1、Writing,Band 4,Diagnosis: Why many students fail to write well,1. illogical in writing and unreasonable in planning 2. simple in sentence structure 3. limited in vocabulary 4. unavoidable in mistakes of various kinds,Illogical in writing & unreasonable in planning,Direction: Is Diploma Everything? N
2、owadays, a crazy pursuit for diplomas and certificates is prevailing in our society. Students in school are studying hard for them, and meanwhile a considerable number of adults go back to school for higher diplomas.,As far as I am concerned, factors leading to this social phenomenon can be listed a
3、s follows. First, with science and technology developing so rapidly today, more knowledge means more opportunities for better jobs and quicker promotion. As an old saying points out, an investment in knowledge always pays the best interest.,Therefore, a diploma is always regarded as a passport to pe
4、rsonal advancement. Besides this, there is one more point I think I ought to mention. As the largest developing country in the world, if our country is to consolidate its feet on the world stage, it must start right now to lay a solid foundation for the development of its knowledge economy.,In concl
5、usion, nowadays people get crazy for diplomats just as a result of intention that they can find a good job. Nonetheless, a diploma does not necessarily mean that you are competent for the job. Hence, a diploma is something but not everything. In other words, what really counts is to be aware how to
6、put what you have learned into practice.,Simple in sentence structure,Differences in Sentence structure between English and ChineseIn the doorway lay at least twelve umbrellas of all sizes and colors. 门口放着一堆伞，至少十二把，五颜六色，大小不一。,Confidence important. Confidence is important. Confidence is very, very an
7、d very important.,The pretty girl who is standing on the platform quietly, with her shiny hair flowing gently in the breeze, is my first love, whose sweet smile I will never forget, though I dont think she is the right person for me to marry.,Confidence is of vital importance. It is of vital importa
8、nce for young students to be confident. Whether we can achieve success or not depends, to some extent, on whether we are confident or not. Confidence is the key to success. We can live without money while we cannot live without confidence. 英语句子语法逻辑性和主从层次感,Limited in vocabulary,fat heavy overweight p
9、lump chubby a big bone sexy voluptuous,VERY使用过度： I am a college student and my home is very far from the college, so I have to live in a dormitory. And one of my dormmates is very, a very energetic girl. She is always very active in daytime. Meanwhile. She is also very excited in the night. Almost e
10、very day, I sleep with her voice. Oh not voice. Its even noisy because she wants to express her ideas and her excitement in her dreams, its very terrible for me, because I want to sleep very well, but she always in the middle night suddenly made a terrible sound. So I always awaked or disturbed by h
11、ers dream. I remembered one night I just fall asleep a few moment. Suddenly she made a big voice and then silent and then she sang song she sang a song and its an English song, although its very beautiful, but you know its in the middle night midnight, so I feel very terrible, so I trembled in the b
12、ed and after that I feel very very threatened, so I made a noisy a noise too and wanted to wake her up and and then I will go to sleep again. But its very its very difficult for me to wake her up because she is in her dream and very deeply. So it makes me very angry. Every night I always find that i
13、n the morning that my eyes were very, were very poor, so I want I always want to say to her that you are very active, too active to let me go sleep. So please made your dream silently.,作文中最常用的10个2词词块：,作文中最常用的10个4词词块：,作文词长比较,三个语料库差异显著的常用动词标准频数对比,make let enable ensure allow help make it possible / im
14、possible / easy / hard for sb. to do sth. The plane makes it possible for me to cover 500 kilometers an hour.,享受公费医疗 be entitled to free medical care 我够不到那个苹果。 I cannot get the apple. I cannot reach the apple. The apple is beyond my reach. 红旗、红茶、红糖、红豆 黄教授,Chinglish,Keeping pets has these advantages
15、and disadvantages, but there are so many people like it.In their oppinion, pets always make a lot of noises affect their rest.,Everything has two sides. Keeping pets is also. Everything has two sides. so does keep pets. But every coin has two sides. The same to keeping pets.,Unavoidable in mistakes
16、of various kinds,1. Spelling 2. Grammar 3. Appropriateness,society development modern success achieve success succeed be successful in my opinion,今天我不能上学了，因为我病了。I cannot go to school today. Because I am ill. I cannot go to school today, because I have fallen ill. I dont want to stay with you because
