1、英语作文解决不平等问题篇一：英语作文开头结尾1）对立法：先引出其他人的不同看法，然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法，适用于有争议性的主题。1 When asked about., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that . But I think/view a bit differently.当被问及道的话题，大多数人认为，但是我却持有一点反对意见。2 When it comes to , some people believe that. Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse i
2、s true. There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements, but I tend to the former/latter.一提到一些人相信然后另一部分人却不这么认为。这两种观点都有相对正确的地方，但我更倾向于前者（后者）3 Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that. They claim/ believe/argue that . But I wonder/doubt whether.现在，普遍的观点认为. 他们坚信 但我对
3、此却表示怀疑.2）现象法：引出要剖析的现象或者问题，然后评论。1 Recently the rise in the problem/phenomenon of . has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.近来有个现象（问题）不断发生.并且已经受到公众广泛关注。2 Recently the issue of the problem/phenomenon of .has been brought into focus/into public attention.最近关于的现象（问题）已经进入了公众的视线。3 Inflatio
4、n/Corruption/Social inequality . is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.通货膨胀（腐败、社会不平等社会问题）已经成为了新的可怕的真相，使我们不得不持续地面对。3）观点法：开门见山，直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法。1 Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that.现在越来越多的人已经开
5、始意识到.2 Now there is a(n) growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to越来越多人已经意识到 的必要性3 Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of 现在人们已经不断地密切关注的重要性4 Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that是时候应该对用一种新的观点（态度）来看待. 了4）引用法：先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法，来引出文章要展开论述的
6、观点！1 Knowledge is power.This is the remark made by Bacon. This remark has been shared by more and more people.“知识就是力量 ”这是培根的名言，正被越来越多的人分享。2 Education is not complete with graduation.This is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion.“教育不应该随着毕业而结束。 ”这是一个著名
7、的美国哲学家的观点，现在越来越多人分享着他的名言。3 We often hear statements/words like those/this.我们经常听到这句名言.4 We often hear such traditional complains as this .我们经常听到这句古训.5）比较法：通过对过去、现在两种不同的倾向、观点的比较，引出文章要讨论的观点。1 For years, .had been viewed as But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ., people 多年来，普遍认为的观点是.
8、 但是现在人们正用一种新的眼光看.随着.的增长，人们还会.2 People used to think that . (In the past, ) But people now share this new idea.过去人们认为，但是现在人们有了新的观点。6）故事法：先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣，引出文章的主题。少用！1 Once in (a newspaper), I read of/learnt. The phenomenon of . has aroused public concern.曾经在报纸上我读到过这么一段事情. 这个现象已经引发了强烈的关注。2 I have a f
9、riend who . Should he ? Such a dilemma we are often confronted with in our daily life.我有个朋友他他应该这样吗？此类困难在我们日常生活中一直遇到。3Once upon a time, there lived a man who This story may be (unbelievable), but it still has a realistic significance now.从前有个人.这个故事也许是虚构的，但我认为现在很有现实意义1、结尾万能公式一：结论说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经
10、历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个总而言之之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子：Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.显而易见，我们可以做出以下结论，好的礼仪能够提升他人对自己的礼貌和尊重。更多过渡短语：tosum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of thi
11、s, thus更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that, Therefore, we can find that2、结尾万能公式二：建议如果说 结论是结尾最没用的废话，那么建议应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.显然，是时候我们应该采取措施了这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?更多句型：Accordingly,
12、 I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.精彩语句：Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论?Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion t
13、hat 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论?Hence/Therefore, wed better come to the conclusion that 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论 ?There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点 .All in all, we cannot live without But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problem
