old.We often call them centenarians.She often drink milk.She hardly gets angry with others and is always happy.So she is in good health.“I think hers reason for long life is drinking milk every day and trying to be happy.”said her granddaughter.Her doct
3、or，Dr.Perls，said another reason for Rays long life is her genes(基因)She gets them from her parents.He said，“These genes can keep you of good health and let you live longer.People can usual live to about 80 years old.Those with the right gene can live to more than 100 years.They also pass those genes to their children.So when a persons parents live long，he or she will be probably live long，too.” Dr.Perls also said，“You may not have those genes.But if you dont smoke， dont drink too much，and do exercise or do other things relax，you still can live long.”参考答案2
