1、写作高分解密,-解密阅卷者评分弱点,形势与分析,2005年起 模式作文受阅卷组全面抵制80% 的考生因书写卷面欠佳影响评卷预估分55% 以上的考生因写作低于6分导致全盘皆输,解 码,211个关键得分词，90个高分造句，43个句群实战，13篇高分作文手把手提升英文硬笔书法速成训练第一时间捕捉阅卷者的审美注意力临摹训练-分阶突破-反对模块-走向巅峰,90个高分造句,Unit 1 中英文思维转换,1. 第一阶段1）病人今天早晨的情况同昨天差不多。 The patient is much the same as he was yesterday.2）缺乏维生素A会导致夜盲。 An inadequate
2、 supply of vitamin A may lead to night blindness.3）我会用计算机，但是一说到修理计算机，我就一窍不通了。,I can use a computer, but when it comes to computer repairing, I know nothing about it.4) 很多母亲试图在他们的女儿身上实现他们的梦想。 Many a mother tries to act out her dreams through her daughter.5) 医生说手术会引起心脏病发作。 Doctors said that surgery co
3、uld induce a heart attack.6)解决这个问题的关键是更周密的规划。The key to the problem lies in closer planning.,2.第二阶段,1) 我已经很累了，不想再讨论这个问题了。 Im too tired. I dont want to pursue this issue any more.2) 我们应该劝孩子们不要吸烟。We should discourage the kids from smoking.3) 居然还有学生在考试前踢足球，这似乎令人难以置信。It seems incredible for some student
4、s to play football before the exams.,4) 你叫我把门锁上，我就照你说的做了。 You told me to lock the door and I acted accordingly.5) 没有一个明智的人会说没危险。 No sensible person would say (that) there is no risk.6) 贫穷将他沦为乞丐。 Poverty reduced him to begging for a living.,1)如果我们不能卖出更多的货物，就必须降低产量。If we can t sell more goods, well ha
5、ve to cut back on the production.2) 当时几乎不可能回到那家旅馆。 At that time it was all but impossible to return to that hotel.3) 下次会议定于三个月后举行。 The next meeting is due to be held in three months time.4) 一切事物都是互相联系和互相影响的。 All things are interrelated and interacted with each other. 5) 我向你们保证我的故事是真的,以免有人觉得奇怪。 I ass
6、ure you that my story is true, lest anyone should think it strange.6) 在你出发之前应该做好所有的安排。 Prior to your departure, you should arrange everything well.,3.第三阶段,第四阶段,1）此种行为可能导致经理被辞退。 This behavior may result in the dismissal of the manager.2）把牛奶放回冰箱，否则它会变坏的。 Put the milk back to the fridge, otherwise it w
7、ill go off/ bad.3）他坚持要用车送她回家。 He insist/ insisted on driving her home.4）我也意识到准时完成这项任务的重要性。 I am aware of the importance of completing the task on schedule.5）我们的产品以质量、可靠性、尤其是品种的多样化，来和其他厂家竞争。Our products compete with those of other manufactures in terms of quality, reliability, especially the variety.
