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1、Composition (30 minutes),15%,评分标准,阅卷级别共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。 2分条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎 或在部分句 子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。 5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。 11分切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。 14分切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错误。 注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。,阅卷老师的评分标准,语言

2、 (基本正确,丰富多变)字数 (120-180)切题 (表达思想清楚,不跑题)连贯性(连词,过渡性的单词或短语),阅卷老师的评分标准(语言),基本正确基本正确使用中小学词汇及句型,也可及格。错误太多会减分。语言错误:语法,拼写,标点。语法错误:时态,冠词,主谓一致,名词单复数等。(最大的问题不是写的太简单,而是严重错误太多),阅卷老师的评分标准(语言),2. 丰富多变 (词汇和句型)同一词语最好不要重复出现,使用近义词同义词替换(无法替换的关键词除外)。(用代词;earthquake-quake)不要拘泥于主谓宾句型,可使用定语从句;状语从句;现在分词短语,过去分词短语和不定式短语作状语。(c

3、ompared with, judging from ,to achieve this),注意:作文应当长短句结合四级10句左右,六级12句左右。 短句字数10个左右,长句字数15-20左右。 (全是长句或短句都不好),考生应对,分析范文,熟悉特点。记忆经典词汇,句型,框架,范文。背诵并默写经典范文,对照原文纠错。(在理解的基础上熟练掌握) 4. 写作时尽量减少构思时间,仔细推敲语言,降低错误。 5. 切忌口语化。,考试作文类型,有提纲(outline)中文或英文,按照提纲分段写作即可 2. 无提纲(outline)需自己构思提纲然后根据提纲分段写作,考试作文类型,现象-原因及影响-你的观点(

4、或你的建议) 图表类(描述图表信息并说明主题-分析原因-结论和表态)According to the table/pie chart(圆形分格统计图表)/line graph(线状图表)/bar graph(条形统计图), we can see/conclude that 3. 图画类 (图画描述-分析原因-结论和表态)We can see from the cartoon that As is vividly depicted (描绘,描述) in the cartoon(漫画), we can observe that ,考试作文类型,4. 名言谚语类 (解释说明,提出观点-论述观点-结论

5、) 5. 情境式话题作文suppose (2014年6月新题型) 6. 观点类,1.现象-原因及影响-你的观点(或你的建议),Outline 盗版现象严重分析原因和影响你的建议,writing,Say No to Pirated ProductsNowadays, the problem of piracy has become more and more serious. There are books, tapes, VCDs and other high-tech products being pirated. For instance, when a new product comes

6、 into the market, most probably, its pirated counterpart(对照物) will soon put on its appearance in the market, too.Piracy has caused great loss to legitimate producers, inventors and writers in many ways. To start with, the pirated products often cost much less than the genuine ones so that they enjoy

7、 a better trading position in spite of their relatively poor quality. The genuine products, on the contrary, sell poorly. What s worse, pirated books sometimes ruin the authors reputation due to some misprints. In the long run, pirated products may have a negative impact on customers. Those legitima

8、te producers creativity and enthusiasm may be deeply hurt by the fact that some customers are more interested in the pirated products for the sake of low prices.In my opinion, it s high time that everyone started the battle against piracy. First, customers should resist the pirated products. Secondl

9、y, the government should take effective measures to put an end to piracy. Finally, laws must be strictly enforced to completely ban piracy. Only in this way can we wipe the pirated products out of the society.,writing,Say No to Pirated ProductsPara1. Nowadays, the problem of piracy has become more a

10、nd more serious. There are books, tapes, VCDs and other high-tech products being pirated. For instance, when a new product comes into the market, most probably, its pirated counterpart(对照物) will soon put on its appearance in the market, too.,Para 2. Piracy has caused great loss to legitimate produce

11、rs, inventors and writers in many ways. To start with, the pirated products often cost much less than the genuine ones so that they enjoy a better trading position in spite of their relatively poor quality. The genuine products, on the contrary, sell poorly. What s worse, pirated books sometimes rui

12、n the authors reputation due to some misprints. In the long run, pirated products may have a negative impact on customers. Those legitimate producers creativity and enthusiasm may be deeply hurt by the fact that some customers are more interested in the pirated products for the sake of low prices.,P

13、ara 3. In my opinion, it s high time that everyone started the battle against piracy. First, customers should resist the pirated products. Secondly, the government should take effective measures to put an end to piracy. Finally, laws must be strictly enforced to completely ban piracy. Only in this w

14、ay can we wipe the pirated products out of the society.,2. 图画类,3. 图表类,Outline 结合表格描述出国旅游热这个现象 分析出国旅游热的原因和影响 自己的观点(家长送孩子上补习班现象),Traveling Abroad,According to the chart/diagram/table (/graph), we can find that the number of people who choose to travel abroad was about 10000 in 1995. The number increas

15、ed to nearly 40000 in 2000. And in 2005, the number further climbed above (攀升至) 120000.,There are several reasons for the shocking rise. To begin with, the improvement of the life standards makes traveling abroad affordable to more and more people. Moreover, the convenient transportation facilities

16、make more destinations (目的地) accessible. The last but not the least, after visiting most famous scenic spots throughout our country, foreign cultures seem to appeal more to many citizens. And gradually, they begin to treat traveling abroad as a new fashion.,As far as I am concerned, this trend is be

17、neficial for people on the whole. On one hand, it is a very interesting and romantic way to spend ones vacation. On the other hand, it enlarges peoples vision by having a look at what is going on in a different country.,4.名言,谚语类,The Way to Success“Give me five hours to chop down a tree, and I will s

18、pend the first four sharpening the axe”.(CET6 2011. 12),The Way to Success,Outline 解释说明,提出观点 论述观点。 1)充分的准备是成功的关键2)机遇总是留给有准备的人3) 举例 (如面试前做好充分的准备有利于面试的成功) 3. 结论。(重申准备对于成功的重要作用及如何做),5. 情境式话题作文,Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit China/your hometown/your campus, what is the most interes

19、ting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? 1)First and foremost,Additionally,Furthermore, 2) First of all,Secondly,Finally, 3) To begin with,Besides,Whats more,Writing (15%),1) 字迹清晰,不要出现怪异字体(5分)写了错字掉字怎么办?2)内容切题 (8分)提纲-outline, 没有提纲怎么办?(分析型)eg. 3) 框架合理(12分)提纲决定文章的框架,至少写三段,4) 连贯性连词及过渡性短

20、语或词汇的使用(In fact, As a result, However, Therefore, Additionally, Furthermore, Whats more, Whats worse; Compared with, Judging from, To achieve this; but, and, when, because, as, since, if, while, so that, in order that) 5)段落长度安排合理 (3段论),Writing,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 20 minutes to

21、 write a short essay on the following question. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Suppose you are going to graduate from University next year, will you choose to become a postgraduate or look for a job?,Outline 找工作原因和理由工作后的生活很美好(经济上独立;学以致用;贡献社会;就业紧张,工作难找),Outline 考研原因和理由成为研究生后的生活和学习(进一步学习完善自己的知识;长远来看,硕士学位更有利于今后的发展;认为学术成就比挣钱更有意义),

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