1、CET-4,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,2,第一部分 写作分值及评分标准介绍; 第二部分 写作步骤; 厘清思路,把握文章结构 注意表达,用亮点词句得高分 第三部分 写作模板 第四部分 热点话题及平时练习,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,3,第一部分 写作,写作介绍: 1. 分值 15% 2. 考试时长 30分钟 3. 考试时间 9:10-9:40(如果有可能,尽量在9:35分监考老师提醒时完成草稿,并填到答题卡一上,给听力预留5分钟时间) 4. 大纲要求:选用考生所熟
2、悉的题材,要求考生根据所提供的信息及提示(如:提纲,情景,图片或图表等)写出一篇短文,四级120-180词;,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,4,第一部分 写作,5. 评分标准,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,5,第一部分 写作,漂漂亮亮 (14分)， 清清爽爽（11分），马马虎虎（8分），糊里糊涂（5分）， 一塌糊涂（2分）,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,6,第一部分 写作,写作练习: 一. 厘清思路 二.
3、 注意表达(1)换词(2)套句(3)背篇 三. 主要考查三种题型,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,7,第一部分 写作,第一步: 厘清思路,把握文章结构!3* 9,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,8,第一部分 写作,第一步: 厘清思路,把握文章结构! eg. Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rus
4、h hour, you can see that thousands of people- man and woman, old and young-ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kindom of bicycles“.“总-分-总“格式,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,9,第一部分 写作,第二步: 注意表达,用亮点词句得高分!换词 popular(adj.)- popularity(n.)years(n.)-decad
5、e(n.)the young(n.)-youngsters(n.)people(n.)-citizen(n.)idea/opinion(n.)-concept(n.)in the modern times-in the contemporary society in the present-day societyin this day and age,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,10,第一部分 写作,换形容词 good = conducive =beneficial=advantageous bad = detrimental=
6、 baneful =undesirablesurprising = amazing = extraordinary = miraculous beautiful = attractive = gorgeous = eye-catching poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-strickenrich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-offtop = excellent = eminent = outstanding,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserve
7、d,11,第一部分 写作,换动词improve = enhance= promote = strengthen = optimizecause = trigger = endangersolve =resolve =address = tackle =cope with = deal withdestroy = tear down = knock down = eradicatedevelop = cultivate = foster = nurture=nourishencourage = motivate = stimulate = spurthink = assert= hold = c
8、laim = arguecomplete = fulfill = accomplish= achievekeep = preserve = retain = hold=maintain=sustaindestroy = impair = undermine = jeopardize=ruinreduce=ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,12,第一部分 写作,换名词(1) influence= impact danger = perils =hazard pol
9、lution = contamination human beings= mankind = human race old people= the old = the elderly = the aged = senior citizens happiness = cheerfulness = well-being eachers = instructors = educators = lecturerseducation = schooling = family parenting =upbringing,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reser
10、ved,13,第一部分 写作,换名词(2) young people = youngsters = youths = adolescents advantage = merits = superiority = virtue responsibility = obligation = duty = liability ability = capacity = power = skilljob = career = employment = professionenjoyment = pastimes = recreation= entertainmentchildren = offspring
11、 = descendant= kid,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,14,第一部分 写作,换短语 be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated with struggle for = aspire after = strive for = spare no efforts for embark on = take up = set about = go in for=engage inin contemporary society = in pre
12、sent-day society= in this day and agea host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,15,第一部分 写作,套句 eg. Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that
13、 thousands of people- man and woman, old and young-ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kindom of bicycles“.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,16,第一部分 写作,套句 Bicycles are very popular in China. 此句为主旨句,起“总起全文“的作用 可套用此句型,把主语按照要求进行改变即可, 如 Online shopping i
14、s very popular in China.Watching movie is very popular in Wuhan Hubei Province, China.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,17,第一部分 写作,套句 Bicycles are very popular in China. In China, bicycles have gained great/wired popularity among Chinese people.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Re
15、served,18,第一部分 写作,套句 2011-06: 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2010-06: 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2009-12: 建设绿色校园很重要 2009-06: 越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是为什么?2008-12: 一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用2008-06: 娱乐活动多种多样,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,19,第一部分 写作,套句 2011-06: 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 In the recent decade, online shopping has gained wide po
16、pularity among youngsters.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,20,第一部分 写作,套句 2010-06: 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 In China, English learning has gained wide popularity among students. However,.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,21,第一部分 写作,套句 2009-12: 建设绿色校园很重要 In the contemporary socie
