1、自动评英语作文篇一：英语作文例文点评 88 篇借鉴和模仿是提高写作的基石。先借来再转为自用是巧学者之法。内容可适用于读写任务正文部分。-Miss.Q英语作文例文点评 88 篇 （收集于网络）【 要求】英语课上老师教给同学们一句英语格言“No Pains, No Gains” （不劳则不获） ，并让大家围绕如下三方面以这句格言为题写一篇短文。人们在困难面前容易气馁，并产生不劳而获的想法。“不劳则不获”这一格言能给予人鼓励。学生要取得优异成绩离不开苦功夫，所谓成功的秘诀即是辛勤的劳动。【 范文】No Pains, No GainsPeople attempting a task may be di
2、scouraged in front of difficulties. They start with a great interest and passion. When they find that the task will take much more effort than they thought, their interest diminishes and their passion wanes. At that time, they are likely to have the idea of reaping a good harvest without much labor.
3、 The old saying “No pains, no gains” comes as a word of cheer to these discouraged persons. No task that is really worth doing can be done either easily or quickly. No mastery of any knowledge or skill can be gained without painstaking efforts.We students shoulder the task of learning knowledge that
4、 calls for exertion. To improve our grades is what every student wants. We may envy those who have achieved excellence, and wonder what makes them succeed. In fact, their secret of success is no secret. It depends largely on their efforts. Good grades only belong to hardworking students.Many thanks
5、for the favor you did for me!【 评语】该文紧紧围绕题目给出的三方面加以论述，层次清楚，语言流畅易懂。 “interest diminishes and their passion wanes” 中词语搭配讲究， “reaping a good harvest without much labor” 用另一个习惯表达法点出了“No Pains, No Gains”的含义，同时又避免了重复。文章句式灵活，长短搭配得当，使文章朗朗上口，虽然是议论文，但却没有枯燥之感。【 要求】根据下面的提示写一篇短文，内容须包括下面几个要点。没有坚强的意志就不可能取得成功。事业成功须非
6、凡的干劲。有些人害怕困难，则一事无成。【 范文】Where there is a Will, There is a WayNo man can win success without strong will. We hear some men have got good results, but hardly realize that the great men had been making more efforts before they achieved success.Success requires an unusual amount of energy to overcome di
7、fficulties. So it is important for us to have great resolution.Some men tend to be afraid of difficulties. If they meet with some difficulties, they will give in. So they get nothing eventually.So lets make up our minds, stick to it and surely win success in our career.Focus on the most important th
8、ings to do to help your organization be successful. Dont focus on the easiest things.【 评语】对这种提纲式作文，一定要囊括所给提纲中的全部内容，但又无须拘泥于提纲，更不能逐字逐句地“翻译” 。对此应发挥自己的想像力和创造力，大胆地创作扩展。【 要求】很多人都希望能在事业上有所成就，但不是所有人都能取得胜利。成功需要顽强的意志，锲而不舍的努力，勤奋学习的精神。请你以此为主要内容，准备一篇百字左右的简短发言。【 范文】The way to successEveryone tries to achieve succ
9、ess in his/her career. But some finally attain their aims while others fail. Why? Some continue their cause to the end through long period of hard struggles, but others are easily disappointed and stop halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of stro
10、ng will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Life is short and we have too much to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can mak
11、e constant efforts.Dont be afraid of life. Believe that life is worth living, and your belief will help create the fact.【 评语】这是一篇议论文，作者首先提出问题，再提出自己观点：意志坚强、锲而不舍、勤奋，是成功的三大要素。作者在结尾，巧妙地运用了谚语“where there is a will there is a way”，使文章增色不少。【 要求】坚强的意志(Mans Strong Will)请以下面三句分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇以坚强的意志为题的文章。Stron
12、g will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality.There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will.It is not easy to cultivate a strong will.【 范文】Mans Strong WillStrong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality. It is neither genius nor extraordinary
13、ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship that befalls. It is strong will that enables us to endure the trying situation and to attain our goals. Strong will gives us light when we are in the dark, and encouragement when we are frustrated. With this meritorious quality,
