1、 四级作文高分技巧写作模版及例文 (精选范文)四六级作文高分技巧一、四级作文概述四级作文是提纲作文，一般按提纲写出相应段落即可。在文章内容上无需追求高深新颖，切题合理便可落笔；在思路逻辑上则要求句意通顺，文字流畅；在文字表现上要求无语法错误，个别小错可忽略（如动介搭配，单词拼写等不涉及语法类小错） 。另外，值得一提的是，在篇章结构上建议写三段，所以即便题目只给出两个提纲，最好在完成两个提纲后，再多补充一段，所补内容不限，但须跟话题相关。马老师经过对多年四级的试卷分析，对于写作作文题目类型的总结：1. 校园生活类：例如：How to Survive College Life？Will onlin
2、e learning replace classroom teaching？ShouldEnglish Classes Be Compulsory for Undergraduates? Should Undergraduates Be Allowed to Get Married?2. 社会焦点类 ; 例如： Is Plastic Surgery the right choice? How to narrow the gap between the cities andcountry?3. 人际交往类：例如：Should we help strangers? Is it advisable
3、to look for friends online?4. 道德价值类：例如：Is honesty the best policy? Being a good citizen5. 休闲娱乐类：例如： Should we follow Fashions? The benefit of exercising二、高分作文标志1、四级 120-150 字；六级 150-180 字；2、是否长短句交叉；3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1、适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用
4、 we / I (比如写结尾时不用 举个经典结尾2004 年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2、善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如 however / therefore /for exampl
5、e/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3、一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现 good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable 代替proper, approaches 代替 ways, implement 代替 carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge 代替 enhance on
6、es competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)下面举一篇优秀作文(14 分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。Computer and I By SimmyI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information
7、i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 verythrilling 替换 excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.google 替换 searchan army of 替换 a lot ofThe dawn of the new
8、century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popularC
9、oincident with 非常地道的词汇，表达与一致的意思，替换 With Advancement 替换 developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter intoCurrent ( currently )替换 nowAppeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的For a start, we can, freely,
10、search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin withWe can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
11、our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动四级英语写作中垂悬结构现象1、垂悬结构不定式。To make friends， honesty is important.句中不定式短语 To make friends 的主语应该是人，而主句的主语是 honesty，两者不一致，构成了垂悬结构。有三种改正方法：（1） 将不定式短语改成相应的状语从句，可更正为：If one wants to make friends， honesty is important. （2
12、） 对主句做必要改动，使句子的主语与不定式短语的逻辑主语一致，可更正为：To make friends， one must be honest. （3） 给不定式短语加上自己的逻辑主语，可更正为：For one to make friends， honesty is important.2、垂悬结构分词。Spreading to the left， he jumped down from the armchair. 根据此句话的意思，分词短语的隐含逻辑主语应该是 the fire，而句子的主语是 he，两者不一致，构成了垂悬结构。有两种改正方法：（1）给分词短语带上一个自己的逻辑主语，使之成为
13、一个独立主格结构，可更正为，The fire spreading to the left， he jumped down from the armchair. （2）将分词短语改成相应的状语从句，可更正为：As/ When the fire spread to the left， he jumped down from the armchair.3、垂悬结构动名词。In running down the stairs， the clock struck twelve. 根据此句话的意思，句中“介词+动名词”这种介词词组在句中作状语，动名词短语 running down the stairs 的
14、逻辑主语应该是人，而句子的主语是the clock，两者不一致，构成了垂悬结构。有两种改正方法：（1）对主句做必要改动，使句子的主语与动名词短语的逻辑主语一致，可更正为：In running down the stairs， I heard the clock struck twelve.（2） 给动名词短语加上自己的逻辑主语，可更正为：In my running down the stairs， the clock struck twelve.4、垂悬结构介词短语。A t the age of ten， my father began to teach me Japanese.根据句子的正常
