1、九年级英语单元话题作文Unit 1 【佳篇欣赏】AMy Ways of Learning EnglishEnglish is the most widely used language in the world. As a student in the 21st century, learning a foreign language well is necessary. Unfortunately, a few of my classmates dont learn English well, so they want to give up. Therefore，I think I shou
2、ld help them with their English. Here are my ways of learning English. First of all, I usually learn English by listening to the tapes. Correct pronunciation is the most important thing for beginners. I listen to the tape carefully every evening and read every sentence after the tape to improve my p
3、ronunciation. In this way, my English sounds very nice now, and I am more confident in learning English.Second, I think reading is another important way to learn English. I usually learn new words by reading English magazines. By reading, I not only learn a lot of words, but also get to know how to
4、use them. Reading helps me to understand grammar better, it makes grammar more interesting.As for speaking, I join the English cub to practice spoken English. I talk with different students and foreign teachers. In my opinion, the best way of learning English is talking in English as much as possibl
5、e. Dont be afraid of making mistakes because everyone makes mistakes.BHow to Learn English Well？English is one of the most important subjects in middle school. Almost everyone knows that we should learn English well, but few of us know how to learn it well. When one is learning a foreign language, h
6、e must use it. In fact, most of us learn English just by reading the textbooks and listening to the tapes. But we are afraid to speak. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. A saying goes that practice makes perfect. When we learn English, we should practice speaking every day in order to learn it bette
7、r. The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we make. Only in this way can we learn English well.How to learn English wellAs we know , English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China . English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful langu
8、age around the world . But how to learn it well ?The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well . At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . We should spend enough time in practicing English . If we keep on work
9、ing hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day .How I learn EnglishHello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well . I like English very much . I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class , I listen carefully
10、, speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary . After class , I do my homework carefully . I watch English movies and listen to English songs . I have booked an English newspaper . Its Times English Post , I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of remembering the new words beca
11、use I master many good methods . I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day . Thats all .How I improved my EnglishWhen I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I h
12、ad any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.Unit 2
13、 【佳篇欣赏】AMy Life Has ChangedDear Robby,I havent seen you for ages. How are you? Do you play the piano every day now?I study in a junior middle school now，I am always busy with my lessons. I used to play the piano every evening, but now I cant. I have to do my homework. As you know, I used to have lot
14、s of hobbies, but now I just have no time for them. I gave up collecting model cars, sent away my dog and stopped painting. I used to enjoy myself with my friends at weekend, while I spend most of my time doing my lessons now. My life has changed a lot, I feel frustrated. What about the life of midd
15、le school students in your country? I hope you can enjoy yourself. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours,Jay 请你按照下面表格的提示，写一篇题为“Changes in My Hometown”的英语短文,开头已给出。内容要点旧房子 高楼河水肮脏 河水清澈过去 步行、骑自行车上班现在 乘公交车、开小汽车上班要求：1.以今昔整体对比的方式写一篇短文；2.或者以单项对比的方式写一篇短文；3.词数：80 词左右（包括已经写出的单词） 。Changes in My HometownOver
16、 the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, _分析：本篇作文的题目和要点已经给定，有两种写法，一是今昔整体对比，也就是先说明过去的总体情况，再说明现在的总体情况；二是单项对比，也就是先说明过去的房子是什么样子的，而现在的房子是什么样子的，按照不同的比较项目逐一列举。最后也可通过对比，表达自己对家乡变化的喜悦之情或对家乡的热爱。在选词方面，同学们可灵活运用本单元重点结构 used to do/be 或 there used to be/do，注意正确使用一般过去时。习作 1：Ove
17、r the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, the houses were very old. The river used to be very dirty. People used to walk or ride bikes to work. But now things are different. Many people live in tall buildings. T he river is so clean that people can swim in it.
