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1、短文改错参考答案20162012 年各省市高考题A 卷 全国卷Passage 1 (2016全国 )假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that

2、I live.Though not very big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking

3、.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案 My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live.Though not very thatwherebig， the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at butmea

4、l times.Some people even to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to hadhavehis success is .Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables high quality honesthonesty orandoil are for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming usingused of/abutrich in short period of time.Instead，he hop

5、es that business will grow .thea ourhis steadysteadily1thatwhere 考查宾语从句的连词用法。由句子结构可知，介词 to 之后为宾语从句。从句谓语是不及物动词 live。故用 where 引导。 2去掉 but 考查从属连词与并列连词。从属连词 though 不可与并列连词 but连用。3had have 考查语境中的时态运用。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现在时。4honest honesty 考查名词作表语。由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可知应当用名词形式。5or and 考查并列连词的用法。根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择关

6、系。6using used 考查固定短语的用法。be used for“用来做”，为固定短语。7在 dreams 之后加上 of 或 about 考查短语动词。固定短语 dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思是“梦想做某事”。8thea 考查代词的用法。in a short period of time 为固定词组，意思是“短时间内”。9our his 考查冠词的用法。短文介绍了 my uncle 诚信经营餐馆的事情，故将 our 改为 his。10steadysteadily 考查副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。Passage 2 (2016全国 )假定英语课上老师要求

7、同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose bet

8、ween staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to plac

9、es of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.答案 The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about to do howwhatduring the holiday.We can between staying at home and a trip.If we chosechoose taketakingstay at home, it is c

10、omfortable there is no need to spend money.But in that case, butandwe will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden theyourourview and gain we can not get from books.Some classmates suggest we knowledgesknowledgego to places of interest nearby.I that it is a good idea.It do

11、es not cancan/或 should thoughtthinkcost ， yet we can still learn a lot.manymuch1howwhat 考查疑问词的用法。我和同学正在谈论假期里做什么。固定表达 what to do，如果用 how 结构为 how to do sth.2chosechoose 考查动词形式。根据语法知识可知，情态动词 can 后要用动词原形。3taketaking 考查非谓语动词的用法。此处为 between.and.结构，根据前面的 staying at home 可知，此处也要用动名词形式，与前面保持一致。4butand 考查连词的用

12、法。如果呆在家里，感觉舒适，还不花钱。根据句意可知，此处应是并列关系，而不是转折关系。5world 前加 the 考查定冠词的用法。此处特指我们所生活的这个世界。6your our 考查形容词性物主代词的用法。根据前面的主语 we 可知，此处要用 our，表示“我们能够开阔我们的视野”。7knowledgesknowledge 考查不可数名词的用法。knowledge 为不可数名词，没有复数形式。8去掉 can 或 canshould 考查虚拟语气。suggest 表示“建议”，后面的宾语从句要用 should do 形式，should 可以省略，故答案有两种改法。9thoughtthink

13、考查一般现在时的用法。我认为这是一个好主意。根据上下文可知，此处并不是过去的看法，而是现在的看法。10manymuch 考查代词的用法。这样不会花很多钱。cost much 花费很多。此处也可理解为 much money 的省略。Passage 3 (2016全国 )假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅

14、限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first， I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However，my parents didnt seem to think such.They always tell me what to

15、 do and how to do it.At one time,I ever felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.

16、答案 The teenage from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were yearyearsalso the best and years in my life.At first， I thought I knew everything and worseworst thecould make decisions by .However，my parents didnt seem to think yourselfmyself.They always me what to do and how to do it.At

17、one time ，I ever felt my suchso telltoldparents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be from them.I showed freelyfreethem I was independent by strange clothes.Now I am leaving home wearwearing toforcollege.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need h

18、elp.【语篇导读】 本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系。1year years 此处指 1319 岁的年龄，故用复数。2worseworst 与前面的 best 并列，此处应用最高级。3去掉 the at first 固定短语。4yourselfmyself 根据句意，此处指“我自己”。5such so so 指已经提到的事。6telltold 此处应用过去时态。7freelyfree 此处应用形容词作表语。8wearwearing 此处用动名词作介词的宾语。9tofor 固定搭配 leave for 去。10whenever 后加 I whenever 引导状语从句，从句缺少主语 I。Pa

19、ssage 4 (2015新课标全国 ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now

20、 I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs

21、we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.答案 When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I I would be happy thinkthoughtthere.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home i

22、n countryside.There the air teis clean the mountains are green.Unfortunately， the development of orand onwithindustrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very problem.The we breathe seriouslyserious airsairin is getting

23、dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must ways MuchMany foundfindto protect environment.If we fail to do so，we ll live to regret it.yourour/the1thinkthought 考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。2countryside 前加 the 考查冠词的用法。in the countryside (在乡村)为固定短语。3or and 考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意

24、可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。4onwith 考查介词的用法。with the development of.为一固定短语，意思是“随着的发展”。5去掉 been 考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studies 和谓语 show 之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态。6seriouslyserious 考查形容词的用法。修饰名词 problem 应当用形容词。7airsair 考查不可数名词的用法。air 作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。8Much Many 考查代词的用法。animals 为可数名词复数，故用 many。9found f

25、ind 考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。10your our/the 考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知 your 与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为 our/the 才能使句意通顺。Passage 5 (2015新课标全国 ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只