15、意思，应该是我 10 岁的时候，而不是父亲 10 岁的时候，故 at the age of ten 的逻辑主语应该是 I ， 而主句的主语是 my father， 构成了垂悬结构。需将介词短语改成相应的状语从句，可更正为：When I was ten years old， my father began to teach me Japanese.四级作文经常出项的问题问题一、不列提纲直接写作到了大学阶段，学生还是非常善于思考的，他们不仅想象力非常丰富，晚上做梦，还经常 daydream， 各有独特的思维和写作思路。但是，如何将千头万绪的思路梳理清楚，学生则必须有真工夫。为此，在进行四级写作时，
16、考生一定要首先形成自己的观点，之后合理运用一些手段，如常用的有四种：陈述理由、举例说明、提供数据、下定义等，之后充分就此展开论说。这样通过高效思考，严密组织，再辅以提纲形式的文章架构，这样才能写出较符合规范的文章。问题二、用复杂的单词与词组正确选择词汇非常重要，考生切不可盲目地追求大词、生词。其实，四级作文要求考生选词范围尽可能灵活宽泛，但非常忌讳以辞害义。英语四级写作主要考查写作的流畅性以及表达的清晰，无需考生利用一些复杂的单词或华美的词汇来堆砌。许多考生苦背单词数月后，自感学有所成，在考试中总想八大所学知识都用上，以为以此可以博得阅卷老师的好感。只可惜往往适得其反，造成语法错误或表达失误。
17、问题三、为得高分，都用复杂句表达英语四级作文是检验一个考生写作水平的工具，命题的目标之一就是要通过一篇文章考察考生是否掌握了复杂句。因此，在写作考试中都有一条不成文的规定：没有复杂句不能得高分。为得高分，很多考生会刻意写复杂句。但是在写复杂句的同时，我们还要注意不能写太多这样的句子。全是复杂句，文章读起来会显得很不自然。考试作文和平时写作不完全相同。平时写作不同作者有自己不同的风格有些作者长于简约;有些作者喜欢繁复。因此考试作文的句子要长短结合。一些基础不好的同学最好少些甚至不写复杂句，因为如果复杂句写错了会影响得分，而简单句只要不错分数反而不会低到哪里去。问题四、表达思想内容空洞中国学生表达
18、思想时往往太空洞。具体来说就是表达思想时只陈述一个中心思想，如谈到一个大学的好坏时，会说 “The university has a good library.” “The university has excellent sports facilities.” 就此就停止了，而没有展开。要想避免表达思想内容空洞就一定按照上面大学图书馆一例来把自己的想法展开。需要展开到多细，可以根据你的知识面而定，但这种表达思想的思路是至关重要的，这就是说，文章一定要有细节。可以用分点的形式来阐述你的观点，这样可以作文才显得条理清晰。马老师对于童鞋们写作会出现的问题的总结和评估：内容和语言的扩展法通常四级作文
19、对布局的要求是三段式：Introduction - Body - Conclusion，同学们在写作中就应该注意这种三段式结构，于第一段中引出话题，从而提出主题，中间用一段到两段的篇幅采用举例子或讲道理的论证方式来说明自己的观点，在结论处重述主题或归纳总结照应首段。(重述主题指于结论处以另外一种表达方式重申主题，与首段照应。通常是重复第一段的观点句但要加入一些程度更高的词，如 definitely，dramatically和 exactly 等)每段的第一句话为中心句，即 Topic Sentence，后面的几句来解释中心句。这几句的论证方法主要用讲道理和举例子，事实证明这两种论证方法是最易掌
20、握通常也是最有效的论证方法。由于四级作文对字数的要求仅为 100120 字，所以每段只使用讲道理或举例子中的一种论证方法即可，若某段中由于论述的需要而同时运用两种论证方法，那么应该先“讲道理”再“举例子” 。一、讲道理“讲道理”时通常采用“因果分析法” ，即分析原因和结果：先分析事物的基本原因, 例如用以下句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因：例 1 Why . ?For one thing. For another.例 2 The answer to this problem involves many factors.For one thing.For another.Still anothe
21、r.例 3 A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect . /both individual and social contribute to.在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要原因：例 1 Another important factor is.例 2.is also responsible for the change/problem.例 3 Certainly, the.is not the sole reason for.还可以分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响:例 1 It will p
22、roduce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on.例 2 It involves some serious consequence for.“讲道理”时多使用一些“启，承，转，合”词，如：therefore，because，responsible for，account for 和“程度递进词”如： then，thus，moreover 等。(在第一篇第二章“句子的表达”的最后附有作文中常用的“启，承，转，合”词)二、举例子“举例子”：列举事实或举出实例来说明中心思想, 是简单易行、具有说服力的写作方法。因果型段落只是将叙述重点集中在原因或结构之上
23、，文章所采用的扩展模式还是列举，列举原因或结构。举例的最明显标志是 for example, for instance, such as, take.for an example 的使用。同学们不要总是认为要举大例子，比如伟人事迹之类的，要以所举的例子尽可能地支持本段观点为原则。最好举生活中大家都熟悉的例子，若没有，可以编例子。编例子的原则是把相对于虚的概念落成实的事例，即在中心思想的基础上，加上具体的事件和人物。如下面的举例：Communicating with other people by telephone is very convenient, especially when you
24、 have something urgent. For example, if one of your family members is seriously ill at right, and you do not know how to deal with it and where to find a doctor, what can you do? A telephone is the answer. Dial 120 and you will get services from the hospital very soon.正反作文模板第一段 1、There is a prevalen
