1、阅读与写作(11),旅游景点介绍随着社会的发展,旅游越来越走进人们的生活,因此,人们也越来越关注各个旅游景点的情况,旅游景点介绍类的文章在高考中也越来越多。,美文赏析Cape Town on the southern tip of Africa is a famous melting pot of cultures and a worldclass tourist destination.The variety of attractions range from the historical and architectural to those oriented towards the out
2、doors and adventure.,Table MountainUndeniably the citys most breathtaking sight,Table Mountain recently made it into the final round of the New 7 Wonders of Nature contest.You can choose to either take a cable car up to the top or can enjoy a challenging walk through the Skeleton Gorge trail.Once yo
3、u have completed the climb,the unbeatable views of the city will make the experience worthwhile.,Robben IslandLocating in Table Bay just below Table Mountain,Robben Island is a major symbol of South Africas segregated(被隔离的)past.It is famously known for the isolated prison it hosted during the Aparth
4、eid years when political figures such as Nobel winner Nelson Mandela were forced to stay there for many years.,Kirstenbosch Botanical GardensSituated at the foot of Table Mountain,the magnificent(壮观的)Kirstenbosch Botanical Gardens hold more than 20,000 native plant species that can be observed at yo
5、ur own leisure.You will need at least an hour to stroll around the lower part of the gardens,or you can enjoy a shorter walk along the pathways of the slopes.Mustsee attractions include the pleasant grass and rock gardens.Dont forget stopping off at the Bird Bath,a pool that occupies the center of a
6、 shady area inhabited by 70yearold yellowwood trees.,Victoria and Albert WaterfrontBuilt in 1860,the V & A Waterfront is first and foremost an entertainment quarter that attracts over 13 million visitors annually.Its eclectic(兼收并蓄的)array of shops,restaurants,hotels and theaters attract crowds all ye
7、ar roundespecially in the cold winter months.Named after Queen Victoria and her second son Alfred,this continues to be one of the liveliest locations in Cape Town.,【解题导语】 本文主要介绍了南非开普敦的主要旅游景点,它们各有其特色,值得一游。,一、阅读与积累 1攻克疑难词汇destination n目的地orient v朝向,面对breathtaking adj.激动人心的,惊人的The scene was one of brea
8、thtaking beauty.美妙的景色令人叹为观止。unbeatable adj.难以击败的isolated adj.孤立的;孤零零的stroll v遛达,散步,2攻克疑难句It is famously known for the isolated prison it hosted during the Apartheir years when political figures such as Nobel winner Nelson Mandela were forced to stay there for many years. 结构分析 本句是主从复合句。句中it hosted.为省
9、略了引导词的定语从句,修饰先行词prison;when引导定语从句,修饰先行词Apartheid years. 尝试翻译 它因在种族隔离制度盛行时期岛上建立的与世隔绝的监狱而闻名。在那段时期里,一些政治人物,如诺贝尔奖获得者Nelson Mandela被迫在那里待了很多年。,二、理解与书面表达 1理解文章主旨The passage mainly tells us some attractions and their characteristics. 2理解与书面表达文中画线的句子是书面表达中易犯的错误之一,请同学们改正。_答案 LocatingLocated;stoppingto stop,3
10、写作中常见的句法错误考试大纲对书面表达中应用词汇和语法结构的准确性提出了较高的要求。准确性就是要求考生写出语法正确的句子,包括时态、语态、用词和句法等,但是不少考生由于英语基础差和受到汉语思维习惯等的影响,在写作时经常不自觉地采用一些不规范的表达。就句法而言,书面表达常见的错误包括:,(1)主谓不一致 例:Ten years are a short time in a persons life. 改正:Ten years is a short time in a persons life. 应用:Every boy and every girl in our country receive f
11、ree education. 改正:Every boy andevery girl in our country receives freeeducation. Many a student have chatted online. 改正:Many a student has chatted online.,(2)时态不一致 例:They walked and walked and soon they come to a small river. 改正:They walked and walked and soon they came to a small river. 应用:Then,I p
12、ut my book under my desk,opening it and started looking for answers. 改正:Then,I put my book under my desk,opened it and started looking for answers.,After that,we went boating on a lake and having a good time. 改正:After that,we went boating on a lake and had a good time.,(3)词类不一致 例:Their mother is hon
13、estly and friendly. 改正:Their mother is honest and friendly. 应用:The hosts kindness and generous made us feel at home. 改正:The hosts kindness and generosity made us feel at home. The man in the armchair has fallen sleep. 改正:The man in the armchair has fallen asleep.,(4)逻辑不一致 例:The teacher wasnt looking
14、 at me,but I copied something. 改正:The teacher wasnt looking at me,so I copied something. 应用:He went to the soldier,taking out a shilling and gave it to him.And the soldier refused to take it and went far away. 改正:He went to the soldier,took out a shilling and gave it to him.But the soldier refused t
15、o take it and went far away.,Next time you look at a person,see if his or her ears are red and pale. 改正:Next time you look at a person,see if his or her ears are red or pale.,(5)代词替代不一致 例:There are so many books in the fair that I dont know what to buy. 改正:There are so many books in the fair that I
16、dont know which to buy. 应用:It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to“produce”children without limit. 改正:It is we who are to blame for the poverty because we used to“produce”children without limit.,He had many photos taken during the holidays and showed it to me. 改正:He had many pho
17、tos taken during the holidays and showed them to me.,(6)介词多余 例:Work hard,and you will succeed at some time. 改正:Work hard,and you will succeed some time. 应用:At the first time I saw him,he was playing football with his friends on the playground. 改正:The first time I saw him,he was playing football with