14、s that would arise.总之,我们没有 ?是无法生活的. 但同时 ,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.一、段首句1. 关于 ?人们有不同的观点。一些人认为?There are different opinions among people as to _ .Some people suggest that _.2. 俗话说（常言道）?，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。There is an old saying_. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in
15、 many cases even today.3. 现在， ?，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，?；其次，? 。更为糟糕的是? 。Today, _, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, _ Second,_. What makes things worse is that_.4. 现在， ?很普遍，许多人喜欢?，因为?，另外（而且）?。Nowadays，it is common to _. Many people like _ because _. Besides，_.5. 任何事物都是有两面性，?也
16、不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and _ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.6. 关于?人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）?，在他们看来，?Peoples opinions about _ vary from person to person. Some people say that _.To them,_.7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题?，这个问题变得越来越严重。Man is now facing a big problem _ whic
17、h is becoming more and more serious.8. ?已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。_ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9. ?在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。_ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day lif
18、e.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出?。很显然?，但是为什么呢？According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that_ while. Obviously，_，but why?（二）中间段落句1. 相反，有一些人赞成?，他们相信
19、?，而且，他们认为?。On the contrary，there are some people in favor of _.At the same time，they say_.篇二：英语作文一英语作文技巧一一、 好的英语作文的具体要求1要点全面、表达准确、语句连贯，符合交际要求。2能用书写体熟练清楚地书写，格式、连笔、词距、标点正确。3书写格式、行文及礼貌用语等无严重错误。4基本语法和常用句型无严重错误，意思表达清楚。5恰当使用复杂结构、新颖词汇和顺畅连接。二、英语作文写作要领1第一步是仔细审题。重点注意内容要点，写作对象和交际目的。2要写草稿，实在没时间也要写一个提纲。3确定好时态。转述
20、别人观点常用现在时。记叙经常发生的事用一般现在时，描写过去发生的事用过去时。4不出现中文，不用汉语拼音。不生造中国式的英语。要用你听过的话来说，用你读过的句子来写。5第一句很重要，不要轻易下笔。尾句部分容易出错，要留意。6为防止遗漏内容要点，可在原题上标出记号。7几个必要的连词一定要用，或顺接、或转折、或让步、或比较。8写记叙文，注意六个要素： who, where, when, why, how and the result.9议论文，注意论点与论据一致。还要注意是让你写一方观点还是介绍对立的两种观点。10应用文主要是写信或通知，告知活动安排。一般按时间顺序写比较稳妥。11试卷注意部分给出的
21、参考词汇应尽量用上，不要自作主张忽略不用。12词汇的闪光之处即不要重复你在本文中用过的和大家都可能用的。全是简单句得不了好分。要用新颖的词汇传达最通俗的信息。13采用多变的句式，如被动句式、定语从句，with 加复合宾语以及倒装句等。14有时候阅读题中的句型可以稍加改造，抄来用在自己的作文中。15字数一般应稍多于试题的最低要求，但不宜过长，因为言多有失。16写完后要检查复核，重点看动词的使用。最好是写完作文后先查查别的题型，因为自己刚写完的东西马上检查常常看不出问题。三、英语作文写作建议1经常写随笔，每日三五句。出点错误也没什么。2背诵小短文或漂亮句子，多多益善。3最好的练习材料就是近几年各地
22、的高考试题。练习时，先看题，自己写，写完后看答案，根据答案，修正自己的作文。但注意不要过多修正，要保持自己作文的原貌，每次只改动 34 个地方即可。4初学写作多写记叙文。5抄写短文，会使自己摆脱中文式的英文，可练习抄写新概念第二册。6多听、多说、多读对写作的提高至关重要。第一章 文章开头句型1、对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法, 适用于有争议性的主题.例如1When asked about., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that . But I think/view a bit differ
23、ently.当被问及 ，大多数人认为|说但是我有点不这麽认为。2When it comes to , some people bielive that . Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in botharguements/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter .)当它涉及 一些人相信其他人主张相反的观点。在这些观点里，有可能有一部分是真的，但是我倾向于前者或后者3Now, it is commonly/g
24、enerally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that They claim/ believe/argue that . But I wonder/doubt whether.现在，大家普遍认为他们主张但是我怀疑是否2、现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 .1 Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) . has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.最近， 问题（现象）的逐渐严重已经引起广泛的关注。2Recently th
25、e issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of .has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention)大意同上3Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality . is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.通货膨胀/腐败/ 社会不平等是另外一个新的令人感到苦涩的我们不得不学会去面对的一个事实。3、 观点法 -开门见山,直接
26、了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.1Never history has the change of been as evident as . Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of benn more visible/popular than.2Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming torealize/accept/(be aware) that.现在，越来越多人开始认为（意识到）3Now there is a growing awareness/r
