1、短文改错2017 年Correction 1 2017 全国卷， 10 分 In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he h
2、ad said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!“ “Slow down!“ “Turning left!“ I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the m
3、iddle on the road.Correction 2 2017 全国卷， 10 分 Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their
4、 house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!Correction 3 2017 全国卷， 10 分 When I look
5、at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the thi
6、ngs they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.20122016 年Co
7、rrection 12016乙卷(全国) My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day
8、 he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.Correction 22016甲卷（全国） The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking abou
9、t how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get f
10、rom books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 32016丙卷（全国） The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my li
11、fe. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didnt seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was ind
12、ependent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 42016四川It is Mothers Day today. Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has t
13、o do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked
14、in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Day!“ Mom was grateful and moving.Correction 52016浙江When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we
15、d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both ex
16、cited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 2015新课标全国卷 When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains
17、 are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found way
18、s to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.Correction7 2015新课标全国卷 One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy
19、 for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.“ Tony promised her
20、that this would never happen again.Correction8 2015陕西My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing mos
21、t of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up. At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more
22、 of these biscuits.“My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!Correction9 2015四川Hi, Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I ma
23、de three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lo
24、se their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.GraceCorrection10 2015浙江My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the
25、 view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could
26、not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never f
27、orget it.Correction11 2014新课标全国卷 Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果 ) in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere.
28、 The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Co
29、rrection12 2014新课标全国卷 My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and
30、play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers bu
31、t also our friends.Correction13 2014浙江I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone i
32、n the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered th
33、e strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.Correction14 2014陕西My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for
34、 hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky they were looked like rain! We ran to e
35、scape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didnt learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 2014四川Hello, boys and girls! Today， I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in l
36、ine at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to
37、the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Correction 16 2014辽宁Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors, were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog Cleo.Weve called several time abo
38、ut Cleos early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before
39、 5 oclock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and RoseCorrection17 2013新课标全国卷 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees
40、and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small
41、 town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.Correction18 2013新课标全国卷 The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in
42、 the early 1800s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank f
43、rom cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.Correction19 2013陕西My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing
44、 poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish wa
45、s caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 2013四川Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking
46、me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teachers office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very
47、 upset. I didnt cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?Correction 21 2013辽宁Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day，he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has r
48、uined his healthy. We are worried about him.“ That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we ha
49、d taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 2013浙江Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find other one.“ His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my