25、t phenomenon that _ There is a universal acknowledgement that_ A standpoint which is frequently mentioned not only by_but by_as well is that_.2、 And there is no consensus of opinions among all the individuals as to the view of the case.3、some individuals would maintain the tentativeness that_, while
26、 others cant find their agreement to it.4、the following passages will show the arguments with the tentativeness of mine.第二段 主题句：For those who lend their support to the positive trend, their reasons are in varied forms.1、To begin with, _ is of extreme significance in the whole view. A prominent examp
27、le is that_.2、Additionally, _ is so indispensable that most individuals would consider it as the major cause of the issue. we can easily notice the fact that_ .第三段 主题句：For those who tend to terminate the issue, they come up with some novel ideas to counter the discussion above.1、first of all, _ is a
28、lways top of their arguments list. Take myself as an example, _.2、Furthermore, _provides adequate justifications for the continuance of the issue.For instance, _结论段 As can be concluded from the arguments above. Personally, facing with this conflict matter, what we must insure is that the essence mus
29、t be absorbed. I sincerely wish that some combinations should be suggested. If it could be realized, our life would be flooded with harmony.作文在结构上一定要脉络清楚。一方面，文章要组织得合乎逻辑，另一方面，连接词的使用一定要得当。对以往大学英语四级作文评分样卷的分析可以看出，语言水平相当的两篇作文，正确使用了连接词的作文得分明显高于未使用连接词或连接词使用不当的作文。阅读人阅卷时往往希望试卷在形式上一目了然。 连接词正是文章的在逻辑在形式上的体现，它可以
30、在很大程度上弥补叙述或论证时的逻辑缺陷，指引读者跟着作者的思路走。写作中常用的关联词有：1表示举例或补充说明的关联词为：and，furthermore，moreover，whats more，more than that，likewise，meanwhile，in addition to，also，another，indeed，in fact，on one hand，on the other hand，for instance，for example，to illustrate，specifically，besides in particular，etc2表示时间或顺序的关联词为：at pre
31、sent，at last，in the end，then，since then，before，afterafterwards，recently，at the same time，from now on，later，first，second，the last，next，finally，eventually，from then on，lately，firstly，secondly，thirdly，etc3表示转折让步的关联词为：but，yet，however，nevertheless，though，although，despite，in spite of，on the contrary，in co
32、ntrast，after all，anyway， no matter， unfortunately，instead， instead of，etc4表示原因与结果的关联词为：because，since，for，because of，for the reason，as，now that，due to，owing to，hence，therefore，accordingly，consequently，thus，SO，as a result，etc5表示总结与归纳的关联词为：in a word，in short，in brief， all in all，generally speaking，in g
33、eneral，in a few words，to sum up，to conclude， to come to a conclusion， in conclusion，on the whole，SO，therefore，consequently，thus，etc作文在语言上要有闪光点。语言闪光点体现在词和句子两个方面：1在用词上我们不能停留在高中阶段所学的简单词汇。但这并不意味着必须使用偏词，而是鼓励学生用合适的，恰当的在四级大纲范围的一些词汇。包括同义词的使用，词汇的搭配以及惯用法等。2在句型设计上，考虑到目前考生的写作表达能力提出以下 7 点句型。注意事项供参考：1. 多使用自己较有把握的
34、句型，要在准的基础上求“变化”。2. 不要通篇用一个句型，比如：老用 we 或用 I 开始一个句子，句子尽管不错但给人以单调死板的感觉。3.在找到合理的逻辑关系的基础上，可适当使用前面已提到的关联词。4. 用定语从句同位语从句进一步描绘某事物。5. 用分词或分词短语烘托谓语动词，在遇到使用几个动词时，将它们搭配使用。有的作谓语、有的变作分词、有的用作不定式等其它形式。6. 偶尔用一个倒装句，给人以新鲜感。7. 上下句紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，这样文章显得简明、紧凑。作文如何用用词吸引老师的眼球？（闪光词总结） people ,persons 美好的)有希望的)替换 good 有害的)
35、替换 bad 如果 bad 做表语，可以有 many注：用 many, if not most 一定要小心，many 后一定要有词。Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理用 most, if not all ,替换 most. 替换 some think (因为是书面语，所以要加 that) 替换 thing 代 common get many benefits 替换 in my opinion more and more( 注意没有 growingly 这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growi