27、ecognation to the necessity toNow people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of 大意同上4Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that. 也许，是时侯对观点拥有新的认识。4、 引用法 - 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!1Knowledge is power.such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been
28、 shared by more and more people .“知识就是力量”这句是培根的名言。这句名言已经被广泛的接受。Education is not complete with gradulation.Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opnion.“教育不是完成于毕业”这句是美国一位著名的哲学家所说的。越来越多的人接受这句话。2.How often we hear such statements/words like thoses /this
29、 . “”我们经常听到这样的话。In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this . 在我们的日常生活中，我们习惯于听到如此传统得解释“” 。3As the saying goes that正如某句名言说的“”5、 比较法 - 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.1For years, .had been viewed as . But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing . , people
30、 . .2People used to think that . (In the past, ) But people now share this new. 人们过去常常认为但是现在人们持这个观点。6、故事法 - 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的主题.1Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt The phenemenon of . has aroused public concern.这个现象激发人们的公共意识。2I have a friend who . Should he ? Such a dilemma we are often
31、 confront with in our daily life.如此进退两难的局面是我们日常生活中经常面对的。3Once upon a time , there lived a man who . This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now.很久以前， 也许这个故事令人难以置信，但它仍有重大的现实意义8、问题法 - 先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适用于有争议性的话题. Should/What ? Options of . vary greatly , some .,
32、 others . But in my opinion , .第二章文章中间主体内容句型原因结果分析1、基本原因 - 分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因.1Why . ? For one thing For another . 为什么？第一第二2The answer to this problem involes many factors. For one thing. For another Still another .这个问题的答案涉及到许多因素。第一第二另外3A number of factors , both physical and psychological a
33、ffect /both individual and social contribute to 许多因素，包括物质上的和精神上的个人原因都能导致2、 另一原因 - 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用!1Another important factor is 2 is also responsible for the change/problem.3Certainly , the . is not the sole reason for .当然，不是的唯一因素3、后果影响 - 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响 .1It will produce a profound/f
34、ar-reaching effect/impact on2In involves some serious consequence for 第三章 文章结尾形式1、结论性- 通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点 .1From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that . 从以上所讨论的，我们确实可以得出的结论。2In summary/In a word , it is more valuable .2、后果性- 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果.1We must ca
35、ll for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of . , if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of .我们必须提出一个紧急方案，因为当前的现象，如果被允许进行，将理所当然的导致的重大代价花费2Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that will be put in danger.明显的，如果我们对这个问题视而不见，将有更大的可能
36、被置于危险之中。3、号召性 - 呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.1It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of 是我们促使将不好的趋势结束的时候。2It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency. 有效的措施被用来改变这倾向是必须的。4、建议性 - 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法.1While it cannot be solved immed
37、iately, still there are ways. The most popular is Another method is . Still another one is .2Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation. 对这问题的察觉认识是面对这种情况的第一步。5、方向性的结尾方式 - 其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决提出总的, 大体的方向或者指明前景.1Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make som
38、e sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be recognized in a wide way .make some sense：有意义，讲得通，有道理2There is no quick method to the issue of , but might be helpful/benefical.3The great challenge today is There is much difficulty , but 6、意义性的结尾方式 - 文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义!
