1、雅思小作文： 饼状图一例Many women want or need to continue working after they have children.The chart below shows the working after they have children. The chartbelowshowsthe workingpatternofmotherswithyoungchildren.作文写作要点：介绍各扇面及总体的关系。各个扇面之间的比较，同类扇面在不同时间、不同地点的比较。重点突出特点最明显的扇面：最大的、 最小的、互相成倍的。Thebasic trends ofth
2、efour charts:Justafter bearing children, back to work.Theolder childthemoreMostpart-time during child 59Child10+, full timedouble, part-time lessthe introduction can be written like this:Even just after having a child, a large number women return to work. As the childgrows older, the percentage of m
3、others who choose or need to continue working rises.At least until the child is ten, the larger number of working mothers take part-timeoccupations. When the child is ten years or older, the number of the full-timers morethan doubles whilethat ofthe part-timers decrease.Each chart entails / contains
4、 instruction, which illustrates what the chart involvesrather than theover trends.Writing Paragraphs:Informationanalyzed according to thepiecharts.Child02, 30% back to work (19p.t.,11f.t.)34, p.t. updramatically to 35%, f.t. same59, p.t. upconsistently to48%, f.t. slightincrease to 14%10+, p.t. slig
5、htly3%down, f.t.double to29%Paragraph 1：When the youngest child is at most 2 years old, 30% of the womenreturn towork. 19%full-time, and 11%as part-timers.Paragraph 2：The percentage of full timers remains the same until the child turns fiveand increased slightly to 14% when the child is at most 9 ye
6、ars old, but the percentageof part-time working mothers grows dramatically to 35 and continues growing to 48%bythetimethechild is9.Paragraph 3：A change occurs after the child grows to ten. The number of full-timeworking mothers doubles in percentage to 29, while that of the part-timers is reducedsli
7、ghtlytoby3% to 45%.Conclusion：It appears that, when the child turns to ten, women have much fewermaternal responsibilities than the years before.Sentence Patterns：Introduction：The (two) pie charts show (reveal, suggest, illustrate, demonstrate, indicate,describe, relate) the proportion (percentage)
8、ofAand B in (7) (categories), dividedintoand(oneis,another is)Comparison：1、The biggest difference between (2) groups is in , whereAmakes up % while(whereas) B constitutes % (makes up=constitutes=accounts for)the highest percentage / amount of A, which was approximately %, was for. (=in)/was found in
9、2、The percentage ofAin is more than twice the percentage of B, the ration is %to% (%compared to %)3、In, while there is (not) a great deal of difference between the percentage ofAandB (theformer is %and thelatter is%).in , while a greater percentage ofAthan B are found in (the former is % and thelatteris %).4、There are moreA(in ), reaching %, compared with% ofB5、By contrast,Ahas increased (declined), from %in to %in .Compared with B,A Conclusion:TosumupIn conclusionIt appears thatThetwo charts clearly show
