1、2011 年考研英语作文篇一：2011 年考研英语大小作文审题和参考范文2011 年考研英语大小作文审题和参考范文2011-1-16 13:52:43 考研共济网点击浏览：202 次“年年岁岁题相似，岁岁年年人不同” ，这句话最好诠释了近 12 年考研英语大作文的特点。2011 年 1 月 15 日下午的英语考试刚刚落下帷幕，广大考研学子还要为明天的专业课或数学考试做最后的拼搏。在经历了从 08 年连续三年大作文部分比较容易审题之后，今年的考生普遍感觉大小作文和往年一样难度适中，体现在大家都觉得有话可说。广大考生只要认真回忆我们强化和冲刺课堂上讲授的话题和背诵内容，就会发现此次大小作文命题都是
2、属于我们课堂上多次反复分析过的图画作文主题，及有关推荐信内容模板的写法。下面来分析一下今年的大小作文，并提供范文供大家参考。从 05 年到 07 年，小作文已经测试过辞职信(道歉信)、请求信和建议信的写法，08 年重考了偏向于与私人交流的道歉信，09年小作文接着又重考了考生对建议信的写作，2010 年测试了告示的写作。而今年 2011 年的小作文还是照搬近几年一贯的出题方式书信写作，并没有测试今年在广大考生中流传的摘要的写法。同济大学四平路2011 年的小作文要求给自己的一位朋友写一封信，推荐一部你自己最喜欢的电影，并给出理由，属于推荐信的写法。出题老师并没有考传统的求学推荐信，而是结合大学生
3、的实际，要求考生推荐一部值得看的电影，这给考生充分的自由空间，推荐信件具体内容要求考生自由发挥的余地较大，考生可以思考出一些具体内容。这属于典型的内容加原因分析的写作手法。其实我们在课堂上多次讲到，不管写什么文章，都要求考生来分析并给出理由。我们可以结合今年的贺岁片来写，也可以写经典的电影，理由归纳出三点就行，比如故事情节感人，演员阵容强大；武打效果震撼等等。写到这些内容需要考生一个扎实的语言基本功，否则只能是望“卷”兴叹，写不出任何东西。下面是我们提供的一个参考范文。33623 037一、小作文审题与范文研Directions: Write a letter to a friend of y
4、ours to 同济大学四平路recommend one of your favorite movies and 考give reasons for your recommendation 共济网You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Dont sign your name at the end of theletter. Use “Li Ming ” instead. Dont write the address。48号小作文范文：33623 037Dear my friend,专I know you are busy prep
5、aring for the Postgraduates Entrance Exams, thus you have no time to relax yourself. Recently I have seen a movie entitled Let the Bullets Fly. I strongly recommend that you see it in the coming winter vacation。研The reasons for choosing this movie are as follows. To begin with, this hot film has a v
6、ery powerful cast. I particularly want to tell you that there are a number of your favorite stars such as Zhou Runfa, Ge You and Jiang Wen. In addition, it has a changeable, legendary and fantastic plot which will alwaysattract your attention from the beginning to the end. Above all, the special act
7、ion and comic effects are breathtaking and appealing, which caters to your tastes. Finally, it is an instructive film which advocatessome virtues。021-I am sure you will appreciate this film. Please remember to tell me your true feelings。112 室Yours ever,济Li Ming济二、大作文审题与范文共济正如我在启航冲刺作文课堂上多次反复强调，2011 年
8、的大作文还是考了我们所预测的图画作文，这是考研历史上第 13 次考图画作文了。字数要求在 160-200 词。图画作文往往是一张抽象而意味深长的图片或漫画，有时让人很难理解。今年的图画只有一张图，但主题明显直接。图画中间有一艘船，有几个游客坐在船上，不停地往河里扔东西，以至于河面漂浮了大量垃圾，图画下面还有四个汉字提示：旅游之“余” ，这巧妙地用了汉语的谐音字，意思是旅行时留下大量垃圾或乱丢东西，破坏公共场所卫生。这与我在课堂上讲到今年考研英语大作文一定会在经过几年积极话题之后，必考一个消极话题的预测完全一致。共济2011 年的考生大作文可以从养成良好的公共道德去写，也可以从要保护我们的公共环
9、境方面去写，还可以从考生要养成一定的责任心去写。接下来就要思考出所要写作的主题词汇，比如public morality, environmental protection, responsibility of protecting public sanitation 等等。这些词汇都应该在今年的大作文里出现。kaoyantj考研大作文多年来关注的是对青少年个人思想品德方面的教育，比如：01 年要培养爱心；02 年要把民族文化发扬光大；03年要学会自立自强；04 年要与时俱进；05 年要孝敬父母；06 年关于偶像崇拜；07 年的自信；08 的合作与团结，09 年人们普遍关心的网络问题。从中我们可
10、以看得出命题专家们对教育年轻一代的良苦用心。所以我们可以概括出大作文的命题规律是有关青年人成长的问题居多，另外就是社会上的一些热点或人们普遍关心的话题。这一点对 2012 年考生作文备考有很大帮助。33623 037在写大作文时，第一段需要简短描述图画的内容。今年的图画中的火锅 travelers, tourist, rubbish, plastic bottles 等属于考生应该掌握的作文基础词汇。第二段需要阐释图画寓意，其实就是让简单评论或给出理由。最后一段可以结合自己谈谈看法或体会，也可以谈一些应对措施或解决办法。研【 作文思路】同济按照我们课堂上的写作方法，可以这样来展开描述和议论。第
11、一段为传统的图画描述段，根据图画中的具体信息，尤其是下面的文字说明，进行直接描述。比如可以运用我们冲刺课堂上传授的精彩句型 Whoever in front of this cartoon/drawing/picture will be greatly impressed. How thought-provoking it seems to be! 或 What is vividly illustrated in the painting above is that currently tourists on the boat are continuously throwing away wa
