1、创造闪光点，作文亮一点,创造闪光点，作文亮一点,作文是英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！,高分作文标志,1、句式是否多变：长句、短句、简单句、复杂句交叉使用。2、是否使用插入语3、用词是否生动形象，短语是否丰富4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词5、句型使用是否准确、地道,写好一篇作文的注意事项：,1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attentio
2、n should be paid to. ) It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. 2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however,
3、take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out,关于改革开放30年的多种表达,Chinas tremendous changes over the past 30 years not only make the Chinese people, who directly benefit from
4、it, feel proud of its own country, but also amazed many foreigners who have been to China. China has experienced /undergone/effected great/ radical changes during the past 30 years while maintaining its good traditions. China has experienced earthshaking changes as a result of 30 years opening-up an
5、d reform. Enormous/Dramatic changes have taken place in China since the inauguration of its reform and opening-up policy 30 years ago.The past 30 years has witnessed Chinas tremendous changes .,经典替换,1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的
6、)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语，可以用be less impressive替换 e.g. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. Whe
7、n it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。 E.g. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if no
8、t all ,替换most.,经典替换,5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为同位语从句或主语从句，所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing 8: shared 代 common 9. for my part ,from my
9、 own perspective 替换 in my opinion,经典替换,10. Increasing (ly), growing , rising 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing / growing.修饰形容词，副词时用increasingly. E.g. Sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.,a growing number of,An increasing num
10、ber of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who c
11、omplain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，像犯罪和卖淫。According to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in orde
12、r to get more money to support their family.根据最近的一项调查，越来越多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补贴家用的强烈愿望。,经典替换,11.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,12.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very13.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in 14.capture ones a
13、ttention替换attract ones attention.15.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear16.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.17. There are several reasons behind sth 替换.reasons for sth18.bear in mind that 替换remember19. frown on sth代替be against ，disagree with sth
14、e.g. My parents always frown on late nights out.我父母向来不赞成深夜外出.20.to name only a few，as an example代替for example21. “很重要” important精彩替换词 如：the indispensable part for, has a profound impact on, significance等。22. realize be aware of 意识到,闪光点之总结法,1. 玫瑰All roses have thorns.2. 花园No garden is without weeds.3
15、. 金币Every coin has 2 sides.4. 利剑Every sword has 2 edges.5. 利弊Every advantage has its disadvantages.6. 众口Its hard to please all.7. 仁智So many people, so many minds.8. 伟人Great minds think alike.9. 毒肉One mans meat is another mans poison.10. 过及Throw the baby out with the bath water.,闪光点之总结法,11.Admittedly
16、, there are merits to both sides of the argument.12. All roses have thorns.13. No garden is without weeds.14. Answers shall find it hard to please all, as the old say goes.15. As the proverb goes: Every coin has its two sides, _ is no exception.16. As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however,
17、 people take different attitudes.17. At present, some people think _, while others claim _. Both sides have their merits and drawbacks.18. Consensus has never been reached on this issue.19. Every advantage has its disadvantages.,闪光点之一些人认为-Some,无数的numerous/myriad (a myriad of)大量的A great / large / hug
18、e / (in)considerable / significant / noticeable number / amount / quantity / portion of对半的almost / nearly / some / close to / approximately half of大多的the (vast / overwhelming) majority of一些/另一些（抽象意义）：some - others, majority - minority,闪光点之一些人认为-people,公众the public各行各业people from all walks of life /
19、the circle/community/walk of education学生examinees / testees / students特殊人群readers / drivers 支持/反对者followers - objectors, dissenters - consenters参与者participants / candidates / interviewees,闪光点之一些人认为-think,认为assume / argue / hold (the opinion) / claim / suggest / declare / say / assert / state / belie
20、ve / insist/ maintain / doubt / suspect that支持give / express / show / demonstrate ones support for赞成/反对vote / ballot for/againstcast ones vote / ballot for / againstside with / stand on the side of接受take the advise / follow the suggestion / accept the opinion / idea that意见是ones viewpoint is that / b
21、e with the view that,闪光点之路线句型,1. 发展路线With the development of living standardAlong with the promotion / improvement of science and technologySince the reform and opening-up policy applied2. 群众路线All the social members, shall say No! to / shall participate inThere is a growing realization of the advant
22、ages of sth. promoted by Mass media shall play an active role in doing / keep sb. well informed of sth.3. 当局路线The authorities concerned shall lose no time in doing sth. (put an end to / encourage)The local government shall take measures to (bring sth. under control)The concerned government departmen
23、ts shall should their responsibility in doing 4. 法制路线Laws and regulations shall be issuedNPC and LPC ought to attach great importance to ,闪光点之结语单刀式,1. All things considered, a unshakable conclusion could be safely drawn that 2. As is mentioned above, 3. Balancing the advantages and disadvantages / n
24、egative effects and positive effects of I intend to stand on the side that 4. Based on the evidence before me, I am bound to accept the viewpoint that 5. Given the factors listed before6. I am with the view that / I am inclined to stand on the side that / I would like to vote for the former / latter
25、 idea that / I prefer the former / latter viewpoint that7. Its safe to draw the conclusion, not difficult to reach the consensus8. Judging from all evidence available, we can predict with confidence that 9. My personal / humble opinion / view point / point of view / theory / understanding / view / b
26、elief is that 10. Through above analysis, ,11. Weighing the pros and cons of the argument, I am inclined to agree with the former / latter.12. Were I to offer my choice, I would not hesitate to stand on the side/show my support / vote for13. A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that14.
