1、基础写作,如何拓展要点,Lets try this.,Extend the sentences as long as you can.For example:I am a teacher.1. I am a hardworking teacher.2. I am a hardworking teacher who works day and night.3. I am a hardworking teacher who works day and night to help my students achieve their goals.,I am a student.1.2.3.,Quest
2、ion: How to extend the content when you write the basic writing?,例一： 假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会将举办迎新联欢晚会，你希望外籍教师Tom能参加，于是你给他写一封邀请信。要点如下：1. 晚会开始、结束时间以及举办地点。2. 表演内容。3. 邀请对方参加的原因以及询问对方的意向。,观察以下两篇作文, 思考如何拓展需要拓展的要点。,例二： 假定你叫李华，是高三(1)班的班长，计划和同学们在儿童节那天去儿童福利院(Children Welfare Institute)献爱心。请你给外教Kate写一封邮件，邀请她一同前往。要点如下：
3、1. 出发与返回时间。2. 活动：赠送礼物、表演节目、玩游戏等。3. 邀请对方参加的原因以及询问对方的意向。,需要拓展的要点基本可分为两种级别：高级（例一）“表演内容” (概括) 一般（例二）“活动：赠送礼物、表演节目、玩游戏等” (具体),拓展要点的方法,一. 只给出概括性要求的要点的拓展方法结合已给信息，运用常识，列出合理要点。(例一)已给信息：学生会将举办迎新联欢晚会要求：表演内容列出合理的要点(最好写3点)：1. Senior2 Class1 will perform an interesting play called Welcome to Our School.23,二. 给出具体
4、要求的要点的拓展方法如下1. 举例说明 例一：我们应该做一些事情保护环境。 We should do something to protect the environment. 拓展例子：我们应该做一些事情保护环境。例如，我们可以种更多树，节约水和能源。 We should do something to protect the environment. For example, we can plant more trees and save water and energy.,2. 附加成分作解释说明添加与所给信息有关的原因, 结果, 目的等内容。 例一：这样更方便照顾父母。 It wil
5、l be much more convenient to look after your parents.拓展原因: 因为父母越来越年迈。 It will be much more convenient to look after your parents as they are getting older and older.,例二：主题公园变得越来越有趣。 The theme park is becoming more and more interesting.拓展后果：吸引越来越多人去那里。 The theme park is becoming more and more interes
6、ting, which attracts more and more people to go there.,3. 加谚语(Proverb) 例一：锻炼对学生有好处。It is good for us students to take exercise.拓展：As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”(只用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。) It is good for us students to take exercise. 例二：想有好成绩必须付出努力。 If we want to get good gra
7、des, we must study hard. 拓展：As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” (没有付出就没有收获。) If we want to get good grades, we must study hard.,常用谚语(Proverb),Time flies. 光阴似箭。When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。 Do it now. 机不可失，时不再来。 A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
8、Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。 Reading enriches the mind. 开卷有益。All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 Many hands make light work. 众人拾柴火焰高。,4. 添加常用句式,例一: 你可以在9月1号前给我答复吗？Could you give me a reply before September 1st ?拓展: 如果你能在9月1号前给我答复我会很感激的。 I woul
9、d appreciate it if you could give me a reply before September 1st.例二: 你一直鼓励我。You always encourage me.拓展: 是你一直鼓励我。 It is you who/that always encourage me.,常用句式,The reasons/suggestions/problems are as follows. The reason why is that It goes without saying that “不言而喻”Its obvious that It is said thatIt
10、is+被强调部分+thatThere is no doubt thatThere is no denying the fact that “不可否认”Not onlybut alsoI sincerely hope that you canI would appreciate it ifFrom what have been discussed above, we can draw a conclusion that “综上所述，我们可以得出一个结论”,课堂练习（一） 假定你是李华，当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师Tom写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：1. 本人简介。
11、2. 求助内容（你的问题）。3. 希望得到Tom的帮助。,The main problems I am faced with are as follows. First, I find it quite hard to master the English grammars. Second, I have difficulty in remembering the English words. Finally, I am so shy that I cant say a word in English in front of my classmates.,Practice,课堂练习（二） 假定
12、你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请你根据下面要求给他回一封邮件，要点如下：1. 未及时回信的原因。2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。,The things I intend to do during my summer holiday are as follows. First, I plan to do a part-time job in a KFC restaurant for a month. On the one hand, Ill make some money in this way. On the other hand, Ill gain some work experience. Besides, Ill go to visit some famous places such as Mount Tai with my friends, enjoying the beautiful scenery. Finally, I want to be a volunteer in the poor villages to teach the kids there.,