17、 I am lonely. I dont want to stay with you, because you are too realistic.,Nowadays, more and more people like to raise pets. for example: dogs、cats They always bring us helpness and happiness.Suppose you have a dog, when you feel sad or loney, you can say something to it, if you do this you may fee
18、l better. One day, a male cat comes out. The female one might follow the male one, and never go back.,Suppose you have a dog. When you feel sad or lonely, you can say something to it. If you do this, you may feel better.,A Collection of Good Sentence Structure,CET-4,Good Sentence Structure 1: “there
19、 be”1。There is abundant evidence indicating that + 简单句（主语谓语） There is abundant evidence from a wide range of fields indicating that the earth and universe are both billions of years old. According to a recent survey, The latest survey shows that An recent investigation shows that ,2008年12月：Limiting
20、the use of disposable plastic bags,1。一次性塑料袋被广泛使用There is abundant evidence indicating that disposable plastic bags are used everywhere, in department stores, in supermarkets and even in rest rooms.,Many university students More and more A number of A considerable number of A relatively small number
21、of A great number of A majority of An overwhelming majority of An increasing number of,People Baby / infant / infantry Child / kid / youngster Teenager / adolescent Young people / (youth) / adult Middle-aged people Elderly people / the senior citizen Old people Lay-off workers / white-collared / the
22、 retired,Practice 2: 2008年6月：Recreational activities,娱乐活动多种多样 娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能有危害性There is a general tendency that a majority of universities authorities manage to provide the students with recreational activities of various kinds.,2. There is no agreement among people on the issue whether or There i
23、s no agreement whether we should live in the city or in the country. Topic: On the Spring Festival Gala 有人喜欢看，有人认为应该取消 There is no agreement whether the Spring Festival Gala should be cancelled or not.,3. so that ,As far as I am concerned, the Spring Festival Gala should be held in the future. For o
24、ne thing, the programs are so interesting that it provides us with an opportunity to chat, laugh and drink heartily with our family members on the eve of the Spring Festival.,For another, the programs are so various that they appeal to / attract kids, teenagers, middle-aged people and the old.,Make
25、Enable sb. to do sth. Allow Help sb. do sth. Force sb. to do sth. Drive,4. , which enables sb. to do sth.,A considerable number of people have to work together for the success of the Spring Festival Gala, which makes it possible for many people to have jobs of their own.,The major reasons why I deci
26、de to do so can be listed as follows. The benefits can be listed as follows. First of all, 缺乏师资，（学习知识） 离开父母，更加自立 I have to live without the help of my parents, I have to live far away from my parents, which makes it possible for me to be much more independent than ever.,Finally, 环境恶劣，锻炼意志 Working in
27、 the western areas (remote areas) in our country enables to be strong in will because it is tough for me to work there. It is so tough for me to work there that it enables me to be strong in will.,Examples,5.Take _ for example. It is _ that enables him to do sth. Cooperation Take Liu Bei and Sun Qua
28、n who tried to fight against Cao Cao for example. It is the cooperation between them that enables them to win the battle in Chibi.,Take me a graduate candidate in Nanjing Normal University for example. It is internet that enables me to gain access to the reference books and reading materials I am se
29、arching for. be informed of what has happened home and abroad,to keep contact with my friends in primary school and secondary school to enjoy entertainments to hold video conferences,Example7. Take the lovely children who live in the remote areas of our country for example. It is the help of the peo
30、ple from big cities that enables them to go to university. 8. Another case in point is the elderly who cannot take care of themselves. Without the other peoples help, they would live a miserable and lonely life when they are getting older and older.,Take the athlete Sang Lan who failed in one of the
31、 Olympic Games for example. It is confidence that enables her a disabled person to live a carefree life.,Take Yao Ming (who is) one of the most well-known athletes in China for example. It is confidence that enables him to be the top basketball players in the world. Another case in point is the love
32、ly kids who live in the remote areas. Without confidence, their chances of being enrolled in university would be rather slim. On the contrary, with confidence, they would be more likely to be elites in a wide range of fields. People from all walks of life,6. Whether or not depends on whether or not.