36、ng.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.或 hardly 替换 helpful 替换customer15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very unnecessary, avoidable 替换 sb take interest in / sb. be interested in attract ones attention. 代 aspect indicat
37、e, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause 替换reasons for sth23.desire 替换 want 替换pay attention to 替换 remember have(注意 process 是过程的意思) 替换 communication28.frown on sth 替换 be against , disagree with sth 替换 for example, for instance30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / a
38、lmost impossible样板句：“关于. 人们的观点大不相同.”的不同句式表达方法:1.With the development of science and technology, an increasing number of people believe that2.Peoples views on vary from person to person.3.Some hold that . However, others believe that.4.Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.5There are d
39、ifferent opinions among people as to得出结论的不同表述方法：Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论Hence/Therefore, wed better come to the c
40、onclusion that因此,我们最好得出这样的结论There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.All in all, we cannot live without But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.提出建议:It is
41、 high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.It is time to take the advice of and to put special emphasis on the improvement of 该是采纳的建议,并对的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of 毫无疑问,对问题应予以足够的重视.Obviously,. If we want to do something , it is
42、 essential that显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是Only in this way can we 只有这样,我们才能预示后果:Obviously, if we dont control the problem, the chances are that will lead us in danger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.No doubt, unless we adopt effective measures, it is very likely that毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会It is urgent that immediat
43、e measures should be adopted to stop the situation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.论证From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.I cannot entirely agree with the idea that 我无法完全同意这一观点.Personally, I am standing on the side of 就个人而言,
44、我站在的一边.Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why给出原因:I quite agree with the statement that the reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即,其主要原因如下列出解决办法:People have figured out many ways to tackle this problem.解决这个问题.批判错误观点和做法:It may be true that, but it doesnt mean that 可能
45、是对的,但这并不意味着It is natural to believe that , but we shouldnt ignore that认为.是很自然的,但我们不应忽视.Apparently=obviously 明显的是 , significantly, 值得注意的是 oddly enough 奇怪的是, interestingly 有趣的是, undoubtedly, 毫无疑问的是 in any case 无论在任何情况下比较 similarly, likewise, in the same manner对比 whereas, conversely.列举 for example, for
46、 instance, such as, take for example. Except (for), to illustrate.时间 eventually, meanwhile, from now on, for the time being,顺序 to begin with, first of all, in the first place, above all, first and foremost, next to this, apart from this, last but not the least important,可能 presumably,解释 in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.递进 What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.让步 admittedly, whatever may happen.转折 whereas，nevertheless, however, yet, but
