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    1、2022高考英语新高考I卷作文解读【考题】第四部分 写作(共两节、满分40分)第一节(满分15分)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Caroline,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua解题思路(写前四审)1. 审题材:邀请信2. 审时态:一般现在时为主3. 审人称:第二、一人称为主4. 审要点:构思文章是否符合题目要求,主旨突出,内容要点齐全,写作对象明确,语言的选用得当,符

    2、合要求等。解题思路(分段落,列提纲)第一段:作用:开篇。要求:开门见山,点名主题,篇幅:2-3行:2句-3句。自我介绍,表明写作目的,即邀请外教接受访谈。I am Li Hua, in charge of “Talk and Talk”, an English program from the Campus Broadcasting Station, As your student as well, I will be very honored if you can accept my invitation to do am interview. 第二段:作用:文章主体内容。要求:层次分明,逻

    3、辑清晰,要点齐全。篇幅:4-5行,4-5个句子。1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。“Talk and Talk” is a face to face interview about some hot topics in and out of campus. Besides its practical content, the the interviewees, who are invited to attend this program, also contribute a lot to its high reputation. Broadcast every day, “Talk and

    4、Talk” contains a large amount of information from domestic affairs to the international political situation, from history events to the latest foot-ball games.And the most important character is its fast pace. Because of this fast pace, news programs can contain much information in a short time.第三段:

    5、结尾段,作用:收尾,点题,补充其他细节等。要求:概括,得体。篇幅2行左右,1-2个句子。2.访谈的时间和话题。Id like to interview something about your impression on China, about how you comment your life here and your advice on how to improve oral English. If it is convenient for you, the date is set at 7 p.m. next Monday. By the way,. weve prepared a

    6、secret gift for you and please call me at anytime if you have any question. Thank you in advance. 作文答题纸一共13行,字数分布要均匀。解题思路(列好提纲后三审)1. 检查时态、语态、单词拼写、标点符号是否有错误。2. 句子的时态,主谓,代词要做到一致;句子谓语要完整;习惯用法,固定搭配要正确;冠词,形容词,副词及连词要得当;有没有合适的被动语态;有没有双谓语或者没有谓语的情况等。3. 根据内容要点改写句子、合并句子、用非谓语动词改写句子、用高级替代词、用高级句式润色文章、运用适当的过渡词加强逻辑

    7、等。参考范文1Dear Caroline,I am Li Hua, in charge of “Talk and Talk”, an English program from the Campus Broadcasting Station, As your student as well, I will be very honored if you can accept my invitation to do am interview. “Talk and Talk” is a face to face interview about some hot topics in and out of

    8、 campus. Besides its practical content, ranging from history events to the latest foot-ball games. the the interviewees, who are invited to attend this program, also contribute a lot to its high reputation, such as our principal, and our mayor as well. Broadcast every day, “Talk and Talk” contains a

    9、 large amount of information with a fast pace, because of which, news programs can contain much information in a short time.Id like to interview something about your impression on this Winter Olympics in China and your advice on how to improve oral English. If it is convenient for you, the date is s

    10、et at 7 p.m. next Monday. By the way,. weve prepared a secret gift for you and please call me at anytime if you have any question. Thank you in advance. (180)Yours sincerely,Li Hua点评:这篇范文参考了英语节目的介绍,突出节目的特色,进行详细介绍。内容上力求新颖,接地气。参考范文2Dear Caroline,I am Li Hua, head of “Talk and Talk”, an English program

    11、 from the Campus Broadcasting Station and I am wiring to invite you as an interviewee about English study. I would like to introduce this program to you. Aiming to promote the distance between teachers and students, it has enjoyed popularity in campus, owing to its casual and easy style. Every inter

    12、viewed teacher will talk freely to share anything interesting with us. Through this interview, a better relationship is built up and we gain a lot. If it is convenient for you next Monday. I expect to have a wonderful talk with you from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. The topic is proper ways to better our English