17、ty, the concept of green campuses has gained wide popularity among universities or colleges.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,22,第一部分 写作,套句 2009-06: 越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是为什么? In the present-day society, free admission to museums is engjoying great popularity among Chinese citizens.,2018/1
18、0/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,23,第一部分 写作,套句2008-12: 一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 During the past decades, disposable plastic baged gained wide popularity among people in the whole world.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,24,第一部分 写作,套句2008-06: 娱乐活动多种多样 In this day and age, a variety of recrea
19、tional activities have gained wide popularity among individuals.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,25,第一部分 写作,套句试着翻译一句歌词: 你在我眼里是最美!eg. In my eyes, you are the most beautiful.In my eyes, no one is more beautiful than you.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,26,第一部分 写作,套句句型提炼:
20、No is/are more than .原句: Bicycles are very popular in China.In China, no means of transport is more popular and important than bicycles.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,27,第一部分 写作,套句 再试着翻译一句歌词: 我能想到最浪漫的事,就是和你一起慢慢变老! I can think the most romantic thing is growing old with you!In my eye
21、s, no romance is more romantic than aging with you minute by minute, year by year and millennium by millennium.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,28,第一部分 写作,背篇 四级作文主要考查的几种形式为: 议论文(对比选择, 现象解释,问题解决及原因解释)-陈述现象,解释现象,总结现象; 图表题-陈述图表所示现状,解释原因,总结; 信件题-注意信件格式;,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Righ
22、ts Reserved,29,第一部分 写作,背篇 议论文模版(一)When it comes to the issue of , different people have different opinions. (进一步介绍这种现象或观点).Some people think that . They hold this opinion because (they think) . Others, however, take a negative / positive attitude to . (Others, nevertheless, are more pessimistic / op
23、timistic about it). From their point of view, . Besides, .,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,30,第一部分 写作,In my opinion/Personally /From my point view /If asked my attitude, I am more in favor of . I stand in / hold this attitude /opinion / view because . Its true that , but it doesnt mea
24、n that . Therefore / In a word/ In short, . Instead, we should .,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,31,第一部分 写作,背篇 议论文模版(二)In recent years, （描写现状或趋势）. This has caused a lot of problems.First, （结果1）. For example, （细节，说明结果1）. Second, （结果2）. （细节，说明结果2）. Finally, （结果3）. （细节，说明结果3）. Since is s
25、uch a serious problem, we should take effective measures to . First, we should （措施1）. Besides, （措施2）. And finally, （措施3）.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,32,第一部分 写作,Try to write a passage according to the template 2 given above. “ Dear Andy- How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We
26、 both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time you computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat. Love, Mom and Dad.“,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,33,第一部分 写作,In recent years/In this day and age/ In the contemporary soc
27、iety, computer using/Internet/surfing online has gained a wide popularity among youngsters. Most people consider it as convenient. Though this has caused/triggered a lot of problems/issues.第一段 总起,讲述现象,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,34,第一部分 写作,First/Firstly/First of all, electronic co
28、mmunication is less direct than face-to-face communication. For example, if you type on your computer to discuss an issue with your friend, it would cost you more time than just saying it to him or her face to face. Words can never convey the full message, and instant messages usually cause misunder
29、standing. Second/Secondly/Further more, we are not robots, sometimes we just need to talk to a real human being rather than only a picture on the computer. Only when we talk face to face with gestures, can we express our fellings completely. In fact, face-to-face communication but not electronic com
30、munication makes us feel connected. 第二段 表达对此现象的理解, 并给出原因,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,35,第一部分 写作,Since indulging in /addicting to computer is such a serious problem, we should take effective measures to prevent the youngsters from addicting. We shouldnt spend too much time online r
31、ather than relating to people in the real world.第三段 总结,表明自己的态度, 希望或方向,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,36,第一部分 写作,背篇 议论文模版(三)Nowadays, great importance has been attached to （目前的现象及存在的问题）. Many ways can contribute to (要解决的问题), but the following ones may be effective.First of all, （方法1）.
32、 Besides, （方法2）.Finally, （方法3）.In conclusion/ To sum up, the ways I have mentioned above should never be separated from each other. （希望）.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,37,第一部分 写作,背篇 议论文模版(四)Recently there has been a tremendous growth in （指出第一次数据变化）. What amazes us most is （第二次数据变化）.
