1、初中英语书面表达精品范文（三）一、内容解读1.书面表达的形式多种多样，但主要可分为三类：应用文、看图作文和提示作文。2.应用文包括英文通知、启事、便条、日记、书信、贺卡和 E-mail 等形式。看图作文可以是一幅图，也可以是多副图；可以是填词、写句子，也可以是根据提示词写短文。提示作文经常是给出英文或汉语提示，提示可以是文字，也可以是图表。二、能力解读1.应用文，要求能够掌握常见几种类的写作技巧；看图作文，要能够根据图画和提示词语，明确考查意图，弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，完整表达意思；提示作文，要根据提示写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。要掌握记叙文、说明文和夹叙夹议文的写作方法及其技巧。2.能
2、够运用常用词汇、基本句式和语法知识，按要求写出规范的句子，表达自己的思想。三、具体例子（一）人物描写类：1.请根据下面所给李玲的个人小档案，以 My good friend 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍李玲的基本情况。要求条理清楚，语句通顺，体现表中的全部内容，不得少于 12 句话。中文名：李玲 英文名：Susan 性别：女 年龄：15 祖籍：青海 学校： 第八中学 年级：三 班级：二 特长：数学、英语 爱好：唱歌、看电视、打排球 优点：友好，善良，乐于助人，学习努力 【参考范文】My Good FriendI have a good friend. Her Chinese name is Li
3、 Ling, and Susan is her English name. She is from Qinghai. Li Ling is fifteen years old. She studies in No. 8 Middle School. She is in Class Two, Grade Three. Li Ling is good at maths and English. She likes singing and playing volleyball very much. And she sings quite well. She likes watching TV, to
4、o. Li Ling is very kind and friendly. She studies very hard and always likes helping others. What a good girl she is! I like her!2.某英文杂志就“ 建立和谐家园、和谐社会”为主题征文。请以“My family and I”为题，为该报写一篇征文。征文应包括以下要求：.家庭成员及其基本情况。 .家庭成员对你的关心、帮助、理解。(举例说明 ).家庭对你的重要性。注意：1.词数： 100 词左右。2.文章中不能出现学校名称、姓名等个人信息。【参考范文】 My family
5、 and II live in a happy family. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. They are the closest people to me. All the memories of my childhood, in one way or another connected with them.I can still remember clearly the day when I had my first exam. I didnt pass it. I felt so scared that I even d
6、idnt want to go to school again. My parents looked at my test paper and said,“My child, youve finished half of it. Were very glad. You can do better next time. We never expect you to do the best at the first time.We hope you can make progress gradually.”What they said made me feel I could do things
7、well. From then on, I concentrasted more on my studies. Now Im a middle school student. Im always full of confidence in my studies because I know my parents are always behind me. I love my family. Without my family, I can do nothing. In my heart, family is the most important forever.3.根据提示词语，以“My En
8、glish Teacher“为题写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的一段话。(10 分)提示要点: .刘颖, 35 ,北京人, 中等个 ,教书 12 年 .兴趣广泛,喜欢弹钢琴, 打乒乓球 ,游泳.对学生友好,和蔼和亲. 课上的好,深受同学们喜爱.My English TeacherMy English teacher is Liu Ying. She is 35 years old. She comes from Beijing. She isnt tall or short. She has long hair and two big eyes. She has taught English for
9、ten years.She has many interests. She likes playing the piano. She is good at playing pingpong. She is interested in swimming. She is not only our teacher but also our friends. She teaches us so well that we all like her.4.根据提示和要求写一篇以“Yuan Longping”为题的短文。出生：1930 年。 毕业学校：1953 年毕业于西南农业大学。主要贡献：1973 年成功
10、培育杂交水稻，使得中国现在每年能生产足够的稻米来养活国人。业余爱好：拉小提琴，听音乐、看书和游泳。要求：以上内容不能遗漏，可适当发挥。字数：80 左右。Yuan LongpingYuan Longping is one of the greatest scientists in China. He was born in 1930 in Hunan Province. He graduated from the Southwest Agricultural University in 1953. After many years of hard work, he succeeded in de
11、veloping hybrid rice in 1973, Just because of this, China now produces enough rice to feed her people every year. In his spare time, he loves playing the violin, listening to music,reading and swimming.Its said that he is one of the richest people in China. But he cares about nothing but his researc