39、1Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort . It will not only benefit .but also benefit .2 In any case, whether it is posotive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly 。篇三：英语作文Attention should be criticized and educated app
40、roachRemember that a good teacher once said: God made mistakes is to the childrens rights,we are faced with is a teen character forming in the will of the minor students, they need tolerance. Tolerance give them correct their mistakes and shortcomings of the force. Toleranceis not the class teacher
41、of students erroneous thinking, behavior and indifference and indulgence, and only to students Gaicu create opportunities for students to avoid the psychological harm caused a way to solve problems and attitudes.In the education process, criticism is also indispensable means, but if undue criticism
42、easily lead to good intentions stem bad thing.Criticism must not use insulting language and innuendo language, we must make sincere, color temperature, gas and, tactful words,to seek truth from facts, master measured and pay attention to ways and means. Criticism is the player between the ideologica
43、l communicate with each other, help each other, to correct the mistakes of the students and awareness. Therefore, the criticism should be positive and encouraging.应注意批评教育的方法记住，一个好的老师曾经说过：“上帝犯错误是儿童的权利，“我们面临的是一个少女的未成年学生会形成，他们需要宽容。宽容给他们改正他们的错误和缺点的力量。 ”宽容不是学生的错误思想班主任，行为和冷漠和放纵，只有学生 gaicu 为学生创造心理伤害的机会，避免造
44、成的解决问题的方法和态度。在教育过程中，批评也是不可或缺的手段，但如果过分的批评很容易导致“好心干坏事。 ”批评不得使用侮辱性的语言和讽刺的语言，我们必须“真诚，色温，气和，委婉的话， “实事求是，掌握分寸，注意方法和手段。批评之间意识形态的玩家互相交流，互相帮助，纠正学生的错误和意识。因此，这种批评应该是积极和令人鼓舞的。表扬与批评今天这么多“人类灵魂的工程师 ”聚首在这里，探讨一个非常有意义的问题：表扬与批评，哪个更好？众所周知，表扬和批评，都是我们教育的重要方式。表扬是一种对学生思想和行为给予肯定评价，使其优点不断得到巩固和发展的教育方法。批评，则是一种较严厉、较直接的指正他人不良行为的
45、手段。两者相比较，我方认为“表扬比批评好！”美国著名的心理学家詹姆士说：“人类本质中最殷(yin) 切的需求就是渴望被肯定。 ”这种肯定、鼓励，就是表扬。谁不知，无论成人，还是孩子，没有人不喜欢受到夸奖；而抗拒批评却是人的一个天性，没有人天生就喜欢受到批评。伟大的马斯洛需要层次理论认为，人的生理和安全需要得到基本满足之后，就会产生强烈的自尊需要，即渴望得到别人的肯定和尊重，甚至是赞美和崇拜。古今中外，男女老少概莫能外。作为教育工作者， “教育艺术的本质在于唤醒、激励、鼓舞” 。正确的表扬作为一种“性价比”非常高的教育方式，可以对学生的行为起导向和激励的作用。从行为心理学角度说，表扬这种强化手段
46、，是使那些符合某种心愿的行为坚持下去的最好方式。古人云：“数子十过，不如奖子一功” ，足见其对表扬的推崇。历史和实践表明，表扬比批评有着压倒性的优势： 第一，正确的表扬符合人的身心发展规律，故而应用极其广泛。如前所述，每个都渴望得到肯定，每个人都有自尊心，满足人类普遍需求,实现人性深处的渴望,最好的方式就是表扬。尤其是孩子，心智尚不成熟，生性敏感而脆弱，采用批评，千万要慎之又慎。第二，表扬比批评更有力量。一句真诚的表扬会给人以力量和信心，催人奋进。从心理角度分析，表扬比批评更容易缩短心理距离，体现教育平等，创造教育奇迹。20 世纪末，中华大地上掀起的那场新课程改革的风暴大家并不陌生。其改革的缘
47、起，就是反思我们原来的教育不够民主，很不平等；过于严厉的规矩、制度和批评，严重束缚了孩子的个性，限制了学生的发展，几乎毁灭了中华民族的创造性至今没有一个本土的诺贝尔奖获得者就是一个有力的佐证。 第三，表扬作为正面教育原则的体现，是我们教育的主要手段，首选方式。虽然，批评在短期内也能使学生就范，却不一定真触动孩子，令其口服心服，其内驱力会产生逆反心理，极不利于心智健康和多元智慧的形成。因此，当今教育部文件中明确提出：“要改变过去过分强调选拔和甄别的功能，忽视改进与激励的功能” “多用采用激励性的语言，客观描述学生的进步、潜能与不足” 。中国教育，亟需“多一点表扬，少一些批评” 。综上所述，表扬的
48、确比批评好。表扬犹如一盏明灯，它能让迷茫的心灵看到通往前方的道路；它能使泄气的心灵看到光明的未来。表扬是照在我们头上的灿烂的阳光，它给予人的不仅是温暖，还有光明和力量。各位同仁，请少一些批评，多来些表扬吧！帮忙翻译成英文Today, so many engineers of human soulsgather here to discuss a very interesting question: praise and criticism, which better? As we all know, praise and criticism, are an important way of education. Recognition is a kind of thinking and behavior of students give
