1、【浙江省“五校联考”2019 届高三上学期第一次考试】假如你是李华，你的好友 Tom 想约你明晚和他家人共进晚餐，但你因故不能应约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1. 表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 弥补方法。注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Tom,Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your
2、family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward? If so, please
3、 dont hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date. I do long for a pleasant chat with you.Please allow me to say sorry again.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文为应用文中的书信的写作。假如你是李华，因故不能友 John 应约支与朋友一起共进晚餐，据此用英语写一封致歉信。要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，要注意谋篇布局，运用合适的连接词连接全文，
4、同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时。第二节 概要写作（满分 25 分）47. 【浙江省“五校联考”2019 届高三上学期第一次考试】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush. It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry. However, its better for people to take their time and live the
5、ir life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush. When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry, they cant make a sound decision and probably regret later. As the saying goes
6、, Haste makes waste. We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly. We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better. For example, taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than t
7、aking a plane. However, taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends. Besides, it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way. On the contrary, being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.Finally, slower life pace provides
8、 better health conditions for us. As is known to all, taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress. People think if they are not in a hurry, they will become a loser and that annoys them. But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally. According to some studies,
9、 people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases, tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense, even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter.In short, working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advanced. Yet, much stre
10、ss cant bring enjoyment, friends and health, which are much more important than money and other material advantages. Therefore, take your time and live your life at a slower pace._【答案】Despite being accustomed to the fast pace in modern society, people are recommended to lead a slower life. (要点一) Fir
11、stly, slowing down lowers the possibility of committing errors by comprehensive thinking. (要点二) Secondly, more opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace. (要点三) Lastly, better health condition physically and mentally is also what a slower life brings. (要点四) Therefore, lets take a slowe
12、r life from now on.【解析】【详解】文章涵盖了全部要点，在写作中注意使用非谓语，句式简单明了，同时能正确地使用连词firstly，secondly，lastly把文章有机地联合起来。作者抓住了关键词，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，用简洁的语言概括了文章重要信息。文章中多处运用了非谓语。如动词的 ing 形式作状语：Despite being accustomed to the fast pace in modern society, people are recommended to lead a slower life；动词的 ing 形式作主语: slowing down
13、 lowers the possibility of committing errors by comprehensive thinking；表语从句：better health condition physically and mentally is also what a slower life brings 和祈使句：lets take a slower life from now on【山西省吕梁市 2018 届高三上学期第一次阶段性测试】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 David 下周三将来你所在的城市旅游，但你有事无法去机场接他。请你给他发一封电子邮件，要求如下：1.表示歉意并说明理由
14、；2.安排他人接机。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。_【答案】Dear David,I am very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city next Wednesday.Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I cant wait to see you. However, I am sorry to tell you that I cant meet you at the airp
15、ort that day. My sister fell ill and was taken to the hospital, so I have to take care of her there. But dont worry. Ive asked my best friend, Li Lei, to pick you up and take you to the booked hotel instead. Whats more, I have recommended some places of interest in the attachment, which I think you
16、may be interested in. Of course you can also visit other tourist attractions by yourself. Meanwhile, I will call you the moment I am available.Im expecting your arrival and hope you will enjoy your stay here sincerely.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【点睛】本文是一封电子邮件，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没
17、有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I cant wait to see you.现在分词做原因状语；which I think you may be interested in.句中使用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句；I will call you the moment I am available.此处 the moment 引导时间状语从句；另外，However, Whats more, Meanwhile,等的运用为文章增色添彩。
18、【湖北省仙桃中学 2019 届高三 8 月考试英】假如你是李华，你校外教 Mr. Brown 春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒着贴的，感到很好奇，写信向你询问此事。请你给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他高考后来你家过端午节。参考词汇：端午节 the Dragon Boat Festival；福字 the character Fu注意：1.词数：100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Brown,Im really glad to receive your letter._Looking forwar
19、d to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,Im really glad to receive your letter. As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. This actually expresses their best wishes for the new year. In Chinese, the character for “upside
