1、- 1 -2014 高考英语短文改错训练（10）及答案（精品）1.短文改错文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在此处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went
2、out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am
3、told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.【参考答案】1.Ten years ago, I had(去掉 had) worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of（the） factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and(but) could see nothing. Lucky (luckily)for me, the w
4、arning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late(later), four police car(cars) arrived at the front gate. They searched for(去掉 for) the factory carefully, tried(trying) to find something unusual. In the end, I am(was) told that the rain had brought about the s
5、hort circuit, that(which) caused the accident.2.短文改错文中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。- 2 -删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改 10 处，多者从第 11 处不 计分。In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers
6、competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and necessary.Lets take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student wont make a remarkable progre
7、ss if he is in a class without competition. Thats because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we dont cooperate with each other, its impossible for us learn from each other. And thats why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the
8、modern world are the result of cooperation.To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.【参考答案】2.In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considersancompetition the source of a s
9、eries of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if weproblems Howeverstress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and stressed bothnecessary.Lets take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student wont make a - 3 -remarkable pr
10、ogress if he is in a class without competition. Thats because competition, and orrather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we dont makingcooperate with each other, its impossible for us learn from each other. And thats why most of tothe great discoveries or inve
11、ntions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the successfullyrelationship between competition and cooperation.3.短文改错该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改： 在错的词
12、下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第 11 处起) 不计分。I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctors advice, I gradually kick
13、ed the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor - 4 -away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker
14、 instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.【参考答案】3.I like eating fruit and vegetables what （改为 which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改为 health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉 into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegeta
15、bles, but follow（改为 following） the doctors advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改为 goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改为 disliking 或前加 who/that） fruit and vegetables. On（加 the） contrary, influenced by this o
16、r that kind of advertisement, many were（改为 are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改为 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them（改为 it）.4.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：
17、在缺词处加一个漏字符号（） ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分.To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca colaWhen our food comeI started walking towards a tableFortunately, I fell
18、over and my dish slipped with my hands and the food landed on a mans white shirtI was frightened and unsure how to do next, but just then all I heard was “Its OK” after the man disappeared into the restroomA few minute later, - 5 -the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it fastI thought he was
19、 going to ask for his parents telephone numberInstead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said “Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish his food【参考答案】4.To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to(此处加 a)fast-food restaurant for some ham
20、burgers and coca colaWhen our food come(came)I started walking towards a tableFortunately(Unfortunately), I fell over and my dish slipped with (off 或 from) my hands and the food landed on a mans white shirtI was frightened and unsure how (what)to do next, but just then all I heard was “Its OK” after
21、 (before)the man disappeared into the restroomA few minute (minutes)later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it (去掉 it)fastI thought he was going to ask for his (my) parents telephone numberInstead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said “Buy yourself some new hamburgers”,
22、 Then he walked away without even finish (finishing)his food5.短文改错下面文中共有 10 处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/） ，并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。Dear editor,Next year I will go to university and becoming a college st
23、udent, and I have never been away from my parents. I dont know how to adapt myself to my - 6 -university life. I hear many freshmen are at loss what to do when we are at university. They cant take care of themselves in their everyday life, feel lonely and homesick. Clothes, money or mobile phone are
24、 sometimes gone. And because of different climates and the food, they often feel sick. Some even rented rooms outside the campus, but I dont think its so safely. Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to get used the university life in the future?Yours sincerely,Li
25、Hua【参考答案】5.1. becoming 改为 become 2. and 改为 but3. at 后加 a4. we 改为 they5. feel 改为 feeling 或 feel 前加 and6. phone 改为 phones7. 去掉 the8. rented 改为 rent9. safely 改为 safe10. used 后加 to6.短文改错下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处
26、错误及其修改均限一词；2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从 11 处起)不计分。- 7 -This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. A
27、t once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice peopl
28、e in your life. Its true what honesty is more important than money! 【参考答案】6.This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old deeplyman was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, hi
29、s money was lying in all direction. At once the people worse directions/all 改 anyaround rush to pick the money up when the old man stood there, not know what to do. rushed knowingSurprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the upmoney again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of missing /lostnice people in your life. Its true what honesty is more important than money! our that- 8 -