18、People take buses or drive their own car to work. I am happy to see that my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.教师点评 这是以今昔整体对比方式写的一篇习作。得分点（1）完整地将表格提示内容进行了表述，基本无语言错误。 处这句话摆脱了简单的罗列陈述，使短文显得比较灵活。（2）在内容完整的基础上，结尾表达了个人情感，为短文增色不少。失分点 此 处应该使用复数形式 cars。提示此处 用此除了选用 old 外，根据表格提示，旧房子也指房子的状况不佳，可选用用 poor。
19、【拓展练笔】1、Jack 以前在学习上不愿下功夫，学习成绩也不好。在朋友 John 的帮助下，他的学习有了明显进步。请根据下表的内容提示，写一篇短文。过去 经常上学迟到，不认真听课,不认真完成作业Jack现在 在 Jack 的帮助下，认真学习John 关心 Jack，和他谈心；帮助他复习功课、解决问题要求：1. 短文应包括表中所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。2. 简单表述自己对这一问题的看法。_One possible version:Jack is a student at No.2 School. He lives with his uncle because his parents
20、work in another city. He does really well in his subjects. But he used to be a “problem student”. He was always late for school. What was worse, he didnt listen to the teachers carefully in class and he never finished his homework on time. His teachers and classmates were very worried about him. Joh
21、n，a top student in the class, decided to do something to help him. He used to talk with Jack every afternoon after school. He did his homework at Jacks home so that he can help his with his problems and help him review his lessons. At the end of the school year，Jack did better in the exams, he made
22、great progress. Now, with the help of John，Jack is careful about his lessons, he is trying his best to do it well. John now is Jacks best friend. I think Jack is really lucky, he got two things -true friendship and good grades. Unit 3【佳篇欣赏】AOur School RulesI study in a strict school, and there are m
23、any rules here. I agree to some of them, but disagree to others.We have to wear uniforms every day. I disagree with it. The quality of the uniforms is bad and they make us feel uncomfortable. I think students should be allowed to wear their own clothes. We want to be different. At our school, even g
24、irls are not allowed to have long hair. That is really strange. Long hair makes girls look more beautiful, and in Chinese culture girls should have long hair. Of course, there are some rules I agree with. Younger students are not allowed to ride bikes. It is dangerous for them to ride bikes during t
25、he rush hours. We arent allowed to eat snacks at school. I think it is good for us, most snacks are bad for our health.BMy family RulesMy parents are strict with me. There are many rules in my family. Let me tell you some of them.I am not allow to spend too much time watching TV or surfing the Inter
26、net on school, and I must go to bed before 23:00, because I have to do my homework and get up early the next morning. I have to clean my room every morning. My parents think it is a very good habit to do so. But I dont agree with them, because my room is not always dirty. Even I dont agree with some
27、 of the rules, I will obey them. I think my parents wont do anything that is bad for me. CThe Rules of students Lab in Our SchoolIn the students lab at our school, there are many rules for the students. Here some important ones. We must keep quite if we dont have to speak. During the class, we must
28、be careful to protect the instruments in the lab. While practicing, we should watch carefully and take some notes. We are not allowed to litter the ground with paper or take things in the lab away. After class, we must clean the lab and do it up before we leave. All of think that these rules are nec
29、essary, they make it easy for the teacher to teach here. 【拓展练笔】假如昨天你们班以“Shall We Keep Animals in Zoos? ”为开展了一次英语讨论，请根据下表用英语写一篇 80 词左右的报道，介绍讨论会的大概情况，第一句已给出，不计入词数。结果 20 人认为应该把动物养在动物园里 30 人认为不应该把动物养在动物园里理由 人们可以在动物园里看到很多种类的动物。 动物们在动物园里可以得到很好的照顾。动物们被关在笼子里，无法自由活动。 动物喜欢生活在自然环境中。Yesterday we had a discussio
30、n about whether we should keep animals in zoos. _One possible version:Yesterday we had a discussion about whether we should keep animals in zoos. Twenty of us thought that animals should be kept in zoos. Then we can see different kinds of animals there and all the animals will be taken good care of.