20、down” sounds the same as the character for “ to arrive” so this means that happiness is arriving. Quite interesting, isnt it?By the way, Id like to invite you to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival with my family after the College Entrance Exam. Its a day in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan and we us
21、ually eat zongzi and enjoy dragon boat races. Itll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本题是提纲类作文，文体是说明文。【点睛】文中使用了由 as 引导的非限制性定语从句 As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside do
22、wn during the Spring Festival. 运用了 that 引导的宾语从句 this means that happiness is arriving.以及反意疑问句 Quite interesting, isnt it?还运用了由 it 作形式主语的句子 Itll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.较高级词汇 the same as，by the way，in memory of，look forward to 也为文章增色不少。【河北省邢台市 2019 届高三上
23、学期第一次月考】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 来信向你倾诉他近来对网络社交媒体上瘾。这已严重影响了他的生活和学习。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1表示安慰2提出建议（关掉手机；发展新爱好；多和家人朋友待在一起） 。注意 1词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Peter,Im sorry to hear that you are addicted to social media and spend too much time on it so that your normal life is out of balance. Here are s
24、ome suggestions for you to give it up.Firstly, instead of surfing on the Internet, try turning off your phone or iPad for one day. Secondly, it is a good idea to develop a new hobby such as hiking and painting, which are related to nature and can help you a lot. Finally, you can go to visit your fri
25、ends or stay with your family to communicate with them face to face rather than online. The world is so wonderful, so dont get trapped in an unreal world.Hope the advice will be of help to you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文，根据题目要求可知，在你的英国朋友 Peter 来信向你倾诉他近来对网络社交媒体上瘾。这已严重影响了他的生活和学习。请你给他回一封电子
26、邮件，要点主要包括：1表示安慰；2提出建议（关掉手机；发展新爱好；多和家人朋友待在一起） 。文章要点提示很简洁，需要你适当增加细节以使内容充实，行文连贯，同时也要注意准确运用时态、语态、主谓一致，及高级句式。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，段落结构清晰，要点全面。语言合乎英语的表达规范，使用了一些较好的词汇和句型，增强了文章的连贯词。作者使用了较多的高级词汇：be addicted to；out of balance； get trapped in；instead of 等。文章第一段第一句话使用了结果状语从句 so that your normal life is out of balance，
27、第二段使用了定语从句 which are related to nature and l can help you a lot.，作者还使用了祈使句 dont get trapped in an unreal world.整篇文章显示了作者很高的驾驭英语的能力。【山东省淄博实验中学、淄博五中 2019 届高三上学期第一次教学诊断】假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Jonah 得知你即将到美国旅游。他来信询问你是否方便带点中国特产给他，请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信。1. 表示愿意；2. 介绍特产（茶叶、丝绸等） ；3. 询问要求（种类、数量、预算等） 。注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增
28、加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已为你写好， 但不计入总词数。参考词汇：特产 local special productsDear Jonah,Im glad to know you are interested in Chinese local special products, _Looking forward to meeting you in the USA.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Jonah,Im glad to know you are interested in Chinese local special products, and Im pleased
29、 to help you buy some. Here are some tips.Our tea will be a good choice, for it is good for health, but I wonder whether you like green tea or black tea. Besides, various silk clothes are also popular with foreigners. Bowls, plates and cups made of china are nice, too. Which do you prefer? If you li
30、ke them, please tell me in detail. In addition, these items are of different prices. Would you like to tell me your budget on them as well as the amount you need? Please let me know what you would like to have and I will try my best to meet your requirements.Looking forward to meeting you in the USA
31、.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文。要求写一封回信。亮点说明本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型 1. Our tea will be a good choice, for it is good for health, but I wonder whether you like green tea or black tea. 本句由 but 连接的两个并列句，且后一句中又含有 whether 引导的宾语从句。2. Would you like to tell me your budget on them as well as the amount
32、you need? 本句中的 would like to do 是写作常用经典句式。 3. Please let me know what you would like to have and I will try my best to meet your requirements.本句中有 what 引导的宾语从句和 and 连接的并列句。 经典短语：is good for 对有好处；be popular with 受的欢迎；in detail 详细的；try ones best to do 尽某人所能做某事。这些句式和短语的恰当运用，不仅为文章增色，还展示了作者具有较高的语言运用能力和较高
33、的写作水平【点睛】写作最基本的是语言基础，它是由词组句，由句成文，虽然写作历来是考生望而生畏的题，但掌握了一定方法，平时多加训练，把握好基本功，作文就不再是难题。写作要写好以下句型，就不失为一篇好文章：写好简单句（记住五种基本句型） ；写好并列句（正确使用并列连词） ；写好 it 句型（记住常用，常考的 it 的句型） ；写好复合句（弄懂状语从句、定语从句和名词性从句） 。平时练习写作时可以先从简到繁，先练习写句子，再成段，然后成文，平时写作基本上涵盖这几种句型就能完成一篇写作。本范文就很好的运用了这些句型，文中有 whether 和 what 引导的宾语从句 ，and 连接的并列句。【黑龙江
34、省牡丹江市第一高级中学 2019 届高三 10 月月考】假定你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力)；2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；3. 希望获准。注意：（1） 词数不少于 100；（2） 可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；（3） 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,The other day I happened
35、to read your advertisement on the Internet, saying that you are holding a summer camp aimed at students from around the world, and Im interested to participate in it.Im Li Hua, a middle school student in China. As a teenager, Im interested in making friends with kids of my age from around the world. Your camp will provide a good chance for me to know a lot about other countries and tell them something about China. Whats more, I can improve my English, communicating with people from other countries.I do h