12、h.（二）日记类1.请根据提示写一篇日记。时间：六月二日，星期一事件：.在上学的路上,看到一男孩从自行车上摔下来。.你把他送到医院,并看望他,给他补课。 .他很感激。【参考范文】June 2 , MondayOn my way to school, I saw a boy fall off his bike, Luckily he wasnt badly hurt, but he couldnt move his leg, so I took him to the hospital at once. At the hospital the doctor said it was nothing
13、serious. After that I went to see him and helped him with his lessons. He thanked me. I said I only did What I should do.2.马强上周和父母乘火车去了一趟威海。请你根据他们在威海的日称安排，帮助马强写一篇日记来记录这一愉快的旅行。要求语言通顺，书写工整，词数不少于 50，开头和结尾以给出。日程安排：星期三：visit ,aunt, cousin 星期四：visit Weihai Park 星期五： visit the zoo 星期六：buy some gifts【参考范文】L
14、ast week, I took a train to Weihai with my parents.We stayed there for four days. On Wedneday, we visited my aunt.I met my little cousin,too. He is so lovely. We went to the Weihai Park on Thursday. We took some pictures there and we had a good time.On Friday we went to zoo to watch the animals. The
15、re I saw many animals like tigers, pandas , monkeys and some beautiful birds. We went shopping on Saturday and I bought a hat for my cousin and a bag for my aunt.We enjoyed ourselves in Weihai.Ill never forget the trip in my life.（三)说明、叙事类1.课余时光是我们忙碌学习生活的调节剂。你是如何支配自己闲暇时间的呢？看电视、做运动、听音乐、阅读书报、郊游、帮父母做家务
16、，还是请你以 “ My Free Time” 为题，描述一下自己的课余生活。注意：条例清楚,字迹公工整,词数 80 个左右。【参考范文】My Free TimeI have lots of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school. I like basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often watch TV or do some reading in the e
17、vening. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while. I find it is a good way to relax myself. Of course , I help myparents with the housework at the weekends .I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends. We always have a good time.2.现在,因特网对人们来说越来
18、越重要了。请根据提示内容向人们介绍一下因特网。.看国内新闻,获取其它信息。 .发 e-mail ，打电话。.阅读各种书籍,自学外语。 .欣赏音乐,观看体育比赛,玩棋、牌、游戏。.购物【参考范文】Everyone knows that the internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.On the internet we can watch news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can. We often send
19、 e-mails for our friends and make telephone calls to them as well. Besides that , we can go to school on the Net, read all kinds of books and even teach us English. We also enjoy music, watch ball matches on the net and play computer games. We can do shopping even without leaving our home.3.根据下列提示和要
20、求写一篇短文。要求意思连贯，符合逻辑。80-100 字。.昨晚我和妈妈出去散布； .在路上我们遇见了一个外国人；.他向我询问去世纪饭店(the Century Hotel)的路。我告诉他沿着这条路往前走，在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。.他非常感谢我，我也为能帮他而感到自豪。.妈妈也为我感到自豪，并鼓励我一定要把英语学好。 【参考范文】 Yesterday evening I went out for a walk with my mother. On the road, we met a foreigner. He asked me the way to the Century Hotel
21、. I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, and then he could see the hotel. He thanked me very much for my help. I was happy that I could help him. Mother was also very proud of me and encouraged to study English well.4.初中三年的校园生活，相信老师和你有过多次的谈话，有表扬、有鼓励、有期待等。其中一定有一次谈话让
22、你请根据所给汉语提示，以“A talk with her / him”为题，用英文写一段话，不少于 80 个单词，内容必须包括以下提示中的三点：简要描述和你谈话的老师。 谈话的时间和地点、原因及主要内容。 谈话后你的(心情、打算)【参考范文】 A talk with herMiss Wang is an English teacher.She is very kind and helpful. When I was in Grade One, my English was very poor. Once I failed in English exam again. I was told to
23、 go to her office. To my surprise, She wasnt angry with me. She told me to be sure of myself, be more careful in class and practise English as much as possible.I felt happy and excited after the talk and I made up my mind to work harder at English. My English is much better now and I will never forg