31、 Thirty students had a different opinion. They thought that animals shouldnt be kept in zoos， because animals come from the nature and they love to live in a natural environment. If they are kept in the cages, they cant move there and there. Keeping animals in cages is really bad for them.Unit 4 【佳篇
32、欣赏】AIf I Had A Million YuanWhat would you do if you had a million yuan? Many people would buy a big house. As for me, if I had so much money, I would not take all the money. I would give half of it to the poor schools in the west part of China. I always hear that many children there cant afford to g
33、o to school. I want to help them. Then, I would give some money to the Green Peace to help protect the environment. I would also travel all over the world, and it must be exciting. I would save the rest of the money for my education, because in this way my parents dont have to work too hard. Of cour
34、se, if I work very hard, I think my dream will come true. 【拓展练笔】学校的校刊开展了一次“如果有烦恼，你向谁诉说”的学生问卷调查， 要求写清自己的想法和理由。假设你参加了这次问卷调查，请以此为题，写一篇 80 字左右的短文。 分析：这篇作文比较贴近中学生的生活。 在作文开始应先说明有了烦恼会告诉谁,然后再讲理由。讲理由时要注意主要理由在先,次要理由在后, 各条理由之间过渡应自然流畅。由于谈论的是一个假设的情况,所以要注意恰当使用本单元的虚拟语气结构。习作 1：If I had some trouble，I would let my p
35、arents know. Because they have a lot of experience about life，they may know how to solve my problem and what should I do. My parents love me best in the world，so I believe them. Another reason is that I and my parents are good friends，I dont feel shy to tell them young peoples problems. By the way，i
36、f I told my classmates，they may laugh at me. 教师点评这是一篇较好的学生作文。得分点（1）按照要求写清了自己的想法和理由。（2）内容连贯，语言错误较少。失分点此处应使用 problem 的复数形式；此处语序不正确，应为陈述句语序 what I should do；根据上下文判断，此处是我信任他们,所以最好用 I believe in them. 【拓展练笔】1、吸烟有害健康。然而，有些中学生却认为吸烟是件很酷的事，如果你的身边有同学吸烟，你该怎么办？ 请按提示写一篇短文，题目自拟。内容提示：1. 吸烟不仅危害自身健康，也损害周围人的健康；2. 有些青
37、少年因无足够的钱来买香烟而引致偷窃犯罪；3. 应该马上停止吸烟，多进行体育活动。要求：1. 不要逐字翻译内容提示；2. 词数不少于 100 词。_One possible version:Stop SmokingNowadays, some boy students smoke, and they think it cool to do that. But I dont think so. If the boys around me smoked, I would do something to stop them from smoking. First, I would tell them
38、that smoking is bad for health in many ways. As far as I know, smoking leads to cancer and bad memory. Its not only harmful to the smokers but also to the people around them. Second, I would tell them that some students stole because they didnt have money to buy cigarettes. Step by step, the broke t
39、he law, and were punished. Of course, I would also give them some advice to help them stop smoking. I think they should give up smoking at once, and they should do more exercise instead. If the students around me smoked, I would try my best to help them give up smoking.Unit 5 【佳篇欣赏】1.请以 Jack 的身份根据下面
40、提示帮他给他的老师 Mr. Black 发一封电子邮件。词数在 80 词左右。提示：1. 当 Jack 到家时，他发现自错拿了英语书，他认为肯定是 Tracy 的，因为书上有 Tracy 的名字。2. Jack 的书可能在 Mr. Black 家的书桌上。如果在，请老师帮忙保存起来，如果不在， 麻烦 Mr. Black 告诉他 Tracy 家的电话号码。分析：这是一篇提示性作文，要求写一封电子邮件，由于错拿了书而需要老师的帮助。首先要表示对打扰别人歉意，然后说明发生了什么事，需要老师如何帮助，最后再表示感谢。写作时要注意正确使用表示猜测的情态动词及电子邮件的格式。习作 1： Mr. Black
41、,I need your help. When I got home, I found my English is lost, and I took a wrong book. I think it must belong to Tracy. Because there is her name on it. My English book may on your desk. If it is on it, please help me take it. If it is not there, please send me an e-mail and tell me Tracys telepho
42、ne number, and I will ask her. Thank you very much.Jack 教师点评这是一篇中档学生习作。得分点（1）能按照作文要求写作，内容完整，格式正确。（2）能恰当使用单元目标语言和 If 引导的条件状语从句。失分点此处应为my English book was lost，应与主句时态保持一致，用一般过去时。此处遗忘了 be 动词。情态动词后使用动词原词。此处用词不当，这儿的保存可使用 keep, look after 或 take care of 。2.根据提示写一篇 80 词左右的短文。内容提示：李洋在教室外面拣到一支钢笔， 他认为这支笔是刘林的， 因为他知道刘林有这样一支笔，于是他去给刘林，但不是刘林的。他们俩仔细想了一下，认为这支笔有可能是张力的， 他们见过他用过这样的笔。_One possible version:Li Yang found a pen outside the classroom