8、,6）由于大雨，球队的表现受到很大的影响。Because of the heavy rain, the performance of the team was greatly affected.第五阶段1）我认为不管这工作得花多长时间，都得有他来完成。 I think it is up to him to finish the work no matter how long it will take.2）比赛结果在很大程度上取决于评委的意见。 The result of the competition will depend largely on the opinions of the jud
9、ges.3）我母亲总是告诉我，从长远来看我会很高兴我没有放弃练钢琴。,My mother always told me that in the long run I would be glad I didn t give up practcing the piano.4）这些书的价格从10美元到20美元不等。The books range in price from 10 to 20.5) 在我看来你没有什么选择。It seems to me that you dont have much choice.6）这个问题必须首先讨论，因为它比所有其他问题重要。 This problem shoul
10、d be dicussed first, as it takes precedence over all the others.,第六阶段,1）我们有不同的方法来表达同样的想法。 We have alternative ways of expressing the same idea.2）他又回到了喝酒的老习惯。He slipped into the old habit of drinking.3）机械上的毛病是这次事故的原因。Mechanical defects were responsible for this accident.4）我趁今天天气好打网球去了。 I took advanta
11、ge of the fine weather today to play tennis.5）每当她姨妈来访的时候，她总是表现不好。,She always behaves badly when her aunt comes to visit.6）要不是你们的帮助，我们不会准时完成任务。If it hadnt been for your help, we wouldnt have been able to finish the task in time.第七阶段1）我劝他别去东海岸因为那里到处是游客。I warned him off going to the east coast because
12、it was full of tourists.2）东西便宜并不见得就是质量低劣。The fact that something is cheap doesnt necessarily mean its of low quality.,3）几年前他心脏动了一次大手术。He underwent major heart surgery several years ago.4）我们估计完成这项工作要花一个星期。We estimated that it would take a week to finish the work.5）只有Peter去参加晚会她才会去。Only if Peter goes
13、to the evening party will she go.6）我只能把这次经历比作一场噩梦。I can only compare the experience to a nightmare.第八阶段,1）他最终辜负了父母的期望。 He finally failed to live up to his parens expectations.2）相比之下，我们的用油量大幅度上升。 In contrast, our use of oil has increased enormously.3）我最初的声明被新闻媒体完全歪曲了。 My original statement was comple
14、tely distorted by the media.4）这座新的建筑物是根据一位著名的工程师的设计来建造的。 The new building was constructed from designs prepared by a famous engineer.5）该事故最后的技术报告进一步证实了最初调查的结果。 The final technical report of the accident reinforces the findings of the initial investigations.,6）待适当的机会来临，他就能抓住。When the right opportunit
15、y comes along, hell take it. 第九阶段1）这个足球队的队长在比赛开始阶段射入了两个精彩进球。The captain of this football team scored two wonderful goals early on in the game.2）中国的人口几乎是美国人口的五倍。The population of China is almost five times as large as that of the United States.3）对那个小男孩来说草为什么是绿的曾经是个谜。 The reason why grass is green was
16、 once a mystery to the little boy. 4）她站在窗口，显然非常冷静和放松。 She was standing by the window, apparently quite calm and relaxed.,5）他继续听着她讲，一会儿不耐烦，一会儿又着迷。He went on listening to her, at times impatient and at times fascinated.6）趁现在还来得及，我们必须找到一种解决这些问题的方法。We must find a way to resolve these problems before it
17、is too late.第十阶段1）父母不能总是为孩子选择学校。Parents cannot always have the school of their choice for their children.2）他走得慢是因为腿有毛病。He walks slowly because of his bad leg.,3）现在他们之间的了解多了一些，他们相处得就好些了。 Now that theyve got to know each other a little, they get along just fine.4）我们认为他是本场比赛表现最出色的球员之一。We regard him as
18、one of the best players in the game.5）那位科学家拾起小石块，并小心翼翼地把它们放进一个小盒子里。 The scientist picked up those little pieces of rock and carefully put them into a box.6）由于最近销售量的下降，盈利上也出现了滑坡。 Profits have declined as a result of the recent drop in sales.,Unit 2.英文得分造句练习,第一阶段运用1）如果他们身体还健康，我不明白他们为什么不再打三到四年的球。（Provi
19、ded） Provided they are fit, I dont know why they wont go on playing for another three or four years.2）在紧急情况下，他仍然能够做出正确的判断。（sound, judgment）In emergencies he can still make sound judgments.3) 尽管我承认问题是有的，但我不同意这些问题是没有办法解决的。（while） While I admit that there are problems, I dont agree that they cannot be
20、solved.,4）你应当花一点时间休息。（reasonable）You should spend a reasonable amount of time in relaxation.5)总的来说，他的作品不错，不过这篇文章糟透了。（In general）In general his works have been good, but this essay is dreadful.6) 为了找到我们需要的东西，那个店员不厌其烦。（go out of ones way）The shop assistant went out of her way to find what we needed.第二