24、et the talk.5.某英文报举办“ 家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请你根据下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇 90 字左右的短文。过去 1.生活贫困，房屋破旧。2.污染严重，垃圾满地。3.交通不便，游客很少。 现在 1.生活：住房宽敞、明亮；许多人有自己的汽车。2.环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝3.旅游：每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。将来 请你展望家乡的未来 注意：1.文中不得出现具体的地名，否则扣分；2.标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.生词：环境 environment; 污染 pollution;方便 convenient.【参
25、考范文】The Changes of My HometownIn the past , My hometown was very small.People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere.The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. Th
26、e environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life.Their houses are larger and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all ove
27、r the world come to visit our city.Im sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.6.健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢？请根据下面的信息提示，写一篇短文，首句已给出。信息提示：. 健康饮食。 . 早睡早起,不熬夜。 . 参加运动,强身健体。要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在 80 词左右。【参考范文】 I think healthy habits are very important for us . As w
28、e know , we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the morning . We must also have the right kind of food.Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food. Dont forget to wash your hands before meals. Staying up late at night is bad for o
29、ur health . If we cant get enough sleep. We may have a headache. We should go to bed early and go to bed early. Of course its necessary for us to take exercise . Exercise will keep us active and strong.7. Miss Gao 组织了一次班会，就有关交通安全注意事项进行讨论，你联系实际生活参与了讨论。请把你的意见整理一下，约 80 字，内容要求如下：.行走时的注意事项； .骑车时的注意事项；.乘公
30、共汽车时的注意事项。【参考范文】 When we are walking, we should walk on the sidewalk. At the crossing, we Shouldnt cross the road until the traffic stops. Dont play basketball, read books or listen to music while walking. When we are riding a bike, we should watch ahead and keep both Hands on the handle bars. Dont
31、carry anyone on your bike. Its not safe. When we are taking a bus, we should stand in line and get on ( off ) before it stops.8.拥有一个干净、优美的学习环境非常重要，我们应该保持校园环境的清洁.请你以 “How to Make Our School Clean and Beautiful” 为题,写一篇 60-80词的话。提示词: spit(吐痰), public places(公共场所), throw rubbish(扔垃圾), protect the enviro
32、nment(保护环境).【参考范文】 How to Make Our School Clean and BeautifulOur school is like our home. We should love it. Its our duty to keep it clean and beautiful all the time. We should plant more trees and flowers in it. We shouldnt spit in public places,such as in the library, in the classroom.We should ne
33、ither draw pictures on the wall nor throw any rubbish around us. If everyone tries his best to protect our school environment, Im sure our school will be more beautiful.9. 很多父母希望孩子把时间花在学习上.如:不让做家务;不许看电视谈谈你的想法用英语表达出来.词数六十左右.【参考范文】 Yesterday afternoon, I went home after school. I wanted to help my fat
34、her to sweep the floor, but he said, “You neednt do that. Do some reading!” later ,When I was watching TV, my mother came and turned off the TV and shouted to me, “ You shouldnt waste your time ! Go to study !”Watching TV has become part of our life.Its useful. Yes, It can also be harmful. If we spe
35、nd too much time on it, we may have no time to study or do other important things. Watching TV too much is bad for our eyes. Some students have to wear glasses because of it. Some TV programmes are unhealthy and some students may copy what they see on it. So I dont often watch TV.10.请用英语表达下面的内容。要点如下
36、：.明天是星期天，同学们到医院看望 Mr.Smith。.早上九点钟校门口集合，乘公共汽车去。.Mr. Smith 是我们的英语老师，他生病住院了。.请你建议带一件礼物，并说明理由。要求：不要逐字翻译。字数 60-80【参考范文】 Mr. Smith is our English teacher. He is very kind to us and teaches us very well. He fell ill last week and now he is in hospital. Tomorrow is Sunday. We are going to see him together.