12、ste bottles into the river, thus destroying or polluting our public environment. (对漫画笼统地描述)。然后再补上后面的文字解释说明：“The caption(图画中的文字)is indicative of such a phenomenon that a large amount of garbage is left over along the travel/trip. ”属经典的开头套话。在描述中，不可缺少的主题相关词包括 tourists, travel, boat, public environment,
13、 , 等与“公共环境”或“道德意识”有关的词汇。021-第二段要求阐释漫画背后所隐藏的深刻社会意义。在这一段首句可以直接采用 Simply designed as the picture is, the symbolic meaning it conveys is deep and profound. It is, most likely, that the drawer intends not only to present the serious behavior to us but also to set us thinking about its real significance。在
14、句型运用方面，可以考虑使用启航课堂上反复提到的必杀词组“The foremost and the most striking influence of it is .，As is universally acknowledged，和 What makes things even worse 等。第三段以及第四段可以分析一下原因和阐述自己的一些看法或想法，来采取有效的措施，来使我们的公共环境变得更清洁和美丽。Sample WritingHow impressive the cartoon is in depicting one of the most prevalent social pheno
15、mena with regard to protecting natural environment. As is vividly portrayed in the drawing, in the river are floating a number of plastic bottles and cans. Simply designed as the drawing seems to be, the authors real purpose isto arouse our awareness of environmental protection。The drawer of this pa
16、inting is conveying to us a scene of lacking awareness of public environmental protection. In these travelers eyes, such careless disposal of garbage need not cause too much peoples worry as well as anxiety. It holds self-evident that these folks lack an essential responsibility of safeguarding sani
17、tation in public。Listed below are the major causes. For one thing, they contend that public places deserve no attention and effort of sanitary protection. For another, their casual attitude gives rise to the fact that they dont care about what they are doing to the public areas。For our part, as civi
18、lized citizens of the 21st century, we should take an initiative to protect our public sanitation. Such petty behaviors, though less eye-catching, are as important as those big deeds. If we strive to protect our surroundings, well have a clean and beautiful environment. Only when we pay attention to
19、 it can we make our environment cleaner and more beautiful。篇二：2011 年考研英语( 一)小作文真题及范文2011 年考研英语(一) 小作文真题及范文【 题目】Directions:Write a letter to a friend of yours to1) recommend one of your favorite movies and2) give reasons for your recommendation。You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not
20、 sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead。Do not write the address. (10points)【 评析】今年考研的这篇小作文考查的是大家最为熟悉的书信形式。由于各位考生在复习备考过程中一直将书信的写作练习作为小作文备考的重点，而且大家对“电影”这个话题一般也有话可写，因此整体难度不高。除了书信的格式要注意以外，题目提示中给出了两个要点：一是推荐电影，二是给出理由。书信的开头采用标准格式，正文首段可以直奔主题。如果寒暄最好不要超过一句。第二段可以首先简介一下电影的故事梗概，一两句即可
21、，要注意连贯。然后讲出电影的特色。一般来说好电影的特点无非就是故事精彩、特效惊人、手法独特、配乐优美等，点出其中一两个特色即可。结束段可以再次强调自己的推荐，并提出自己的希望，比如希望对方喜欢，或者希望跟对方作进一步讨论等。最后在正确的位置写上 Yours 并署 Li Ming，小作文写作结束。考研英语写作要求目的明确，要点完备，结构清晰，语言流畅。小作文中，可以简单句为主，如果能在此基础上进行一些并列和复合来增加语言的多样性则更佳。【 范文】Dear Liu Lei,Im writing to tell you about a fantastic movie I have just watc
22、hed, as we always share the same taste of movies。The movie is Avatar, which tells a story of a soldier who, on an alien planet filled with exotic life forms, finds himself torn between two worlds in a fight for the survival of the alien people. Besides the touching and thrilling story, the movie als
23、o features brilliant visual effects, thanks to the talented director and advanced computer technology。So I recommend it to you as one of the best movies I have ever watched. Im sure you will love it as much as I do. Im looking forward to discussing more with you after you watch it。Yours,Li Ming篇三：20