27、As a college student, I am most eligible to have a say in this discussion.15. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that16. So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion: 17. From above, we can predict that,组合式,18. All in all / In a word / In sh
28、ort / On the whole / In brief / In conclusion, if we take a careful consideration / for the reasons presented above / given the factors I have just outlined / as is mentioned above, it is not difficult to reach the conclusion that / the writer believe that / it is sagacious to support the statement
29、that / it is safe to draw the conclusion that the advantages of sth. could not easily overweigh its disadvantages.19. Taking into all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that,对比式,20. While the writer understand / accept that sth. has brought about some advantages / positive influ
30、ences / effects, these benefits alone could not substantially outweigh my serious / grave concern over its numerous / countless / immense / massive disadvantages / negative influences / effects to the development / advancement / benefit of study / country / society / economy as a whole.21. I note th
31、e advantage / negative effect / influence / drawback of sth, but this alone could not substantial outweigh the positive effect / influence / merit / disadvantage of it as a whole.,展望式22. Looking ahead, we can say with full confidence that China will raise its economic and social development to a new
32、 level despite of the current difficulties. 23. All in all, I would say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. With the advance of society, if we encourage the merits and eliminate the drawbacks, all 方案式24. What we must do is to encourage the strength and diminish the weaknesses to the least ext
33、ent.people will enjoy a better life in the near future.,高分作文赏析,就业选择大城市还是小城镇,总觉得县城太破太土了，出门不用2个小时就能把整个商业区走一遍。在上海，一出门就得坐车，如果是等公交车，常常是翘首以盼，绕来绕去，也迟迟不到目的地；地铁里总是很多人，必须脚步快几拍，方可抢占有利位置，虽然是这样，但往往都会是像沙丁鱼一样被挤在车内，所以对于想减肥的人来说，可谓是不错的选择。在县城逛街可以很悠闲，一来是地方不大，有的是时间慢慢逛，即使没时间，吃过午饭甚至是晚饭再来也可，随意性很大，二来是商店不多，似乎选择的余地不多。而大城市呢？各种
34、大型超市分布在各个角落，逛一个超市就等于在县城逛一条街了。从这到那，总想着下一个商店会有更好的商品，所以往往时间过去了，手中依然是空的，有苦劳，无功劳。因而在大城市逛街有时就逛一整天，出了那么多车费，加上难得出来一趟，不能这么轻易就打道回府。,小孩在大城市似乎可以接受到更多更好的教育；大人似乎在大城市可以有更多的就业机会，但生活的压力也更大；老人在大城市似乎找不着北了，被钢筋水泥禁锢住了，人被禁锢，思想也被禁锢了，不敢出门，即使出门也会被那些眼花缭乱的车吓住，过马路都迈不出脚步了。灯红酒绿的大城市，充满了酸甜苦辣。五光十色的小县城，充满了苦辣酸甜。,Assignment,Direction:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Starting Career in a Big City or Small Town？ You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 很多的大学生毕业后留在大城市工作；2. 也有人选择到小城镇开始自己的职业生涯；3. 结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己的想法。,