33、 It is true that （点明变化趋势）.There are many reasons explaining . The main reason is . Whats more, . Thirdly , . As a result, . Considering all this, I believe （指出大学生在使用计算机中有困难和问题）. For one thing, (困难一）. For another, （困难二）. In conclusion, （提 出建议）.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,38,第一部分 写
34、作,背篇 议论文模版(五)DateDear ., I am very glad to hear that you want to seek some suggestions about_ in order to . From my point of view, . Also, to you, I highly recommend that . On one hand, . On the other hand, . Besides, it is unnecessary for you to . Consequently, I believe that . I hope that my opini
35、ons are of help to yo, and please feel free to contact with me for more questions.Sincerely Yours, .,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,39,第一部分 写作,四种最常见话题分类 一. 教育1. 大学开设的专业应该“由谁决定“2. 大学生应该如何面对刚入学的困难“3. “实践课“是否应该取代“文化课“4.学生是否应该为社区作“义工“5.学生是住校好还是与父母同住好6. 大学是理科重要还是文科重要7.如何看待年轻人喜欢购物的现象,2018/
36、10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,40,第一部分 写作,四种最常见话题分类 二.社会生活1. 博物馆的功能 2.尊重老年人3.人们如何做善事 4.是否只有政府能够解 决住房问题5. 政府是否应该支持运动员 6.年轻人的失业问题7.是否应该鼓励老年人退休 8.公司是否应该提供医 疗服务9.青少年犯罪问题 10.老年人数量增加的 问题11.缴税 12.时尚,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,41,第一部分 写作,四种最常见题型分类 三. 科技影响1.图书是否被电脑所取代 2. 外来媒体的影
37、响 3. 手机对人们生活的影响 4. 电脑可以翻译外文,因此不需要学习外语 5. 监视器的广泛使用 6. 电视机使家人关系疏远 7.使用机器人的利弊 8.航空运输是否应该被限制 9.登月是否对日常生活有影响,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,42,第一部分 写作,四种最常见题型分类 四. 文化传统 1. 国际旅游的利弊 2.房屋的建筑风格 3. 文化的融合是否促进城市发展 4. 学习语言是否应该了解其文化 5. 是否应该鼓励穿传统服装 6. 移民后人们是否应该接受新文化,还是组成自己的小圈子,2018/10/18,copyright
38、 2006 All Rights Reserved,43,第一部分 写作,三种其它类型话题 一.生物与环境 1. 提高燃料价格与环境问题的关系 2.动物实验是否该禁止 3.我们应该如何对待动物 4. 我们如何看待“垃圾社会“ 问题,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,44,第一部分 写作,三种其它类型话题 二.男女平同等 1. 男女领导的管理风格 2. 女子是否应该被指定作高层 3. 学校是否应该招收同等数量的男女生,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,45,第一部分 写作,三种
39、其它类型话题 三. 政府及抽象话题 1. 历史能否帮助我们 2. 幸福是由什么决定的 3. 富国是否应该给穷国帮助 4. 政府是否应该花钱购买武器,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,46,第一部分 写作,平时练习 （brain storm） 1. 以话题为中心词进行拓展hardworking tired money experience exercise good habit ability wide view optimistic stress pressure load waste study time speaking abil
40、ity practicing ability happy make friedns improvement confident solve problem gain knowledge communication,part-time job,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,47,第一部分 写作,平时练习 （brain storm） 2. 以单词为中心，展开写句子 Hardworking is very hard for me. I often get tired. But I can earn money from that. Ex
41、cept for this, there are also lots of advantages about part-time job. I can get lots of expericen about working and it can also exercise myself.,part-time job,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,48,第一部分 写作,平时练习 （brain storm） 3. 以句子为支撑，梳理文章结构 Nowadays, more and more college students are ta
42、king part-time jobs. On this phenomenon, different people hold different viewpoints. In my opinions, part-time job cut both ways. As for me, hardwording is very hard. I often get tired. But I can earn money from part-time job.,part-time job,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,49,第一部分 写作,I
43、 can think the most romantic thing is growing old with you! 1. 直译,不符合英文表达习惯; 2. old 有年长且无用之意; Euphemism: old people=senior citizen die= pass away go to the toilet= go to the restroom= powder ones face,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,50,第一部分 写作,Bicycles are very popular in China. 此句为主旨
44、句,起“总起全文“的作用 可套用此句型,把主语按照要求进行改变即可, 如 Online shopping is very popular in China.Watching movie is very popular in Wuhan, China.,2018/10/18,copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved,51,第一部分 写作,That is why China is called “the kindom of bicycles“.此句为总结句,起“总结以上内容“的作用.但注意此句中有一个小错误:当表达专有名词时,首尾单词的首字母需大写,专有名词中实义词首字线需大写(名词,动词,形容词,副词,代词及数词),虚词首字线不用大写(介词,冠词及连词),所以应为“The Kindom of Bicycles“,为免犯错,也可全写成大写字母,如“THE KINDOM OF BICYCLES“,
