1、基础写作“五步法”写作过程反思第一步：审题确定基调（审题）文体 人称 时态 开头 结尾 段落、 、 、第二步：圈点标注短语（遣词）在试卷相应的位置标注出重点词汇和短语的英文表达法，为书写全文扫清障碍，做好坚实的铺垫。私家车_共乘_一辆小车_完善_公共交通(系统)_以方便市民_修建_鼓励_骑自行车_省钱_省时_节能_环保_第三部：信息重组，理清思路（造句）对所读信息进行分析、综合和归纳，并按一定的顺序将中文信息加工、转化、重组成朦胧的英文雏形，并理清思路，为下一步的行文书写勾出轮廓，绘出蓝图。根据要点信息，在四个选项中选出较好的表达。1. （过渡句,承上启下）（1）It is time for
2、us to take some measures to solve the problem.（2）In order to solve these problems, we must take some measures from now on.（3）As a citizen, we have the responsibility to solve the problem of environment.（4） There are some solutions about the problems._2. 少开私家车，多人共乘一辆小车（1） First, citizens should drive
3、 their own cars as less as possible or use a car with several people.（2） First, you should drive cars less frequently and pick up as many as people as you can.（3）Firstly, we should take a bus instead of driving personal car if we go outside.（4）Firstly, people should drive less. Secondly, if it has s
4、ome people to take a car, they should take the same car._3. 政府完善公共交通以方便市民（1）Whats more, the government must improve the public traffic to make the citizens convenient.（2） Second, the government should improve the public traffic so as to make it more convenient for citizens.（3）Second, the government
5、should complete the public traffic to make people convenient.（4）Thirdly, the government should perfect the public transportation so that it is convenient for the citizens._4. 修建绿道，鼓励骑自行车（1） Finally, not only should green lanes be built, but also people should be encouraged to take bicycles.（2）Third,
6、 the government should build up more green lanes and encourage people to ride bikes instead of driving cars. （3）Thirdly, the government should build the green lanes and courage people to ride bikes.（4）Fourthly, the government should build green lanes and encourage people to ride bicycles._5. 好处：省钱、省
7、时、节能、环保（1）It also benefits us to do that, such as saving money, saving time, saving energy and protecting our environment.（2）These measures have many advantages, for example, it saves not only money and time, but energy, and most importantly, it is beneficial to our environment.（3）These solutions ar
8、e which we provide, are not only saving our money and time but we also save the sources of energy and protect our environment.（4）If people and government do this, it can save money, save time, save energy and protect the environment._第四步：行文顾前后（布局谋篇）注意整体规划，布局谋篇；行文时要稳步推进，张弛有度，最好一鼓作气，一气呵成。第五步：再读改错漏（查错漏
9、）要特别注意时态、语态、人称的格与数、主谓一致、单词拼写和习惯用法等，力求做到完美。练习：阅读下面短文，指出文章在“遣词、造句、布局、谋篇”四方面的不足，并进行修改。并根据评分标准，试给文章打分。（一）The problems of traffic jams and air pollution have aroused increasing attention recently. It is time for us to take some measures to solve the problem. First, citizens should drive their own cars as
10、 less as possible or use a car with several people. Whats more, the government must improve the public traffic to make the citizens convenient. Finally, not only should green lanes be built, but also people should be encouraged to take bicycles. It also benefits us to do that, such as saving money,
11、saving time, saving energy and protecting our environment.（82words）（2）The problems of traffic jams and air pollution have aroused increasing attention recently, and in order to solve these problems, we must take some measures from now on. First, you should drive cars less frequently and pick up as m
12、any as people as you can. Second, the government should improve the public traffic so as to make it more convenient for citizens. Third, the government should build up more green lanes and encourage people to ride bikes instead of driving cars. These measures have many advantages, for example, it sa
13、ves not only money and time, but energy, and most importantly, it is beneficial to our environment.（93words）（3）The problems of traffic jams and air pollution have aroused increasing attention recently. As a citizen, we have the responsibility to solve the problem of environment. Firstly, we should t
14、ake a bus instead of driving personal car if we go outside. Second, the government should complete the public traffic to make people convenient. Thirdly, the government should build the green lanes and courage people to ride bikes. These solutions are which we provide, are not only saving our money
15、and time but we also save the sources of energy and protect our environment. It is worth for us to do it. To live in the earth much longer, lets take action.（100words）（四）The problems of traffic jams and air pollution have aroused increasing attention recently. There are some solutions about the prob
16、lems. Firstly, people should drive less. Secondly, if it has some people to take a car, they should take the same car. Thirdly, the government should perfect the public transportation so that it is convenient for the citizens. Fourthly, the government should build green lanes and encourage people to
17、 ride bicycles. If people and government do this, it can save money, save time, save energy and protect the environment. （75words）语言（0-8） 内容 （0-5） 连贯（0-2） 总分（一）（二）（三）（四）基础写作评分标准语言: 8 分 7-8 具有很好的语言运用能力;语法和句子结构准确性高,词汇方面使用较好,只有少许错误.5-6 具有较好的语言运用能力;语法和句子结构准确性较好,有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解.3-4 语言运用能力一般;语法和句子结
18、构基本准确,语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解.1-2 语言运用能力较差;语法和句子结构基本不够准确,语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多,而且影响了句子意义的理解. 0 言运用能力很差;语法句子结构,词汇错误很多,句子意义无法理解.备注 每多或少写一个句子,扣 1 分. 内容: 5 分5 包括了所有信息内容. 4 包括了大部分信息内容. 3 包括了基本信息内容. 2 包括了小部分信息内容. 1 包括了少许信息内容. 0 没有包括所提供的信息内容. 连贯: 2 分 2 内容连贯,而且结构紧凑. 1.5 内容连贯性比较好,而且结构比较紧凑. 1 内容连贯性比较差,而且结构不够紧凑. 0 内容缺乏连贯行,而且结构松散. 备注 文不对题,给 0 分.