14、 no enemy can overwhelm us, and no obstacles can stand in our way. As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.All pain helps to make us rise, how-ever much we may hate it at the time.There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will. During the Long March, the
15、Red Army soldiers met with the greatest hardship men have ever experienced. They had nothing to eat but grass roots and barks of trees. It was their strong will that made them defeat the hardship. Helen Keller, a strong willed American blind woman, mastered the English language and became a well-kno
16、wn educator. Such instances abound, and suffice it just to enumerate the two.Develop a high tolerance for ambiguity-youll be more satisfied.It is not easy to cultivate a strong will. First of all, we must set up a firm faith in our cause, namely, the causeof communism, and be ready to devote our liv
17、es to it. Secondly, we must learn from strong-willed persons, especially, from revolutionary martyrs who fought for communism to the last drop of blood. Finally, we should boldly go through trials and hardships to train our will so as to get rid of the weak points of our moral character.【 评语】本文为议论文。
18、首段的“neither?nor?” “It is strong will that?”，和“no enemy?no obstacles?”的运用，加强了文章的语气，突出了坚强意志的重要价值。段末的格言起到了画龙点睛的作用。第二段用了红军二万五千里长征和海伦?凯勒这两个例子，有力地证明了坚强的意志能使人获得成功这一主题。末段谈如何培养坚强的意志，层次清晰，观点正确，具有说服力。【 要求】以“Dont Stop Halfway”为题写一篇议论文。论证具体 结构完整 字数 100150【 范文】Dont Stop HalfwayWhen a man is doing some work, he de
19、sires some benefit from it. In order to get this benefit, the must do the task to the end and completely finish it.To finish a task, whether hard or not requires patience and firmness. Therefore when you have some work to do, you must do it faithfully, irrespective of the difficulty. Difficulties an
20、d obstacles are unavoidable; if you turn your back on meeting them, you will succeed in nothing, but if you can overcome them, you will accomplish something.To stop halfway is very bad. Suppose that a precious stone is at a great distance from you and you want to obtain it; you must reach for it; yo
21、u must not stop halfway. If you stop halfway, you will not only get nothing, but also lose something, because your time and strength will be wasted.It is a good thing for one to do one thing at a time, and never stop halfway.Cultivate a reputation for being reliable and hardworking, even if it means
22、 bucking peer pressure.【 评语】作者对不要半途而废的论证具体而有说服力，告诉我们半途而废不仅无法达到目标而且浪费时间、精力。段落安排逐层深入，循循善诱。全文整体结构完整、自然。【 要求】题目：Failure（失败）是一个人经常遇到的。失败不是好事，因为它使人的努力(efforts)付之东流。但是，失败也是好事，它可以教育我们使我们学到更多的东西。试写一短文就此谈谈你对失败的看法。【 范文】FailureNearly everybody regards failure as a bad thing. The efforts we have made seem to be
23、of no use and we feel very disappointed. Some people even lose the courage to start again or lose interest in life when the failure is a very great one.But failure can also benefit us. It can teach us a good lesson and make us experienced. Also, we can realize our own shortcomings and get a better k
24、nowledge of ourselves. So when we start again, we can succeed more easily.Therefore, failure not only disappoints us but also benefits us. When we fail, we should make full use of our failure and learn from our experience. Then, we may succeed in the future.Life is made up of ambiguous victories and
25、 nebulous defeats-claim them all as victories!【 评语】本文最大的优点是正反对照，条理清楚。高考作文时间很短，所以谋篇布局显得十分重要。本文脉络清楚，浅显易懂，应该说在考场中是容易取胜的。此外，本篇行文简练，显得干净利落。要求】每个人的生活中都有过失败的经历，失败对于我们来说，到底意味着什么？请你按如下提纲写一篇文章，谈谈你对失败的理解。失败是生活中的常事。人们对失败的态度各不相同。就我而言，我认为失败?【 范文】Is Failure a Bad ThingFailure is quite a common thing in our life. A