37、We will meet at the school gate at nine , then well go to the hospital by bus. I think we should buy him some flowers because fresh and beautiful flowers will make him feel good and happy.11. The summer holiday is coming. What are you going to do? please write a passage with the title“What are you g
38、oing to do in the summer holiday?”(字数 60)【参考范文】 The plan of my summer holidayThe summer holiday is coming soon. Ill go to Beijing with my parents. There are many places of great interest there. Ill take a camera and some money with me. Ill take some photos in front of the Tiananmen Square. Ill also
39、visit the Great Wall.I think it must be wonderful. Ill take photos of the people in Beijing. And Ill visit Beijing Hutongs, too. I hope we will have a good time.12.根据提示请向你的外国朋友描述一下中国的春节写一篇语言连贯的短文，字数 40-70 之间，最多不超过 80 字。提示:important , winter , holiday , get together , dinner , new clothes , visit , e
40、njoy , the Spring Festival.【参考范文】 The Spring Festival is the most important holiday in China. It usually comes in January or in February. Usually we have a long holiday. People in families get together, People usually buy New Year pictures and put it on the wall before the Eve. On that day we usuall
41、y have a big dinner. Children are wearing new clothes , We visit other people in their families . We have dumplings and many other delicious things.I like the Spring Festival very much because I always have a good time during those days.13.以 My Familys Mid-autumn Day 为题目，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文。内容提示：.介绍中秋节和中
42、秋节日期。 .介绍中秋节的传统食品和过节方式。.你的家人们一起过节的情景。【参考范文】 My Familys Mid-autumn DayMid-autumn Day is a Chinese festival and it is between August and September. Chinese people usually get together to celebrate it at home. On that evening they eat moon cakes, dumplings and some fruits. They also watch the moon outs
43、ide their houses.I like Mid-autumn Day very much. On that day we always go to my grandparents house. So do my uncles and aunts. We celebrate it there. All of us usually take something delicious to my grandparents. They always are very glad to see us. Then we eat moon cakes when we watch the moon.At
44、that time everyone is very happy. I love all of my families. I love Mid-autumn Day.14.请根据提示，写一篇 Pandas 为题的 60-70 词的短文。提示: 目前全世界大约有 1000 多只大熊猫，主要生活在四川省。体型肥硕似熊，但头圆尾短，头部和身体毛色黑白相间。主要食物是竹子。 出生幼仔非常小，一般只有 100 多克。熊猫玩的时候像小孩。 世界人民都喜欢大熊猫。【参考范文】 PandasDo you like pandas? What do you know about them? Let me tell
45、 you something about them.There are only about 1000 pandas in the world now. They mainly live in Sichuang Province , China. A panda has a big head and a very short tall. Its black and white. It likes eating bamboos very much. It is fat like a bear.But it is very small at birth. It is only 100 grams.
46、 When they play, they look like children.People all over the world love pandas. We should look after them well.15.请根据下面的提示，写一篇“An accident”为题的记叙文，词数 70 左右。提示： 踢足球时，摔倒双腿受伤。 同学们送我去医院。 住院期间，一些同学来看我，帮我学习功课。 我返校后很快赶上别人，所有考试及格。 感谢同学们的帮助，今后我也会尽力帮助身边的人。【参考范文】 One day when I was playing football with my clas
47、smates on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs badly.My classmates took me to the hospital at once. During my stay in the hospital ,some of my classmates came to see me and helped me with my lessons. So I caught up with others after I came back to school and passed all the exams. Thats very
48、kind of them.I will try my best to help others in the future.（四）应用文类1.假如明天是星期六,你班将组织一次野外徒步旅行，请你拟一份 7-8 句的口头通知。通知包括下列内容。活动时间：明天(星期六)活动内容：野外徒步旅行(hike on ones field trip); 登山(mountain)顶、在山上野餐。携带物品: 带些食物饮料,穿结实的鞋.集合时间: 早上七点半，要按时到集合地点：校门口要求：语句通顺,语意连贯,要点齐全,书写清晰,紧扣主体,适当发挥.Attention, please !_Thats all. Than
49、k you.【参考范文】 Attention, please. Tomorrow is Saturday. We are going to hike to the top of a mountain. Please wear strong shoes and bring some food and drink with you. We are going to have a picnic on the mountain. Well meet at the school gate at 7:30 tomorrow morning. Dont be late. Thats all, thank you.2.假如你是初三.三班的李强 ,今天下午你的书包丢在了微机室,里面有一本英语书,一本词典,一把钥匙和一些钱,你很着急,若有拾到者,请告知。要求: 根据上述内容写一篇丢失其事。【参考范文】A lost schoolbag