    13、 learning. We would be grateful for your presence and get your appropriate instruction before long. (132)Yours sincerely,Li Hua点评:这篇范文从学生角度出发,内容简单,通俗易懂,从学生实际需求出发探讨谈话内容。要点齐全。 语篇分析写作体裁应用文(邀请信)写作题材校园生活,课外活动。试题情境人与自我:人物访谈的形式来促进个人的发展四层分析核心价值试题要求考生根据设计的情节给外教写邮件,并且邀请他参加谈话节目,对于采访的内容进行一个设计,试题具有开放性的特点,要点设计比较灵

    14、活,要求考生紧扣主题,内容上比较贴合中学生的实际,谈话类的节目形式比较轻松,结合实际添加必要的细节,使短文的内容更加充实。学科素养这道题鼓励学生在创作时要思考和关注人际交流互动,通过一种中学生喜闻乐见的广播的形式,对话的形式,形成一种平等的,轻松的交流氛围,能够增加师生之间的互动。关键能力在考生相对熟悉的交际环境当中,要求考生完成一篇内容完整逻辑清晰的邀请信,同时考生需要结合自身的生活经验,这个谈访谈类节目,学生希望参与的互动交流,创造性地解决情境设置中的问题,提出一些符合中学生发展的一些谈话内容,反映了考生在实践探索中的操作运用能力语言表达能力和创新思维能力,同时,对于考察考生的交际学习和思

    15、辨素养都有考察。必备知识词汇知识,语法知识与语用知识和语篇知识。四翼分析考生需要紧扣主题,抓住要点,同时,应该结合自己的生活体验,外教的身份参加谈话,适当增加细节,比如说谈话的内容可以天马行空,也可以局限于学习方面,体现了试题的基础性应用性的特点。同时考生有需要充分发挥想象力,创造性地提出切实可行谈话内容,达到有效的交际目的同时呢,又能够啊促进谈话类师生的关系,反映了试题考查综合性和创新性的特点。备考解读年份内容高考命题趋势启示以及备考意见2022全国I卷试题要求考生根据设计的情节给外教写邮件,并且邀请他参加谈话节目,对于采访的内容进行一个设计,注重个人发展的话题,形式比较新颖,让学生有充分的

    16、发挥和想象的空间。2021全国I卷写给校报(Youth青年),创刊十周年。所给题目:Youth and Me 写作目的:表达对校报成立十周年的祝贺和祝愿,从学生读者的角度出发,结合个人读报体验。参考资料1:1、Were throwing a surprise party for.Wed like to invite you to.我们将为举办惊喜派对。我们想邀请你2、Its my honor to invite you to.非常荣幸地邀请你3、I wonder if you would like to come to.我想知道你是否愿意来4、We are having/planning .o

    17、n.(date) and we feel it would be a great idea if you can join us.我们将于(日期)举行(活动),如果你能来参加就太好了。5、Im looking forward to seeing you.盼望着见到你。6、Im sure youll have a good time.我确信你会玩得开心。7、I do hope that you can make it to .我真心希望你能8、I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.如果你能接受我的邀请,我会非常感激。邀请信

    18、类英语作文必背句型1、Here are some details about this activity./The following are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.活动的细节如下。2、To begin with, we will . Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as.which will.首先,我们将此外,将会有很多活动,例如这将3、This will be followed by.这

    19、之后将会有参考资料2:英语邀请信 Dear Miss ChangWe have planned a house party as a sort of farewell before our trip to Soochow. and weare particularly anxious to have you join us.I hope there is nothing to prevent you fromcoming out to canton on February 25th and remaining here with us until the Eighth of March.Mr.