18、 his friends on the playground.,Their children cannot go to school because they dont have enough money to send their children to there. 改正:Their children cannot go to school because they dont have enough money to send their children there.,(7)连词多余 例:My friend sent me an email to ask whether how I wa
19、s getting along with my studies. 改正:My friend sent me an email to ask how I was getting along with my studies. 应用:As soon as the weather turns favorable,and we shall announce flights. 改正:As soon as the weather turns favorable,we shall announce flights.,Because he was very careless,so he made many mi
20、stakes in the exam. 改正:Because he was very careless,he made many Mistakes in the exam. 改正:He was very careless,so he made many Mistakes in the exam.,(8)冠词多余 例:When you read electronic cards,you can get not only pictures but also the background music and even animated cartoons. 改正:When you read elect
21、ronic cards,you can get not only pictures but also background music and even animated cartoons. 应用:Now the manager in the charge of the company makes it clear that part of the money spent on advertising is wasted. 改正:Now the manager in charge of the company makes it clear that part of the money spen
22、t on advertising is wasted,The teacher told his students not to write silly things in the public places. 改正:The teacher told his students not to write silly Things in public places.,(9)句子成分残缺 例1:Some people against the suggestion. 改正:Some people are against the suggestion. 应用:Our school is a famous
23、school with long history. 改正:Our school is a famous school with a long history.,There being many subjects,the students can choose whichever they would like attend. 改正:There being many subjects,the students can Choose whichever they would like to attend. All flights this morning have put off because
24、of thick fog. 改正:All flights this morning have been put off Because of thick fog.,The man was a good swimmer and soon pulled the drowning girl back the shore. 改正:The man was a good swimmer and soon pulled the drowning girl back to the shore. In past,the old man lived in the countryside. 改正:In the pa
25、st,the old man lived in the countryside.,(10)及物动词与不及物动词误用 例:Man depends water for many years. 改正:Man depends on water for many years. 应用:The teacher caught me cheating in the exam,but luckily he didnt punish for cheating. 改正:The teacher caught me cheating in the exam but luckily he didnt punish me f
26、or cheating. One day some people on the shore listened shouts for help. 改正:One day some people on the shore heard shouts for help.,(11)非谓语动词误用 例:The man admitted to break the glass. 改正:The man admitted breaking the glass. 应用:His friends objected to his give up his job. 改正:His friends objected to his
27、 giving up his job. The girl regretted to hurt her best friend. 改正:The girl regretted hurting her best friend. The flowers need be watered. 改正:The flowers need watering.,My family expected me going to college. 改正:My family expected me to go to college. The boy was made wash the car as a punishment.
28、改正:The boy was made to wash the car as a punishment. The top student is well prepared for the exam and has nothing to worry. 改正:The top student is well prepared for the exam and has nothing to worry about. I find the text easy to be understood. 改正:I find the text easy to understand.,Comparing with t
29、he traditional cards,electronic cards are more interesting and lively. 改正:Compared with the traditional cards,electronic cards are more interesting and lively.,(12)词语搭配错误 例:Which can be seen from his eyes,he is angry. 改正:As can be seen from his eyes,he is angry. 应用:As the days going on,he was beginn
30、ing to realize his mistake. 改正:With the days going on,he was beginning to realize his mistake. 改正:As the days went on he was beginning to realize his mistake.,How fine weather were having! 改正:What fine weather were having! In the dark street,there wasnt a single person from whom she could turn for h
31、elp. 改正:In the dark street,there wasnt a single person to whom she could turn for help. The truck ran to the direction of the city. 改正:The truck ran in the direction of the city.,Its very kind for you to have helped me out. 改正:Its very kind of you to have helped me out. Those who are brave enough ta
32、king adventures can take part in the training. 改正:Those who are brave enough to take adventures can take part in the training. It was not long when they reached the stadium. 改正:It was not long before they reached the stadium.,(13)汉语式表达 例:I like table tennis and it is my most favorite sport. 改正:I lik
33、e table tennis and it is my favorite sport. 应用:The hotel is twelve miles far away from here,so you should take a taxi or a bus. 改正:The hotel is twelve miles away from here,so you should take a taxi or a bus. I know little about the city,because this is my first time visit here. 改正:I know little about the city,because this is my first visit here.,