1、句子润色： 用高级结构让句子靓起来,1. 介绍概括：同位语短语、非谓语动词结构，使文章简洁、明了 (1) Yao Ming, a world-famous basketball player, is now owning a huge corporation. (2) Born in Maryland, USA in 1985, Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.,2. 使用非谓语动词作状语的结构。 如 Done/Doing/To do, 主 + 谓 + 宾主, doing/done/to do , + 谓 + 宾3. 恰当使用被动句。 Above all,
2、 something must be done to stop polluting. 最重要的是, 必须釆取某些措施来阻止污染。,4. 使用强调句。 用do, does, did强调一般时态的谓语动词; 用it is .that .强调谓语之外的各种句子成分。,It was in this meaningful activities that we benefit a lot.,5. 使用倒装句。 Only + 状语 放句首 后部分倒装 Only in this way can we learn English well. 只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。 Not only, but als
3、o 的倒装Not until 放句首，后面部分倒装,6. 使用with的复合结构。如： With the noise going on, I couldnt go on studying. 由于那噪音的持续, 我无法继续学习。,7. 使用逗号隔开的定语从句来指代前一句的内容或者使用 , 名/代/数 + of + which/whom 这种形式的定语从句 。 The students had no time to take exercise, which affected our physical health.,Last week, we recruited plenty of new mem
4、bers, 30% of whom were high school students.,8. “数词+名词”改用“as many as+数词+名词”。 A great number of buildings were destroyed, leaving as many as 10, 000, 000 people homeless. 请多房屋被摧毁, 使多达千万的人失去家园。,9. 使用what引导的主语从句。 What surprised me greatly was to find she was such a fine swimmer. 使我大为吃惊的是, 我发现她竟是一位优秀的游泳
5、选手。,10. 五句话中间使用一两个过渡语。如 表示递进的furthermore, besides, worse still, whats more, most importantly 表归纳的to sum up, in short 转折. However, on the other hand,A group of students from Guangzhou plan to hold the first National Middle School Students Spring Festival Show. With its theme “Its Our Turn”, the three
6、-hour show will be held on Jan. 15th.,The performances, all organized, directed and performed by the students themselves, will combine traditional styles with more modern ones that students today are greatly interested in, such as street dancing and B-Box.,Through the activity, a good chance will be
7、 given for middle school students to show their talent to the world. Moreover, it will also be a great chance for the audiences to learn more about Ling Nan culture.,即时练习 使用上述润色技巧, 合并或改写下列句子。 1. I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(强调句) 1. It was when I entered sen
8、ior high school that I realized the importance of English.,2. We can live a happy life only by this means.(倒装) 2. Only by this means can we live a happy life. 3. He fell asleep. The lights were still on. (with结构) 3. He fell asleep with the lights on.,4. When I heard that, I was much moved.(非谓语动词) 4.
9、 Hearing that, I was much moved. 5. They carried out a survey among 260 students.(被动语态) 5. A survey was carried out among 260 students.,6. They were faced with many problems. They didnt lose heart.(非谓语动词) 6. Faced with many problems, they didnt lose heart7. It was getting dark. And it began to rain.
10、(过渡语) 7. It was getting dark. What was worse, it began to rain.,8. He worked very hard. He made great progress in his study.(改为复合句) 8. He worked so hard that he made great progress in his study.,9. He offered me a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over again. (what引导的主语从句) 9. What he offered me was a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over again.,11. 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their idols.(强调数字) 11. As many as 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their idols.,