    20、Simpson Chen and Mr.And Mrs.L.T.Ying will be here too,along with severa lothers whom you do not know,but whom I am most anxious to have you meet.I am enclosing a time-table for your convenience,AndI have checked the two tra ins that I believe are most convenient for you.If you take the 7:10 in the m

    21、orn ing you will arrive hereat 11,and you will be able to meet some of our guests at tiffin at 12.There is an earlier trainin the morning if you prefer it.If y ou let me know which train you expect to take,I will see that there shall be a car at the station to meet you.Very cordially yours,Margaret

    22、Li-Huang参考资料3:主持人:各位好,欢迎收看交通在线,我是主持人A。今天请到我们演播室里的是来自南京市玄武区交警大队第二支队大队长B,让我们一起同B探讨我们生活中的交通问题和怎样降低交通事故发生率。你好, Hello everybody, Welcome to the online traffic, Im the host Mr Zhang, today the second team captains from Nanjing Xuanwu borough traffic police brigade Comes to the scene of the show , now let

    23、us welcome MR yang, Today we will talk about the traffic problem in our life and how to reduce the incidence of traffic accidents together with MR yang,hello MR yang大队长:你好,主持人,各位观众朋友们好。hello host,hello Everyone audience friends,主持人:B,现在南京市的交通在上下班高峰期,经常出现拥堵现象,是什么造成这种现象的呢?Nanjings traffic in the rush

    24、hour now often appears congestion phenomenon, what cause this phenomenon?大队长:随着市民生活质量的提高,人们对物质的要求也就越来越高As people life quality rise, people are more and more high to the requirement of material,所以现在南京市40%的居民都有自己的私家车,So now, 40% of the residents of Nanjing has its own private cars很多人不想乘坐公交去上班,就开车去上班,A

    25、 lot of people dont want to go to work by bus, So they drive to work从而造成道路上的车流量增大,进而导致在上下班时道路拥堵的现象。Resulting in increase of road traffic, leading to road congestion phenomenon during work主持人:除了私家车的增多,还有其他原因吗?In addition to the increase in the number of private cars, there are other reasons大队长:另外一个原因

    26、,也是一个很重要的原因,就是我们个别市民的个人素质不是很高,Another reason, is also a very important reason, is our individual citizens personal quality is not high经常闯红灯,造成车辆不能正常的行驶,从而导致车型速度慢,这也是导致交通拥堵的重要原因。They often go through a red light, causing vehicles can not be normal, which may lead to a slow car, this is also the impor

    27、tant reasons for traffic congestion主持人:B说的第二个原因呢,确实是发生在我们周围,B says the second reason,is indeed happening all around us一些市民就是在红灯还有十来秒的时候就开始去穿越人行道,从而使得过往的车辆减速行驶甚至是停下来,这样也是很不文明的行为。Some citizens can not wait to cross the pavement before the red light turn red , so as to make the vehicles slow down or ev

    28、en stop, this also is very uncivilized behavior.宁可多等一分,也不强行一秒。We should keep Would rather wait a minute, not to force a second in mind大队长:还有一个因素也是应该考虑的,There is another factor also shouldbe considered就是南京现在正在修建地铁,造成路面的阻塞,也导致了车流速度比较慢。预计是20xx年年底,南京市地铁全面开通,这将会大大减轻路上交通的压力。There is another factor also sh

    29、ould be considered, thatis the subway is being built in Nanjing now, causing the road block,and also leads to traffic speed slow. Expected by the end of 2015, the Nanjing subway will comprehensive open, which will greatly alleviates the traffic pressure主持人:地铁是一项很重要的惠民工程,这也将给南京带来不可估量的发展。但是现在的交通事故发生的特

    30、别频繁,我们应该如何去减少交通事故的发生呢?Subway is a very important project, it will bring immeasurable development in Nanjing. But now facing particularly frequent traffic accidents, what should we do to reduce the number of traffic accidents?大队长:80%的交通事故都是因为没有遵守交通法规所造成的,出现最多的是醉酒驾车所导致的交通事故,所以在这里再次提醒广大司机朋友,醉酒不驾车,驾车不醉酒