24、11 年考研英语作文模板2011 年考研英语作文模板小作文-书信类八大模板Dear_,I am _ (自我介绍) .I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_.The reason for my dissatisfaction is _(总体介绍). In the first place,_(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, _(抱怨的第二个方面 ). Under these circumstances, I find it _ (感觉)_(抱怨的方面给你带来的后
25、果).I appreciate it very much if you could _(提出建议和请求), preferably _(进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by _(设定解决事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerelyLi MingDear _,I am _ (自我介绍). I am writing to see if it is possible for
26、you to provide me with information regarding_.(要询问的内容)First of all, what are _?(第一个问题) Secondly, when will_?(第二个问题) Thirdly, is _?(第三个问题)I would also like to inquire _(将最重要的问题单独成段). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?Thank you for you kindness, a
27、nd your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerelyLi MingDear_,I am writing to formally request to_(请求的内容)The reason for_is that_(给出原因).I_, so I_(给出细节)I would also like to request_(提出进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.Thank you for your attention
28、to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at _(电话号码).I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerelyLi MingDear _,I am truly sorry that_(道歉的原因).The reason is that_(介绍原因) Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and un
29、derstand my situation.Yours sincerelyLi MingDear_,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _ (感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in _ (对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_(没有对方帮助时的后果).Every one agrees that it was you who_(给出细节).Again, I would like to express my warm thanks t
30、o you! Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerelyLi MingDear _,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _(建议的内容)I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I w
31、ould be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good Luck with your_(祝愿)Yours sincerelyLi MingDear Sir or Madam,I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in_(报纸名称)of_(广告发布时间).Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right p
32、ersonality for a_(工作名称). In the one hand,_(第一个原因). On the other hand, _(另一个原因).Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at _(电话号码)Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forwar
33、d to meeting you.Yours sincerelyLi MingDear_,There will a _(内容) at/in_ (地点) on_ (时间). We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at _(具体时间). This will be followed by a _(进一步的安排). At around_(时间) ，_(另一个安排 )I really hope you can make it. RSVP before _(通知你的最后期限)Yours sincerely
34、Li Ming大作文预测-环境类话题，教育话题（因材施教） ，道德话题，模板一：图画作文This illustration depicts_ （图画中的人物）Ving， with_（补充说明） 。 Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to_（进一步阐释）It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _（图画主题） ， which is _（进一步的说明） 。 He seems to be saying that_（给出细节） 。
35、 In my opinion， _（个人阐述） 。This simple picture is a wake up call for _（所涉群体，如the whole of the human race） 。 Therefore， it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _（问题所在） 。One the one hand， we must _（建议一） 。 It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _（进一步说明）
36、。 On the other hand， _（建议二） Only in this way can we_（展望前景） 。模板二：图表作文The chart gives us an overall picture of the _（图表主题） 。 The first thing we notice is that_（图表最大特点） 。 This means that as _， _（进一步说明） 。We can see from the statistics given that _（图表细节一） 。 After ving_（细节一中的第一个变化） ， the _Ved+幅度 +时间（紧跟着的变
