1、高考能力层级(三) 使用较多的高级表达和连接成分 用时2课时,第八周 高级词汇与高级句式的润色升级,一、使用高级词汇写作时，“高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两个，也会为你的作文增添色彩。,1标新立异写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩，别人有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异。We all have the same chance.We all possess the same chance (opportunity)We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.We have endless homework to do at
2、 the weekend.,2短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us. I can no longer put up with the way he speaks to us. The boy realized the danger and began to run away. The boy was aware of the danger and began to run away.,3避免重复 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like r
3、eading while my brother likes watching football matches. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. 二、使用高级句式，让句子靓起来 1恰当使用被动语态 Above all, we must do something to stop pollution. Above all, something must be done to stop pollution.,2使用强调句 The accident happened the other day. The
4、 accident did happen the other day. He didnt come to the party because he was very busy. It was because he was very busy that he didnt come to the party.,3使用倒装句 We can only improve our English in this way. Only in this way can we improve our English. We dont know its value until we lose health. Not
5、until we lose health do we know its value. 4使用省略句 Although they were faced with many problems, they didnt lose heart. Although faced with many problems, they didnt lose heart.,5使用感叹句 We had a very good time with the peasants that day. What a good time we had with the peasants that day! 6使用with复合结构 B
6、ecause there was too much noise, I couldnt go on studying. With the noise going on, I couldnt go on studying.,7使用虚拟语气 I didnt take his advice, so I failed in the exam. If I had taken his advice, I wouldnt have failed in the exam. Its time for us to take measures to protect the wild animals. Its high
7、 time that we took measures to protect the wild animals.,.用较高级词汇代替画波浪线部分的词或短语 1The bookshop is in a building on Franco Street._2I have decided to study English harder this term._3I dont know how to enlarge my vocabulary._,答案：lies,答案：made up my mind,答案：have no idea,4Well try our best to develop the t
8、raditional friendship between us._5Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be._,答案：spare no efforts; promote,答案：set up,.用较高级句式转换下列句子 1I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(强调句)_ _ 2We can
9、 live a happy life only by this means.(倒装)_ 3He fell asleep. The lights were still on.(with复合结构)_,It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English.,Only by this means can we live a happy life.,He fell asleep with the lights still on.,4If it isnt well organized, the
10、meeting will be a failure.(省略句)_ 5They carried out a survey among 260 students.(被动语 态)_ 6We love our motherland very much.(感叹句)_,If not well organized, the meeting will be a failure.,A survey was carried out among 260 students.,How much we love our motherland!,7Because I was ill that day, I didnt ta
11、ke part in the sports meeting.(虚拟语气)_ _,I was ill that day. Otherwise, I would have taken part in the sports meeting.,8They didnt realize the importance of environment protecting until all the fish in the river died out.(倒装句或强调句)_ _,Not until all the fish in the river died out did they realize the i
12、mportance of environment protecting. 或：It was not until all the fish in the river died out that they realized the importance of environment protecting.,.翻译句子 1(2012福建书面表达)只有通过这种方式，我们才能生活 在更加美丽舒适的环境中。(倒装句) _ _ 2(2012福建书面表达)公园里空气清新，喷泉美丽，阳光 灿烂并且伴有鸟儿在歌唱。(with复合结构)_ _,Only in this way can we live in more
13、 comfortable and beautiful surroundings.,The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing.,3(2012江苏书面表达)在昨天下午的篮球比赛中，苏华和李 江在抢球时撞在了一起。(分词作伴随状语)_ _ _ 4(2012陕西书面表达)经验告诉我，不是你得到的东西而是 你如何利用它决定了你是怎样的一个人。(被动语态；强调句) _,During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, S
14、u Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball.,My Experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who ou are.,5他说英语说得如此清晰，以至于大家都能听得懂。 (倒装句)_ _ 6是我们做出决定的时候了。(虚拟语气)_,So clearly does he speak English that he can always make himself
15、understood by everyone.,It is high time that we made a decision.,7由于开车太快，他在事故中受了伤。(强调句) _ _ 8如果人们被说服了吃更多的水果和蔬菜，那么死于心脏 病的人数将大大减少。(被动语态)_ _ _,It was because he was driving too fast that he got injured in the accident.,The number of deaths from heart disease will be reduced greatly if people are persua
16、ded to eat more fruit and vegetables.,第九周 句子间、段落间的衔接与过渡,连接(过渡)性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。中学阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语可以归纳如下：,1表示起始关系的过渡性词语 above all, first of all, to begin with, according to, as you know/as is known, as is shown in等。 First of all, I think it important to m
17、ake more friends abroad. 首先，我认为一个人在国外多交朋友是很重要的。 As is shown in the picture, a tree is knocked down by the strong wind, while the grass stays as it is. 正如图画所示，树被大风刮倒了，而小草依然在那里。,2表示时间顺序的过渡性词语 first, then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, since then, immediately, suddenly, soon等。 I had
18、a bad cold last week. First, I had a running nose, but I did not take it seriously. Then I began to cough. After that, I had a fever and felt weak. Finally, I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days. 上周我得了重感冒，首先是流鼻涕，但我并未当回事，然后开始咳嗽，后来感到发烧而且没力气，最后我被送进医院，不得不在床上躺了三天。,3表示空间顺序的过渡性词语on th