26、s long as we do things we will surely encounter difficulties. Of course we should try our best to get over them, but in many cases, it is not so easy, or even impossible. Then how should we face failure?Different people take different attitudes towards failure. When faced with failure, some people b
27、ecome frustrated and lose their selfconfidence. They refuse to make any further efforts. These people will probably never amount to anything in life. Some people just dont fear failure. They firmly believe that failure is the mother of success. As a result, not only can failure stop them, but they d
28、raw useful lessons from it and try even harder. Such people are sure to succeed someday.As for me, I dont think failure is a bad thing. Failure can never discourage me but only eich my experience and steel my will. With this positive attitude in mind, I will try hard in anything Im determined to acc
29、omplish and attain success in the end.【评语】本文按题目所给纲要分为三段。首段简要地论述了失败是每个人都会遇到的，末句用了一句设问，起到了承上启下的作用。第二段谈到了人们对失败的两种典型态度，先写错误观点进行铺垫，而后再写正确观点。这种安排自然突出了作者所赞同的态度，同时为引出第三段做好的了准备。末段作者则阐明了自己的观点。全文层次清楚，段落间衔接紧密而自然，主题突出，语言流畅，用词准确。【 要求】失败，是人人都不愿体验的结果。有人说失败使人消沉，有人说失败是成功之母。你对失败的态度怎样？写一篇短文。字数 150200 字，题目自拟。【 范文】Is Fai
30、lure a Bad Thing?Failure is a common thing in our daily lives. As students, We sometimes fail to get high scores on our examinations. When we play game, we sometimes cant avoid losing to others. And there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work. All these failures happen naturally and almost
31、every one of us has had such experiences.However, there are different attitudes towards failure. Some people lose heart in failure, they think the world has come to an end. Some people dont take failure seriously and just ignore it, while some others learn much from it.In my opinion, what really cou
32、nts is not failure itself, but what we think of failure and do after failure. As long as we believe in ourselves and dont give up, and in the mean time learn something from our failure, Well certainly be successful in the end. So Im never afraid of failure, for I believe that failure is not a bad th
33、ing, but the mother of success.看问题一定要看到正反两面，体现在文中，就往往是鲜明的对比。【 评语】表达思想清楚，内容比较充实，文字流畅，句子结构多样。第一段、第二段主题句简练而贴切，句间衔接比较自然，用词造句有不少闪光点，如：the world has come to an end 等。要求】请以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇题为“诚实”的文章。It is usually better to be honest than dishonest.One of the worst things about lying is that it results
34、in a guilty conscience.Honesty makes you happy and gain a good reputation.【 范文】honestyWe often praise somebody because of his diligence and honesty. So all the people think that honesty is a virtue and that it is the best policy.It is usually better to be honest than dishonest. People tend to believ
35、e an honest man, no matter what he does and what he says. On the contrary, dishonest people are not trustworthy. For this reason, honest people are always more successful than the dishonest. So it is better to be honest because it can help you succeed.One of the worst things about lying is that it r
36、esults in a guilty conscience. If a person tells lies, his face will turn red and his heart will beat faster. He will always live in fright.Honesty makes you happy and gains a good reputation. All people consider what youve said true and trust you just because you are an honest man. Therefore, you c
37、an say what you like and do what you like without fear. You will feel very happy. Likewise, just because of your honesty, people respect you and love you. Gradually, you will gain a good reputation. To be honest will ensure you a happy life.【 评语】该文内容切题，详略安排得当，重点放在诚实的益处，即第二段和第四段上。这两段的段末均有一句总结句与段首的主题句