37、化） 。 The figures also tells us that_（图表细节二） 。 （数据位置，如 In the second column） ， we can see that _accounts for _（进一步描述） 。Judging from these figures， we can draw the conclusion that_（结论） 。 The reason for this， as far as I am concerned is that_（给出原因） 。 / It is high time that we Ved（发出倡议）模板三：利弊型作文Recently
38、 the issue of whether or not_（讨论话题） has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major arguments that can be made for_. For one thing， _can bring _ to_（优点一） 。 For another， it is widely hold that people usually _when _（优点二） 。But we must not lose sight of the fac
39、t that there are also drawbacks to_， among which are _（列举缺点） 。For instance， it can be _to _（举例说明） 。 In addition， many people find it _（形容词）to _（第二个缺点）When asked to _， I tend to _. This is because I _（原因一） 。 Furthermore， _（原因二） 。 Finally， _（原因三） 。模板四：展望未来型With the rapid advances of _ in recent years，
40、 _has_（引出现象） 。 However， _ has_， as_（提出问题） 。 As a result， _has _（指出影响） 。The effects _ has produced on_ can be boiled down to two major ones.First ， _（影响一） 。 More importantly， _（影响二） 。 Hence， I believe that we will see a _（提出展望）/ Nevertheless， I do not think we will see a _（或反面展望）There are numerous re
41、asons why _， and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. The first is that the more（比较级）_， the more （比较级） 。 In addition， we all agree that_（第二个原因）第一段可以是 The pictures above vividly describe +名词第一段末句可以是 certain informative implication is revealed in the picture above.第二段阐述可以是 no
42、ting can be compared with .is not harmful or damaging.第三段：提出些建议It is important to take concrete measures to put this situation on hold .for one thing,.for another thing .表达自己的强烈看法:What an attractive scene it is!Why do they behave in this way?What can we say at seeing such pictures?作者意图模板句： It is cle
43、ar that the drawer wants to draw our attentions to . It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attentions to . The drawer reminds us of a common social phenomenon. The phenomenon will bring a series of harmful consequences. It is obvious that the drawer of this picture wants to draw our
44、 attention towards .原因解释模板句： The reasons why can be listed as follows.(开头句) The reasons for this situation can be listed as follows. (开头句) The problem can be analyzed from perspectives. (开头句) In the first place,In the second place,Last but by no means the least, In the first place,（从三个方面来说明原因或解释现象 该
45、三句为分述句） On the one hand，On the other hand， （从两个方面来说明原因或解释现象 该两句为分述句） To begin with,Second,Last but not the least / Third, (从三个方面来说明原因或解释现象 该三句为分述句）双图画作文写作模式：1、描述图画：首句进行，简练准确。2、推导绘画者的意图：展开说此现象或此问题的表现，以此证明其引人注目或说此现象或问题产生的原因。3、做出评论：不好的事情如何解决，好的事情如何进一步发展。另附带说明一点：各位考研朋友考研从历年的考研英语真题中发现一点就是，历年考研英语真题大作文都具有这
46、样一种模式：“现象或问题原因解释解决办法” ，各位可以参照都历年考研英语真题，相对照。e.g.：1、描述两幅画 2、解释意思 3、指出产生该现象原因。该模式也可以分解为四个步骤：本人强烈推荐在考试中运用该种模式！结构为：1、描述图画 2、发表自己看法 3、指出该现象的原因 4、提出解决办法。（描述图画）As is depicted by the two pictures, a sharp contrast is shaped between A and B. In the left drawing, A .However, in the right drawing, B . （开头）（表达自己
47、强烈的看法）In my opinion, the reasons for this phenomenon come down to one essential point failure of both C and D. For one thing, C .For another, D .（段中）（指出该现象的原因）.（提出解决办法）In a word，to change the phenomenon described by the above pictures. a in our current is not only necessary urgent.(末尾)图表作文写作模式: 首段写作：长度适中，描述图表。如果图表
