1、2016年海南高考英语试卷分析 书面表达部分,陈琦 海南中学,书面表达,2016年的书面表达：,第二节 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1主题：环境保护；2展览时间；3投稿邮箱：.注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,情景设置： 写作目的 2. 写作对象 3. 用英语写作的必要性。,真实性和交际性,材料输入： 规范性和开放性,难度对比,得分情况,2016年一档的考生占总人数的43.6%，比2015高3.4个百分比。 1-3档的考生约占
2、考生总数的80%左右。 4-5档的考生2016比2015年略高出2个百分比，初显两极分化。,评卷中发现的问题：,1. 审题不到位，遗漏要点。 2 . 搬用短文，瞒天过海。 3. 扩展不当，增加无关细节。 4. 中式英语，堆砌单词。I want to you can give me to send .I think please you have a photo.Please come from my school look.I meet a thing. Can you help me do thing? I will thank you very much.Title is protect
3、environment, show time at 7.28.,评卷中发现的问题：,5.书写潦草，涂改严重。 6. 基本词汇拼写错误，或写成别的词导致信息误传。例如: writing-writting hold/held不分: is hold/will heldinvite-invent, protect-prevent ，provide 摄影展写 meeting或party 7. 语言运用能力欠缺，语法错误随处可见。,教学和备考启示：,循序渐进, 按照词、句、段、篇章的顺序着手训练。 学生的写作水平提高不是到高三才强化的，而是靠平时的积累过程中形成的。三个阶段:高一学写日志(journal)
4、,高二自由写作(free writing),高三提示写作(prompted writing)。 注重激发学生的写作欲望。欲望(动机)-素材-如何表达(语言)-如何表达好(逻辑)。 培养学生审题能力-列足要点-添加合理的细节。 让学生学会反思。 改进书面表达的教学评价.首先关注学生描述的质量性(quality of description)其次是流畅性(fluency)最后才是规范性(language control),满分作文： Dear Peter,Im writing to get you informed of the International Middle School Studen
5、ts Photography exhibition conducted by the photography club of our school. And Id like to ask you to provide some of your works.I know youve been photographing for a long time and that youve become a skillful photographer with many pictures published by some well-known websites. Therefore, theres no
6、 doubt that with your pictures, the exhibition can be more appealing.The theme of it is protecting our environment and it will be held on July 1st, 2016. Please send your works to before June 26th, 2016. We would be grateful to appreciate your wonderful works.Hope to hear from you soon.Yours Li Hua,