19、e right/left, on one side of, on the other side of, at the top/foot/end of, in the middle of, in front of, at the back of等。In front of the flat stands a tall tree, and at the back of it flows a river.在房前有一棵大树，房后有一条小河在流淌。,4表示并列关系的过渡性词语 and, or, as well as, neither . nor ., not only . but also ., eith
20、er . or ., not . but .等。 Work hard, and you will be admitted to a key university. 努力学习，你就会考上重点大学。 Swimming not only benefits our health, but also helps us have a strong will. 游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。,5表示转折关系的过渡性词语 but, yet, however, while, on the contrary, at the same time (不过，然而)等。 In our school, h
21、owever, things are quite different. 然而在我们学校，情况却大不一样。 But unfortunately I mind my own business without considering my parents. 但遗憾的是我只考虑自己的事情，没有考虑父母的想法。,6表示因果关系的过渡性词语 because, as, since, for, thanks to, thus, therefore, as a result of, one reason is that ., another reason is that .等。 Thanks to the do
22、ctors timely treatment, he was saved. 多亏医生的及时治疗，他获救了。 Therefore, I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep. 因此，我建议应该给我们更多的时间用于体育运动和睡眠。,7表示条件关系的过渡性词语 if, unless, in case (of), as/so long as, on condition that等。 As long as you dont lose heart, youre sure to succeed. 只要你不灰心，就一定会成功。 If we neg
23、lect our future, well end up in failure as what happens to the man in the picture. 如果我们忽视我们的未来，就像图画中的这个人一样，我们就会以失败告终。,8表示递进关系的过渡性词语whats more, furthermore, moreover, besides, whats worse, to make matters worse, worse still, on (the) one hand ., on the other (hand) ., for one thing ., for another .等。
24、(2012福建书面表达)Whats worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign, “No Littering” nearby.更糟糕的是，他们吐痰，甚至向湖里扔垃圾，完全不顾附近告示牌上的字样“不准丢垃圾”。,On (the) one hand, they should have a good rest on weekends. On the other (hand), they should make every effort to review wha
25、t they have learned. 一方面，周末他们需要好好休息；另一方面，他们需要尽一切努力复习功课。,9表示让步关系的过渡性词语 as, though, even if/though, who (what, when, where) ever/no matter who (what, when, where)等。 Although they tried hard/Hard as they tried, they couldnt make her change her mind. 尽管他们做了很大努力，却没法让她改变主意。,10表示列举事实的过渡性词语 for example/inst
26、ance, such as, take . for example, that is to say, as follows, in other words等。 Take Beijing for example, it is one of the oldest cities in the world. 就拿北京来说吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。 In other words, I will try my best to attain (gain/live up to) my goal. 换言之，我会尽最大的努力达到我的目标。,11表示总结的过渡性词语 in short, in brief, i
27、n conclusion, in a/one word, on the whole, in general, generally speaking等。 In conclusion, a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. 总之，好公民应该遵守交通规则。 In a word, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience. 总之，过去20年里我们生活的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。,.完成句子 1首先，需要休息，因
28、为在这几年努力学习之后我的确感到累了。, a good rest is needed I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. 2就我自己而言，我正准备上大学，就要离开我学习了三年的母校了。, Im preparing to enter a university leaving the high school where Ive been studying for three years.,First of all,because,As far as Im concerned,3一般而言，为了保持身体健康，我们应该饮食多样化
29、， 除主食外，通常还包括适量的鱼、肉、蔬菜和水果。, to keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit _main food. 4总而言之，让我们面带笑容迎接每一天吧。, lets greet every day with a smile.,Generally speaking,as well as/besides/in addition,to,In a word,5一方面60%的学生反对公园收门票，另一方面，40%的
30、学生认为应该收门票。, 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees; , 40% think that fees should be charged. .高考作文单句翻译 1(2012山东书面表达)除此之外，有时一些外国人乐意加 入到我们之中。_,On (the) one hand,on the other (hand),Besides, sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join us.,2(2012江西书面表达)我会永远爱读书，因为书籍在我的 生命中既像良师又像益友。_ _
31、3(2012安徽书面表达)第二，科学主修课可以帮助我实现儿 时要当科学家的梦想。 _ _,I can never stop the love for reading because books are likewise teachers as well as good friends in my life.,Secondly, the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist.,4(2012山东书面表达)更重要的是，我能学会一些学习技 能与方法，它们在我学习过程中起着重要的作用。_
32、_ _ 5(2012山东书面表达)总之，条条大路通罗马。我相信有 付出就有回报。_ _,Whats more, I can learn some learning skills and methods, which play an important part in my study process.,All in all, every road leads to Rome. I believe hard work pays off.,6(2012辽宁书面表达)然而，有些课文含太多的我们觉 得很难懂的生僻单词和短语。_ _ 7(2012湖北短文写作)不久，我就成了班里的尖子生之 一，这极大地激
33、起了我的自信心并使我产生了动力。_ _ _,However, some of the texts have too many new ords and expressions which are hard for us.,Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly ncreased my confidence and got me motivated.,8(2012江西书面表达)一方面，他们希望改善我的写作技能并开拓我的视野。另一方面，他们能丰富我的生活，且带给我极大的快乐。_ _,For one thin
34、g, they hope to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizon. For another, they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun.,.阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空second， as a result， despite， on (the) one hand， whats worse， in a word， on the other (hand)As a new way of shopping, online shopping is becoming
35、 more and more popular in our daily life., online shopping has many advantages. First, online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things. Instead of searching a crowded store, we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like. , it is much faster for us to do shopping. We do
36、nt have to spend a lot of time going to shops. Third, we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time.,On (the) one hand,Second, online shopping also has many disadvantages. The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. , we can be cheated easily. we cannot see the things in detail.the disadvantages of online shopping, I think it is an advanced way to do shopping. So we should develop it.,On the other hand,As a result,Whats worse,In a word, despite,