26、允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony w

27、as scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.答案 One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with

28、 his .It was very parentparentscrowded.Tony saw a toy a shop window.He liked it so much that he quickly oninwalked into the shop.After at the toy for some time，he turned around and lookslookingfound his parents were missing.Tony was scared and to cry.A wherethat或 where begunbeganwoman saw him crying

29、 and him to wait outside shop.Five minutes tellingtold athelater， Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I hiswere worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.terribleterribly1parent parents 考查名词复数。由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此处应当用复数形式。2onin 考查介词的用法。玩具是

30、摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词in。3veryso 考查固定句型的用法。由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。so.that.为固定句型，意思是“如此以至于”4looks looking 考查省略的用法。After 之后省去了主语 he，he 与 look at之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分词。5去掉 where 或 where that 考查宾语从句连接词的用法。动词 found 之后为宾语从句，从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将 where 去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的 that。6begunbegan 考查并列谓语的用法。由句子结构可知，begin 与 was sc

31、ared 并列，因此，要用一般过去时。7telling told 考查并列谓语的用法。有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。由句意可知，tell 这一动作是这个妇女发出的，应当与 saw 构成并列谓语。故改用 told。8athe 考查冠词的用法。表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。9saw 后加 his 考查物主代词的用法。根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在parents 前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。 10terrible terribly 考查副词的用法。形容词 worried 之前要用副词来修饰。Passage 6 (2014新课标全国 ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请

32、你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden

33、.Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to seed by themselves where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the

34、same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!答案 Nearly five years ，and with the help our father，my sister and I beforeago byofplanted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since thenfor all these we been a

35、llowing tomatoes to seed by themselves where they please.As yearyears hadhaveresult，the plants are growing .The fruits are small in size，but juicy asomewhereeverywhereand .There are so that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we tastetasty muchmanyallow tomato plants to grow in the same

36、place year after year， we have butbut或 yetnever had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfullywonderfultomatoes at no cost!1beforeago ago 常与一般过去时连用；before 常与完成时连用，这里谓语是 planted，用的是过去式，故用 ago。2byof with the help of.在的帮助下。3year years 由前面 all these 可知应用 year 的复数形式。4hadhave 根据时间状语“

37、since then”可知，主句应为现在完成时，所以把had 变为 have。5as 后加 a as a result 为固定搭配，译为“结果”。6somewhere everywhere 因为种子落在哪里就在哪里生根发芽，所以这种植物长得到处都是。everywhere 到处；somewhere 某处。7taste tasty are 后面应用形容词， and 连接形容词 juicy 和 tasty。8muchmany 根据谓语 are 可知后面应用修饰可数名词的 many，而 much修饰不可数名词。9去掉 but 或改为 yet although 引导让步状语从句，不可与 but 连用，但

38、可以与 yet 连用。10wonderfullywonderful 因 tomatoes 为名词应用形容词修饰，所以把副词改为形容词。 Passage 7 (2014新课标全国 ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。My dream sc

39、hool starts at 8：30 am.and ends at 3：30 pm.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didnt need to do so many homework.Therefore，we have more time with after-school activities.For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My drea

40、m school look like a big garden with all kinds of flowers and trees around which.We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.答案 My dream school starts at 8：30 am.and ends at 3：30 pm

41、 are three TheyTherelessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We need to do so didntdont manymuchhomework.Therefore，we have more time after-school activities. For withforexample，we can do reading for one and a half and play sports for one hour hourhoursevery day.My dream school like a big gard

42、en with all kinds of flowers and trees looklooksaround which. We can lie on the grass for a rest，or by the lake listening satsit tomusic.The teachers here are kind and .They are not only our teachers but also helpfullyhelpfulour friends.1TheyThere 考查固定句型。There be 句型，表示“有”。故把 They 改为There。2didntdont

43、考查动词时态。此处叙述每天要做的事情。应该用一般现在时，故把 didnt 改为 dont。3manymuch homework 是不可数名词，故用 much 修饰。4withfor 考查介词词义辨析。此处句意是 “为课外活动留出更多时间”。5hour hours 考查名词单复数。 one and a half hours 为一个半小时。6looklooks 考查主谓一致。school 为单数名词，故谓语用 looks。7whichit 非定语从句，此处应为代词。 8satsit 考查动词时态。根据前句内容可知此处是接情态动词 can，故用动词原形。9listening 后面加 to 考查固定短

44、语。listen to“ 听”。10helpfully helpful 此处 and 连接并列的两个形容词 kind 和 helpful。Passage 8 (2013新课标全国 ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。I hardly r

45、emember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall， with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep

46、voice，which set himself apart from others in our small town，he was strong and powerful.In a fact，he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However，he was the gentlest man I have never known.答案 I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to me on her knees a

47、nd holdingholdsing old songs.I was only four when she away.She is just a distant memory for passespassedme now.I remember my grandfather very .He was tall，with broad muchwell/clearly shouldershouldersand a beard that turned from black gray over the years.He had a deep towardto/intovoice，which set ap

48、art from others in our small town， he was strong himselfhim andand powerful.In a fact，he even scared my classmates away they came over to duringwhenplay or do homework with me.However，he was the gentlest man I have nevereverknown.Passage 9 (2013新课标全国 ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to ha