38、相呼应，使段落结构完整，同时强化了主题。文章语言略显单调，但比较顺畅，表达也较清楚。【 要求】班会课上要求同学们为大家用英文讲述一个小哲理，要求条理清晰，有自己的见解。你的发言稿内容如下：真诚是一种重要的思想方法。应该弄清楚什么是真诚。为什么有时人们难以做到真诚。真诚，是一种人生态度。【 范文】On the TruthTruth is an attitude of the mind. It is important, if one does not wish to inconvenience and bore his or her friends. It means telling no li
39、es and never backing out of ones word.But it is more important to know what is the truth, and not to slide into those untruthful habits of thought which are so pleasant and so easy.There is a word named “the victory habit of mind”. People who have this mind are unduly preoccupied by what was sociall
40、y and morally convenient. One should have the courage to think uncomfortably, since it is only by rejecting the convenience that one can come to think the truth.Truth, is an attitude of the life.直线式思维，层层推进是英文的习惯。避免 Chinglish 不仅仅要防止出错，还要培养语感和思路。【 评语】这篇短文首尾照应，用同一句式，只换了一个单词：“mind” 、“life”，却把意思推进了一层，很符合
41、英篇二：基于语料库的英语作文自动在线批改方式评析龙源期刊网 .cn基于语料库的英语作文自动在线批改方式评析作者：刘金玲来源：中国科教创新导刊 2013 年第 10 期摘 要：本文通过其与传统的英语作文手工批阅方式的对比，对基于语料库的英语作文自动在线批改方式的优势和弊端进行评析。英语作文自动在线批改方式具有工作效率高、客观性和公平性强、批阅结果详细全面等优势，也存在机械性和盲目性、错误分析存在误差以及信度和效度仍然需要提高等弊端。所以大学英语教师不能把这种自动在线批改方式视为英语作文批改的捷径而对它过度依赖。关键词：英语作文 自动在线批改 手工批阅 优势 弊端中图分类号：G4 文献标识码： A
42、 文章编号：1673-9795（2013）04（a）-0035-02教育部于 2007 年公布的大学英语课程教学要求明确指出：大学英语的教学目标是培养学生的英语综合应用能力1。以此为指导，近年来，我国各高校的大学英语教学越来越重视培养学生的英语综合应用能力，并取得了很大进步。但作为学生英语综合运用能力具体体现的大学英语写作教学，其教学效果仍差强人意，进步不大。随着多媒体技术和计算机网络在外语教学与研究中的应用，许多大学英语教师也开始尝试利用多媒体和网络辅助进行大学英语写作教学，然而，当新技术最初带给他们的新鲜感消失后，他们发现，这些新技术对他们的帮助不大。究其原因，大学英语教师手工批阅英语作文
43、（尽管纸质作文变成了电子版作文）的方式没有改变，随之而来的弊端也就没有消失，成为制约大学英语写作教学的“瓶颈” 。这时，基于语料库的英语作文自动在线批改方式应运而生，使英语教师从以前繁重的作文批改任务中解放出来，提高了工作效率，因而也成为国内许多高校英语教师批阅作文的新手段。然而，当我们陶醉于新技术带给我们的新鲜、轻松、快捷、方便中时，也要居安思危，凡事有利必有弊，这种英语作文批改的新方式也不例外。所以，分析研究这种英语作文批阅新方式的优势和缺陷就成为我们面临的一个重要任务。在国外，自动作文评价系统（AEAS，Aut-omated Essay Assessment System） ，已经形成了
44、以自动作文评分（AES，Automated Essay Scoring）和计算机辅助写作（CAW，Computer Aided Writing）两个研究方向：前者主要应用于大规模测试评分；后者关注自动作文评估和写作教辅功能。国内外的研究者对 AES 简介、综述较多，对 CAW、人机评阅作文的关系探讨不够，对 AEAS 未来发展趋势的建议也较少2。在本文中，笔者将通过其与传统的英语作文手工批阅方式的对比，以目前在国内许多高校广泛使用的句酷批改网为例，对基于语料库的英语作文自动在线批改方式的优势和弊端进行评析。篇三：英语作文范文及评分细则议论文范例 1. Some of your classmat
45、es think that more pressure from academic studies is notbeneficial to students. You either agree or disagree with them. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:More Pressure from Academic Studies Does (or Does No) Good to Us You are to write in three partsIn the first part, sta
46、te clearly what your view isIn the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons or details.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.范例 2.Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, G
47、uangzhou, Xian, Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing and Shenyang. The results have shown that 67% of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrows money today is better. What do you thank?Write a composition of about 200 words. You are to write in three p
48、artsIn the first part, state clearly what your view isIn the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons or details.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.议论文评分标准1.总体原则1) 作文是否体现主题思想，即
49、是否切题2) 作文的组织结构是否合理，是否完成了三段式写作任务 3) 篇章是否得以自然衔接，句式用词是否多样化4) 语言是否通畅，是否有重大语法文字错误2.具体要求14-15 分内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,句式 用词富有变化 ,有 闪光点基本无语言错误.11-13 分 内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,少量语法错误8-10 分 内容基本切题 ,完整, 条理基本清楚,文章结构基本严谨,语法基本正确,语言基本通顺恰当.少量严重错误,一些词使用不当.5-7 分 内容基本切题 ,完整, 条理不够清楚,教明显的母语痕迹.较多语言错误,许多词使用不当.2-4 分 内容偏题,不完整,思路混乱,语句不完整,只有少数句子可以理解,词汇拼写错误严重3字数要求累计字数为 150-170 词，扣一分；累计字数为 130-150，扣 2分；累计字数为 110-130 词，扣 3 分；累计字数为 90-110 词，扣4 分；累计字数为 90 词以下，扣 10 分以上。4.注意事项1) 如照抄提示中原句，均不得计入所写字数。2) 只写一段者：0-4 分；只写两段者：0-9 分。 （指规定写三段的作文）说明文范例 1.The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节) is one of the i