33、,Whether we can achieve success or not depends largely on whether we can communicate with others effectively or not. express myself,Whether we can achieve success or not depends largely on whether we can be optimistic / persistent / catch hold of the opportunity in front of us or not.,7. Nothing is
34、+ er than to + V Nothing is more important than to receive education. Nothing is more important than life. Nothing is more important than to protect our environment. Nothing is more important than to protect the intellectual property rights.,8. cannot emphasize the importance of too much. We cannot
35、emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.A man cannot have too many ties.,9. if Please call me immediately if you come up with the solution to the financial problem. Without clean water, the area cannot sustain life of any kind, corn, livestock or human.,10. as long as American troop
36、s will not leave Iraq as long as Bush is the president of U. S. A. We will attain our goal one day as long as we keep practicing all the time.,11. Only when can we do Only when we realize (are clearly aware of) the gravity of the problem can we try every means to persuade the authorities concerned t
37、o solve the problem as quickly as possible.,Do ones best to Try ones best to Try hard to do Try every means to do Make efforts to do Make an effort to do Spare no efforts to do,Practice: Topic: Idle young, needy old. 1. 解释谚语 2. 结合现实举例论证 3. 珍惜时光, 从现在做起,12. more than Global car use is increasing at a
38、faster rate than the improvement in exhaust emissions and fuel consumption efficiency which technology is now making possible.,13. less than Drug stores are less convenient than favorite supermarkets for getting “stuff“ other than prescriptions. Buying my own groceries and cooking for myself is much
39、 less expensive than eating out in a restaurant.,He who has once done a kindness is more ready to do you another than he for whom you yourself have done a favor. The world moves forward, not so much through , as because of Efforts and endeavors The world moves forward, less through , and more from ,
40、14。no more than A learner can no more obtain knowledge without reading than a farmer can get good harvest without plowing.,15. no less than Gaining access to library books is no less easy than buying tickets for the movie at the cinema.,16. . outweigh The potential benefits of opening a new factory
41、would outweigh the risks. The costs of airport expansion outweigh the economic benefits, new research by Friends of the Earth reveals today.,17. Compared with , Compared with you, I still have a long way to go. Bicycle cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed
42、and comfort.,18. Instead of , Instead of sustaining technological innovation, Motorola tried to get rid of what it had, which turned out to be a long term marketing fiasco.,19. While , An outdoors man will soon become pale if he changes to an indoor job, while a desk clerk will take on a tan after a
43、 short vacation in the sun. Motion is absolute while stagnation is relative.,20,Contrary to , Contrary to what some people believe, the absence of a supervision system only urges him to work harder.,21.Similar to , Similar to the idea mentioned in the reading passage that , the listening passage poi
44、nts out clearly that ,23. even though Even though you have several deadlines today, you can still choose a positive, enthusiastic attitude. We will have to face with environmental problems of various kinds even though it is not our desire to do so. I like the French songs better even though I dont k
45、now what they say.,24. Despite / Despite the fact that Despite the fact that most modern Westerners have collectively agreed on a certain pace at which the world operates, this is by no means a universal perception. Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.,Despite t
46、he fact that we can acquire much knowledge from books of various kinds, we actually know little about how to put the knowledge we have acquired into practice if we are lack of experiences in doing so / in that aspect.,25. In spite of In spite of the fact that both virus and antivirus technologies ar
47、e still actively evolving, classic approaches still remain the most effective.,26. result in / lead to / contribute to / give rise to the fact that Living under the same roof for several years may more often than not result in the aesthetic fatigue.,The dependence on motor vehicles has given rise to
48、 major problems, including environmental pollution, depletion of oil resources, traffic congestion, emission of fumes and safety., contribute to the fact that Many women nowadays are more independent due to the fact that they are financially stable and have the ability to look after themselves. Howe
49、ver, this doesnt not contribute to the fact that they would be more motivated to divorce.,27. , which results in the fact that Our ancestors fought for delicious food, comfortable clothes, decent shelter, convenient means of transport, which results in the fact that we can enjoy a happy and carefree life nowadays.,28. Owing to / Due to / Thanks to , Owing to the fact that , Many women nowadays are more independent due to the fact that they are financially stable and have the ability to look after themselves.,