    31、。同时呢,也提醒你们驾车时要注意去观察,遇到可疑车辆就尽可能的去避让,确保自己的行车安全。80% of all traffic accidents happen because of failure to observe the traffic rules, the most traffic accidents caused by drunk driving, so once again remind the driver friends here,do not drive the car when after you drink .At the same time, also remind

    32、the drivers that pay attention to the things around, and avoid suspicious vehicles to ensure both you safe .主持人:喝酒误事,不仅是对自己身体的不负责任,也是对家人的不负责任,更是对别人生命的一种亵渎,drinking is not only irresponsible of her body, but also to the family,that behavior is also a blasphemy to others马上是“国庆节十一”长假了, the National Day

    33、 long vacation is right away对于辛苦工作的朋友们可以出去旅游没放松一下紧张的心情,也释放一下工作压力, for the hard working people, they can go out to travel to relax tense mood, and also release the pressure of work但是这期间出行安全是不可少的,B,你要给各位什么出行建议呢?But during this travel, security is important ,B, what are you going to give your travel ad

    34、vice?大队长:十一,七天的长假,广大朋友要是驾车出远门旅游,要注意行车时的安全,喝酒了千万别开车,同时也要注意系好安全带,若是在南京市游玩,骑自行车出行会是另一番的滋味,同时也为南京的洁净的环境做出一份贡献。好,祝大家国庆玩的愉快Seven days holiday, if the broad masses of friends choose to drive out to enjoy your tourism, attention should be paid to the safety of driving, drink dont drive, also should pay atte

    35、ntion to fasten your seat belt at the same time, if in Nanjing, riding a bicycle trip will be the taste of another time, but also contributing to a clean environment in Nanjing. Well, I wish you all enjoy your National Day。 主持人:刚才B的话,给大家一个很不错的建议啊B just now give us a good suggestion,现在我们正在提倡绿色出行,Now

    36、we are promoting green travel所以不远行的朋友可以骑上自行车欣赏南京的古韵。So the friends who do not want to go far can ride bicycle to appreciate Nanjing elegance好,谢谢B能到我们演播室,Thank you to our studio B祝大家十一玩的开心,下次节目,再见I wish you all have a good time,see you next time, bye参考资料4:The News Report contains a large amount of in

    37、formation from domestic affairs to the international political situation from history events to the latest foot-ball games.And the most important character is its fast pace. Because of this fast pace, news programs can contain much information in a short time.新闻报道包含大量信息,从国内大事到国际政治形势,从历史事件到最近的足球比赛。最重

    38、要的特点是它的速度很快。因为它的速度快,新闻节目在很多的时间内能够包含大量的信息。评分原则:应用文写作评分标准一、评分原则 1. 本题总分为 15 分,按 5 个档次给分。 2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。 3. 词数少于 60 和多于 100 的,从总分中减去 2 分。 4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差,以致影响交际,可将

    39、分数降低一个档次。 二、 各档次的给分范围和要求 档次描述第五档(1315 分)- 覆盖所有内容要点。- 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。- 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但因尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级 词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。- 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档(1012 分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。- 虽漏掉 1、2 个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。- 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。- 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。- 应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。

    40、第三档(79 分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。- 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。- 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。- 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。- 应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(46 分)未适当完成试题规定的任务。- 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。- 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。- 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。- 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(13 分)未完成试题规定的任务。- 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原

    41、因可能是未理解试题要求。- 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。- 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。- 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0 分未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清2022高考英语新高考I卷作文解读【考题】读后续写第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in an

    42、d around the small town were warming up and walking the route (路线) through thick evergreen forest.I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked hi

    43、m why he wasnt with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!I quickly searched the crowd for the schools coach and asked him what had happened. I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him, he expla

    44、ined uncomfortably. I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.I bit back my frustration (懊恼). I knew the coach meant well-he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school h

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