1、专题限时集训( 十八) 读后续写训练 1(对应学生用书第 191 页)A 【导学号：38144069】(2017浙江宁波 5 月考前模拟)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Boys like to be considered to be brave，but what kind of things can be considered to be brave？It is not a question that can be answered by words，but by the actual deed.A boy with the name Henry gave us
2、a good example.Ronny and Henry were two friends in the same class.They always played together and went home together.One day as Ronny and Henry were going home after school，they saw some people fighting in the street corner.Ronny said excitedly， “Some people are fighting！Lets go and have a look！”But
3、 Henry refused， “Its none of our business.Wed better go home and dont get close to them.Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I dont want them to worry about me.”“You are a coward，and afraid to go， ”said Ronny，and off he ran to the spot with some other boys.Henry
4、 had to go home alone and didnt think about it anymore.But Ronny thought Henry was a coward and told all the boys that.They laughed at him a great deal.From then on，they looked down upon Henry and didnt want to play with him.Henry was sad but he wasnt angry with Ronny for his rude behavior，because h
5、e had learned that true courage was shown most in bearing misunderstanding when it was not deserved，and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong.Thus， he just ignored the other boys laughter and continued to stick to his thought and go to school and study as well.However，Ronny didnt inv
6、ite Henry to go home with him anymore.Instead，he had his new friends who also thought Henry was a coward.Every day after school，they didnt go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had lots of fun.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，
7、请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：A few days later，something terrible happened to Ronny. Paragraph 2：At that moment，Henry happened to pass by.【写作指导】原文中，两个男孩子原本是朋友，但是由于对什么行为是英雄行为有不同的理解而决裂。根据原文的信息和提示句，续写应该设计合理的故事情节，展示 Henry 是真正的“英雄 ”，而不是“胆小鬼” ，并且最好直接涉及 Ronny。这样就会很好地呼应原文。【参考范文】A few days later，something ter
8、rible happened to Ronny.That afternoon after school， Ronny was bathing with some of his new friends in the river happily.Suddenly，he was stuck in the mud and couldnt get out.He struggled hard but he was still trapped.He screamed for help，but all in vain.The boys who had called Henry a coward got out
9、 of the water as fast as they could.They were so scared and did not even try to help him.At that moment，Henry happened to pass by.He heard the screams and ran to the river as soon as possible.Seeing Ronny was almost drowned，Henry took off his clothes immediately and jumped into the water without any
10、 hesitation.He reached Ronny just as he was sinking the last time.With great effort，and with much danger to himself，he brought Ronny to the shore in time.Henry was happy to help his friend，though he was extremely tired.B阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I worked from the time I was four and raised seven
11、 children，all of them college graduates.It seemed Id done everything Id ever wanted to do in my life，but I had one regretI was born in 1898，the oldest of five kids.Papa couldnt spare me to go to school，so I worked in the fields with him till I was 21 years old.Everywhere I went，I learned some hard l
12、essons about what happens to a man who even cant read the alphabetPeople cheat you out of wages.They sell you a ticket to one city，take your money and hand you a ticket to somewhere else.By 1928，Id been wandering for nine years.I met a woman named Elzenia.We fell in love，married and moved to Dallas，
13、where I got work fixing roads for the city.When Amelia，the oldest of our seven children，first went to school，I took my wife aside.“Elzenia， ”I said.“I dont want the kids to know I cant read or write.”In 1938，one day my boss called me in.“George， ” he said.“No one knows those machines like you do.Id
14、like to promote you.” But my thrill and surprise were cut short when he said， “Fill out this application and well get you a raise.” I couldnt admit the truthI thanked him and walked out of his office.I did stay right where I was，until I turned 65 and my boss made me retire.But I didnt stop working.F
15、or the next 25 years，I lived a happy life，but it still seemed to me like something was missing.A young fellow handed me a piece of paper.Its information about adult education classesPeople can learn to read and write.Now Im 98.I thought of my friends and neighbors and what they might think if they f
16、ound out I couldnt read.After all these years，my secret would be out.But all my life Ive wanted to read.It was high time for action.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：The young man drove me to Paragraph 2：Im still going to school.
17、【写作指导】文章大部分在叙述作者从小因家庭贫困而没有读书，因此在工作中错失晋升的良机。文章最后一段尤其是最后一句“It was high time for action.”给出了提示，说明接下来要续写的是作者自己重新走进学校的情况。根据关键词语展开适当的联想即可成文。【参考范文】The young man drove me to an old building.I knew it wellit was where all my children had gone to schoolI looked into the classroom to get a look at who I would
18、be going to school with the next day.The students all looked like babies to me.There was a lady in her fifties but most of the rest were in their twenties and thirties.I went back to the school the next day.Id been inside the building so many times before with my children.That old building looked th
19、e same，and it smelled the same.But this time it was different because this time it was going to be my school.First came learning the alphabet，then words.In three months，I was reading.It was not very exciting，but I loved it.Im still going to school.I didnt stop there.After all，now I know why Im here.
20、Im here to learnIm here to tell the students its never too late.C(2017浙江名校协作体 4 月)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。The event that stands out in Toms memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old.He was at home with his elder sister JaneTom was doing his homework when he heard raised voice
21、s.At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud，but he soon realized this time it was different.“Quick！Quick！Remove the motorcycles from the shop” someone yelled.Then a thick burning smell filled the air.When Tom opened the front
22、 door of their flat to investigate，a thick cloud of smoke greeted him.The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.Jane，who had been playing the violin in her room，hurried to the living room.They rushed out of the door and along the corridor (走廊)through the smoke.They were
23、heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane suddenly stopped.She turned around and headed back the way they came.Tom had no idea what she was doing，but he followed her.Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them，who they called Makcik.Jane b
24、egan banging on Makciks door，but got no answer.As the smoke thickened around them，Tom could see many of their neighborssome still in their pyjamasrunning for safety.The thought of fear crossed his mind.“She would have run for safety like everyone else！”Tom cried.However，Jane refused to give up.“I kn
25、ow Makciks still inside.”She said she was familiar with Makciks daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping.She pounded against the door.“Go downstairsGo now ！Go ！”注意：1所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：Tom noticed the fl
26、ame was reaching up. Paragraph 2：Luckily，some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. 【写作指导】这是一篇比较典型的具有正能量，而且故事性比较强的文章。文章讲述了在一次火灾中，Jane 和 Tom 不顾安危去救援一个邻居老人的故事。文章的第一部分叙述了两个孩子在大火中表现出的勇敢和善良。那么续写部分就应该延续这种故事情节和赞扬的态度。根据第一段的提示句，该段应该是对他们在敲门救邻居时火势蔓延的描述，当然更应该涉及两个孩子在这种情况下的表现。而第二段的提示句提示我们有其他的邻居来帮忙，那么应该是一
27、个幸运的结尾。【参考范文】Tom noticed the flame was reaching up.Frozen with fear，he stood rooted to the spot.He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Janes hand tightly.Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging.Time seemed to stand still，though they were probably there for only two or
28、three minutes.Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head.She kept pounding against the doorTom burst out crying.Luckily，some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.A sense of strength immediately replaced th
29、e mounting fear and anxiety in Janes mind.She told them Ms.Makcik must be still in the room.They forced the door open with all their might.Sure enough，Makcik was lying in bed, unconscious.She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital，where she finally came to herself.People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom were very happy.
