1、Introduction to a person,writing,基础写作 人物篇,A. 概况 B外貌,性格 C生平 D评价,1）肖老师，我们的化学老师，毕业于华南师范大学。 Miss Xie, our Chemistry teacher, graduated from South China Normal University. 2）他爱好广泛，尤其是跳舞。 He has many hobbies,especially loving dance. 3）他的教学效果：学生用功，进步快。 With his help, we work hard and make great progress.,同
2、位语,非谓语,with 结构,A. 概况 （用非谓语/同位语结构/定从，使文章通顺) 1) Born on _, _became _. 出生于1989年12月28号，她后来成为一位学生喜欢的好老师 2) _, the daugther of a _ family, was born on _. 玲子，一个贫穷家庭的女儿，出生于1989年12月28号,December 28th,1989,she later,a good teacher of whom students,are fond,Ling zi,poor,December 28th,1989,B外貌,性格 (巧用with做定语),1)
3、梁志波是个近视的男生,他戴着一副眼镜Liang Zhibo is a near-sighted boy_. 2)杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发。Yang Yang is good-looking_.,with a pair of glasses on his nose,with long hair,C生平 (尽量用定语从句,半倒装，润色文章),1）侯耀文不仅对科学感兴趣,而且有音乐天赋。 Not only_, but also _. 2）祖龙涛创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国家作出了贡献。 Zu Longtao set a new world record of swimming,_.,is Hou
4、 Yaowen interested in science,he has a gift/talent for music,which makes a great contribution to China.,D评价 （注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语/词组）,1）裴继升给我们作出了榜样, 大家都赞扬他 Pei Jishen _,so all the people _him. 2）鲁迅是中国最伟大的小说家之一,并且将会作为杰出人物为人们所永远记住. Lu Xun is one of the greatest novelists in China and will _an outstanding m
5、an forever.,sets us a good example,speaks highly of,be remembered as,你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，内容提要如下（1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人，为了国家，弃医从文。（2）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。（3）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如阿Q正传、祝福这两部影片。（4）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。参考词汇： 阿Q正传：The True Story of AH Q祝福：The New Years Sacrifice Dear Bruce,I was
6、glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun . _ Yours, Li Ming,（5）读其小说对你学习中国文学有益,（1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人，为了国家，弃医从文。 句子主干：鲁迅弃医从文 abandon the study of medicine 鲁迅为了国家弃医从文 for the country,with + n,非谓语born in.,whose 定从,（2）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。 Not only.but
7、 also. (否定含义的词放句首时，句子要用半倒装，既将be动词、情态动词、助动词提前) 你决不能放弃你的生命。 In no way can you give up your life. The Father of Modern Chinese Literature.,（3）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如阿Q正传、祝福这两部影片。句子主干：小说被制成电影被制成：be made into被译成：be translated into时态:现在完成时,which 定从,非谓语 including,(4)一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。 简单句即可 选入=收录入 收录入：be collect
8、ed in时态:现在完成时,（5）读其小说对你学习中国文学有益 对有益： be beneficial/helpful for sb,非谓语作主语,（1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人，为了国家，弃医从文。（2）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。（3）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如阿Q正传、祝福这两部影片。（4）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。（5）读其小说对你学习中国文学有益（3）&（4）有递进关系，需用“Moreover”连接 （4）&（5）有因果关系，需用“Therefore”连接,Dear Bruce,I was glad to know you began to
9、study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, Lu Xun with the real name Zhou Shuren abandoned the study of medicine to write for his country. Not only was Lu Xun a well-Known Chinese writer and thinker, but also the Father of modern Chinese
10、 literature. His novels which have been translated into many languages have been made into films, including The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice. Moreover,some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks. Therefore,reading his novel is beneficial for you if y
11、ou want to learn Chinese literature. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will benefit a lot.Yours,非谓语,with结构,半倒装,定从,连接词,说明：上海出版的学生英文报，对象是我国的学生，请用英语为该报写一段人物介绍，介绍游泳运动员罗雪娟。内容要点如下： 罗雪娟（Luo Xuejuan）,昵称：罗罗，女，23岁，浙江人； 从小接受游泳训练，2000年，崭露头角； 取得成绩：2003年在巴塞罗那世界锦标赛中获得三枚金牌；2
12、004年雅典奥运会打破纪录；夺得100米游泳冠军。 其他情况：由于身体原因，现宣布退役，将到北京大学读书。 注意：1）要有标题。2）介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。 写作要求: 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容 评分标准: 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性,实战演练,Luo XuejuanOur PrideBorn in Zhejiang province, Luo Xuejuan, with the nickname, Luoluo, is a 23-year-old Chinas female Olympic swimming champion. She began t
13、o learn to swim at an early age and she began to show her great talent in 2000. She got three gold medals in Barcelona world championships. At Athens 2004 Olympics, she broke the world record and got womens 100m swimming champion. Due to health problems, Luo Xuejuan has announced retirement and she
