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1写作园地回复电子邮件写作[感悟范文]假定你是中学生李华，在一位名叫 TigerMom 的学生家长的博客上看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。I'm the mother of a fourteen­year­old girl. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?写作要点：1.表明自己的看法；2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；3.提出至少两条建议。要求：词数不少于 120。参考词汇：评价 evaluate[范文]Hi, TigerMom，What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. ①My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.②Although high grades play an important part in evaluating students and their future university admission, yet development in emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. ③There are many examples around us. ④Some all­A students in school have turned out not to be so successful in society as expected. ⑤The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. ⑥In addition, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.⑦So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. ⑧More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities as we teenagers often do. ⑨I hope you will change your mind and things will go smoothly.Yours，Li Hua[技法讨论]本模块要求回复一封电子邮件，回复电子邮件是书信的一种格式，其目的是解答有关组织或个人提出或出现的问题。其他像回帖、对于博客内容的回复，版主对于留言的回复，2本质上类似于回复电子邮件，高考也经常会考到。如：2009 年陕西的回帖、2009 年湖北的回一封电子邮件、2009 年重庆的发送一封电子邮件、2010 年山东和陕西 2011 年天津的写一封电子邮件、2011 年陕西的回复博客。电子邮件的写作步骤：1．要有一个说明性的、合适的主题。其目的在于让收信者快速地了解电子邮件的主要内容。如：Life in Britain/Congratulations from Wang Hai 等。2．电子邮件正文的开头部分必须呈现邮件的要点，然后再详细介绍一些辅助性的内容。作者必须根据被说明对象的特征，有序地列出写作提纲。3．要用简练的语言。电子邮件的语言主要讲究简洁、真实、准确，如maybe，possible，most of 等不确定的表达方法是不宜多用的，但可用一些具体的数目作辅助说明。特别是在一些商务性的电子邮件中，语言的正确性尤其重要。黄金表达1. 开头常用句式：I'm glad to hear from you.How nice it was to receive your e­mail.It gives me a great pleasure to receive your kind letter of.Many thanks for your last letter.I'm writing to ask if you can come next week.How time flies! It's three months since we last met.I have just received your e­mail.I must apologize for not having written an e­mail to you previously.2. 结尾常用句式：Best wishes/regards to you.Waiting for your good news.Looking forward to your early reply.Hoping to hear from you soon.With best wishes to you.Please remember me to your whole family.Give my best regards (wishes) to your mother.Wish you a pleasant journey.I'm expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.亮点分析：亮点一：①句中使用了 that 引导的表语从句，且从句中运用 it 作形式主语。亮点二：②句中使用了让步状语从句，而且短语 play an important part in 和词汇3ignore 的使用也很恰当。亮点三：④句中 so.as 结构的运用使得句子更加复杂得体。亮点四：⑤句中使用了句式“The reason is that.”阐明了④句所讲述的现象的原因。亮点五：⑥句中连接副词 in addition 和短语 by no means 的使用使作者的理由更加有力。亮点六：⑧句中两个祈使句的使用更能触动 TigerMom。[类文演练]假设你叫张明，你的美国网友 Jane 想了解你对上网的看法。请根据下面提供的信息，用英语给 Jane 发一封 100 词左右的电子邮件。1.能获得更多的信息，可上网学习，使联系更加方便。2.可以聊天、玩游戏，但很浪费时间，网上有有害的内容。3.建议要学会利用网络学习，时间应有限制。[联想词汇]1. 上网 ________________答案：on the Internet2. 最新信息 ________________答案：the latest information3. 保持联系 ________________答案：keep in touch4. 发送和接收电子邮件 ________________答案：send and receive e­mails[连词成句]1. They can get a great deal of ________________.通过网络他们能得大量新信息。答案：the latest information through the Internet2. ____________easy and convenient ____________.跟朋友保持联系更加方便容易。答案：It is; to keep in touch with friends3. Some students have spent too much time ________and ________.一些学生花太多时间上网聊天玩游戏。答案：chatting; playing games on the Internet[连句成章]_______________________________________________________________________________4___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Dear Jane，I would like to give you my opinion about being on the Internet.More and more middle school students here are starting using the Internet, through which they can get a great deal of the latest information. They can enjoy lessons given by the best teachers of net­schools at home. And it is easy and convenient to keep in touch with friends by sending and receiving e­mails.On the other hand, some students have spent too much time chatting and playing games on the Internet. And there is something harmful to the students.At last, I suggest that students should make good use of the Internet for their studies and not be online for too long each time.Yours，Zhang Ming