1、10月月考作文讲评,Tips,高考英语书面表达高分标准, 覆盖所有内容要点 应用较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,假如你是高三(1)班的班长李华，得知美国学生Chris作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件。 (1) 表示欢迎； (2) 介绍本班情况及与本地生活相关的信息（如气候，饮食等）； (3) 希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊。 Dear Chris,Im Li Hua, monitor of Class One, Grade Twelve._ Yours,Li Hua,I. 审题： 体裁和格式： 人称: 写作
2、内容及时态：,邮件（属书信体，格式已给出）,书面表达,you, I, we,一般现在时，一般将来时,注意： (1) 请勿提及相关的真实信息； (2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； (3) 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,在作文里不能涉及任何所在地区、学校的信息，否则高考时会被视为作弊行为。,字数不能超12行， 否则扣2分！,转换应试意识 表达言简意赅,II. 佳句背诵,1.Knowing/When /On knowing the news that youre coming to be with us as an exchange student this comi
3、ng term, we can not conceal our excitement and look forward to your arrival. 得知 我们.2. The moment we know the news that word s fail to describe our excitement ） 得知 我们.,二.介绍-同位语，非谓语，定从，with结构 1.Our class consists of 50 optimistic and easy-going students , all of whom are willing to accept you as one o
4、f us and make you feel at home. Not only will they make acquaintance with you ,but also they would like to give you a hand when you are in rouble.2. My Class , a big family consisting of 50 optimistic and easy-going students, are willing to accept you asone of us and make you feel at home.4.Consisti
5、ng of 50 students ,our class seems like a big family with a relaxing andharmonious atmosphere , which will make you feel at home.,3.Consisting of 50 optimistic and easy-going students, my class is a big family ,in which we live together in harmony.4.Class 1, where you are going to study ,is abig fam
6、ily consisting of 50 students, all of whom are willing to accept you as one of us and make you feel at home.,5. My city ,a fascinating harbor /a fascinating coastal city , enjoys pleasant weather, with bright sunshine all the year round. 6.Located in the south of China, our city is rich/abundant in
7、/is distinguished for seafood ,which I hope youll like/youll get accustomed to7. Compared with America , the weather here may be different from that in your hometown. （非谓语) And here Ill tell you something about the local life, which may be different from that in your hometown.,8. We all view this as
8、 a precious chance for us to learn about what life is like in your country, especially school life. Meanwhile, we can have our spoken English improved when we have fun together.（ what引导宾语从句， when引导状语从句。9 Indeed, we feel excited about having you as our new classmate and we are curious about what life
9、 is like in your country, especially school life. Meanwhile, you are expected to involved yourself in . , where .in this way our friendship will surely be promoted.,参考范文：Dear Chris,Im Li Hua, monitor of Class One, Grade Twelve. Im more than glad to know that youre coming to be with us as an exchange
10、 student this coming term. In fact, all my classmates are kind and look forward to your coming, and are willing to accept you as one of us.Besides, I hope that youll have no difficulty adapting to the food and weather here. It is generally not too hot in summer here and we have relatively warmer win
11、ter, compared to that in America. We have rice as our main food, which I hope youll like.Indeed, we feel excited about having you as our new classmate. For one thing, we can have a better knowledge of American culture and social customs with your help. For another, we view this as a good chance for
12、us to improve our English.Hope to see you soon.Yours,Li Hua,2. Dear Chris,Im Li Hua, monitor of Class One, Grade Twelve. Hearing that youll come to our class, all my classmates feel excited. We are kind and easy to get along with, so theres no doubt that we will make you feel at home once youre here
13、 with us.Life in China can be different from that in America. To begin with, we feed mainly on rice, which I hope youll get accustomed to. In addition, we have hot summer, but in winter its generally warmer.We all see this as a precious chance for us to learn about what life is like in your country,
14、 especially school life. Meanwhile, we can have our spoken English improved when we have fun together.,亮点：1. 句型结构有：分词作状语和宾补，so连接并列分句，同位语从句，非限制性定语从句，what引导宾语从句， once引导状语从句。 2. 短语：feel at home, be different from, feed on, get accustomed to, seeas, have fun。 3. 使用 to begin with, in addition, meanwhile等
15、词语使行文流畅。,III. 改错：下列句子是写作中易出现的普遍错误，请找出错误并改正。 1. Know that youll join in us next term, I am glad.2. There are many seafood in our city.3. You can help us in our English.4. Our class is consisted of 56 students, all of them are friendly.5. Life in China can be different from America.,正：Knowing that you
16、ll join us next term, I am glad.,正：There is much seafood in our city.,正：You can help us with our English.,正：Our class consists of , all of whom are ,正：Life different from that in America.,6. I convince that.7. Not only are they willing to makeacquaintance with you ,but also giveyou a hand when you a
17、re in trouble.8.I and my classmates welcome you to our school.,2016广州一模 假定你是李华，你要完成一项关于中英学生寒假 生活的调查。请给你的英国笔友Bill写一封信， 交流相关信息。要点如下： 1写信的原因； 2介绍中国学生的寒假生活； (1)时长：约20天 (2)活动 3询问英国学生的寒假生活。,How is everything? I m doing a project on how British andChinese students spend their winter holidays. In China, the
18、 winter vacation is usually about twenty days long. It falls during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities, such as visiting family, eating lots of foods, and most importantly, getting lucky money!During the holiday many students will also go travell
19、ing with their parents. Unfortunately they cant trave l for long though because Chinese students always have a lot of homework to do during this break. Many must even attend special holiday classes. What about in the UK? How do the students spendthe winter holidays there? Im looking forward to your
20、reply. Yours, Li Hua,II. 佳作赏析,1. Dear Chris,Im Li Hua, monitor of Class One, Grade Twelve. Knowing that youll stay in our school as an exchange student in the new term, I feel delighted. And here Ill tell you something about the local life, which may be different from that in your hometown. For exam
21、ple, we have rice as our main food. Its not hot in summer and not very cold in winter, but I think youll get accustomed to all this soon.Our class is made up of 56 students, all of whom are friendly and easy to get along with. No doubt that youll fit in once youre here. We all see your arrival as a good chance for us to know something about school and life in America.,亮点：1. 句型结构有：分词作状语，宾语从句，非限制性定语从句，but连接并列分句，once引导状语从句。 2. 短语：be different from, get accustomed to, is made up of, fit in, seeas。 3. 使用 for example, no doubt 词语使行文流畅。,