14、will study in Beijing University.,Peer assessment,Conclusion: 1. 人物简介的写作步骤: 概, 貌, 育, 平, 评 2. 5个句子整合语言点：1）姓名性别教育经历2）个人特点爱好3）工作表现，特点4）业绩（荣誉）5）评价 3. 用非谓语/同位语结构;巧用with做定语;倒装 4. 记住常用描写人物的形容词,模拟试题1 （见卷子）,根据下列提示，写一篇介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平的文章。 1袁隆平, 1937年9月7日出生在重庆的一个贫困农民家庭。 21953年毕业于西南农学院，毕业后被分配到湘西农校任教。 31964年开始从事水稻
15、研究。1981年荣获我国第一个国家发明特等奖，被国际上誉为“杂交水稻之父”。 4生活简朴，不计名利。 注意：1）要有标题。2）介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。写作要求: 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准: 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。,答案,总结,Homework,模拟试题2（见卷子）,请根据以下提示，用英语给“中国日报”写一篇简讯介绍我国著名的跨栏运动员-刘翔，内容要点如下：刘翔中国第一个男子奥运田径冠军(track champion)籍贯：生日上海；1983最值得骄傲的事1）雅典奥运会平世界纪录2）2006年瑞士洛桑田径超级大奖赛冠军（a super g
16、rand prix in Lausanne, Switzerland），打破沉睡13年之久英国运动员保持的世界纪录下一个目标2008北京奥运会夺冠，为国争光 注意：1）要有标题。2）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。 写作要求: 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 评分标准: 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。,答案,总结,模拟试题3 （见卷子）,写信向友人介绍作家鲁迅。你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，内容提要如下 （1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人，为了国家，弃医从文。 （2）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。
17、（3）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如阿Q正传、祝福这两部影片。 （4）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。参考词汇： 阿Q正传：The True Story of AH Q祝福：The New Years Sacrifice 注意： 介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。 写作要求: 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准: 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。 Dear Bruce,I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun
18、 . _ Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will help you to know more about it.Yours, Li Ming,答案,总结,模拟试题4 （见卷子）,刘平从广告上得知上海某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。(1) 姓名：刘平，年龄27岁。(2) 2001年毕业于中山大学，后来留学日本东京大学。(3) 2005年科研成果显著，获博士学位。(4) 日本一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但他拒绝了。(5) 为了报效祖国，于2006年毅然回国。 注意：
19、介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。 写作要求： 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 评分标准： 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。 Dear Sir,How do you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. _.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you f
20、or your consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours,Liu Ping,答案,模拟试题1答案,Liuxiang-Our PrideBorn in 1983, Shanghai, Liuxiang is Chinas first male Olympic track champion. To our pride, Liuxiang set the world record of Olympics Games in Athens. Whats more, in 2006, he broke
21、the world record and got the championship at a super grand prix in Lausanne, Switzerland. It has caused public concern of the entire world that he smashed the 13-year-old world record in mens 110-meter hurdle kept by British hurdler. Though Liuxiang is a proud world record holder now, his main goal
22、hasnt changed that he will win another gold medal at the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games for our homeland.,返回,模拟试题2答案,Yuan LongpingBorn on September 7, 1937 in Chongqing, Yuan Longping was from a poor farmers family. Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, he was sent to work as a te
23、acher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan. He began his research in rice in 1964 and got the First National Special Prize for Invention in 1981. He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends. Famous as he is, he cares little for money and fame.,返回,模拟试题3答案,Dear Bruc
24、e,I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, Lu Xun with the real name Zhou Shuren abandoned the study of medicine and began to write. Not only was Lu Xun a well-Known Chinese writer, a thinker, but also t
25、he father of modern Chinese literature. His novels have been translated into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice. Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks. Since you are learning Ch
26、inese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will benefit a lot.Yours,返回,模拟试题4答案,Dear Sir,How do you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is Liu Ping, aged 27. Having graduated from Zhongshan Univer
27、sity in 2001, I was sent to Tokyo University .Through hard work for 4 years, I achieved extraordinary result in scientific research and received a doctors degree. A Japanese company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary, but I refused it. To devote myself to our China, I came back this
28、 year without any hesitation. I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Liu Ping,返回,Conclusion: 1. 人物简介的写作步骤: 概, 貌, 育, 平, 评 2. 5个句子整合语言点：1）姓名性别教育经历2）个人特点爱好3）工作表现，特点4）业绩（荣誉）5）评价 3. 用非谓语/同位语结构;巧用with做定语;倒装 4. 记住常用描写人物的形容词,Homework,备考P 31 ( 2 ),Goodbye,