21、阶段运用1)最终他会名白谁是他真正的朋友。（In time）He will realize who his true friend is in time.2)那位科学家的实验产生了一种新药。（give birth to）The experiment of that scientist gave birth to a new drug.,3）大半个冬天他都因病被困在屋里.（shutin）He had been shut in by illness for much of the winter.4) 我讨厌你老是告诉我做什么。（be tired of）Im tired of you telling
22、 me what to do all the time.5)由于紧急情况，医生几小时内来不了。（because of）Because of an emergency, the doctor will not be available for several hours.6) 税收将会如何影响低收入者？（affect）How will taxes affect people with low incomes?第三阶段运用1）我所能说的是我们十分抱歉。（allthat）All I can say is that we are extremely sorry.2)粗心的人易犯错误。（be apt t
23、o）,A careless person is apt to make mistakes.3) 这项实验发现了一种治疗癌症的方法。（result in）The experiment resulted in the discovery of a cure for cancer.4) 相比而言，我们更关心工作效率和产品开发。（be concerned with）Comparatively speaking, we are more concerned with efficiency of work and product development.5) 考试结果将在星期五下午张贴出来。（put up
24、）The results of the exam will be put up on Friday afternoon.6) 当谈到现代艺术时，很少有人比Tom 知道得多。（when it comes to sth./ doing sth.）When it comes to modern art, few people know more than Tom does.,第四阶段运用1）他因他的新颖设计而获得一等奖。（original）He won first prize for his original design.2) 他的一生都为增进两国间的相互了解而努力。（promote） He de
25、voted his lifetime to promoting mutual understanding between the two countries.3) 一些残酷的动物试验是以科学的名义进行的。（in the name of） Some cruel experiments on animals are performed in the name of science.4) 我觉得我应该指出这有多么危险。（point out）I feel/think I should point out how dangerous it is.,5）他们的意见不会影响我的决定。（affect）Thei
26、r opinion will not affect our decision.6) 他病了六星期，跟不上学校的功课了。（fall behind）He has been ill for six weeks and has fallen behind in his schoolwork.第五阶段运用1）如果你累了，需要我来做这个工作吗？（take over） Do you want me to take over the work if you are tired.2) 今晚我想呆在家了不出去。（rather than） Id like to stay at home this evening r
27、ather than go out.3)这首歌你要是唱几遍的话，孩子们就会学会歌词的。（pick up） If you sing this song several times, the children will begin to pick up the words.,4）我们尽力使那紧张的老人相信乘飞机是安全的。（assurethat）We tried to assure the nervous old man that flying was safe.5) 我很喜欢上这门课，我从老师和同学那里都学到了很多。（alike）I enjoyed being in this course. I
28、learned a lot from the teacher and students alike.6) 他的模样变化太大，你完全可能人不出他了。（may well）His appearance has changed so much that you may well not recognize him.第六阶段运用1）他是色盲，辨不清红色和绿色。（distinguish from）He is color-blind and cant distinguish red from green easily.,2）我把他当作一个总是能帮助我的人。（think ofas）I think of him
29、 as someone who will always help me.3) 首先，我欢迎你参加这次会议。（first of all）First of all Id like to welcome you to this meeting.4) 我不习惯这样的奢侈，这是在浪费金钱。（luxury）Im not used to such luxury. Its a waste of money.5）这双胞胎外表相像，但个性不同。（differ in）The twins look alike, but differ in personality.6）我们必须确保旅游业和环境协调发展。（in harm
30、ony with）We must ensure that tourism develops in harmony with the environment.,Unit 3. 地道简练的表达,1. 避免程度副词的滥用 1）At that time I was quite idealistic. 2) We found the proposal quite feasible. 3) It was a rather fatuous statement. 4) The scene was extremely typical. 5) Both films deal with disasters virt
31、ually beyond our control. 6) The death scene is truly grotesque. 7) What she did next was completely inexcusable. 8) The last time definitely establishes that the father had been drinking.,2. 避免英文写作的干扰,（1）受到汉语的干扰1）Her age is very young. she is very young.2) there are a lot of girls loves dancing in
32、our class. A lot of girls loves dancing in our class.3) Today is Friday.It is Friday today.4) Math exam didnt pass.I failed math exam.5) It is the first time I go to Beijing.It is the first time I went to Beijing.,6）We found that to persuade him is easy.We found it easy to persuade him7) I think he
33、wouldnt apologize.I don t think he would apologize.8) Someone told me he had finished the project.I was told he had finished the project.9) It cost us two weeks to read the novel.It took us two weeks to read the novel.10) The sky snowed very heavily.It snowed very heavily.11) He has come back for th
34、ree days.He has been back for three days.12) After dinner we went to the cinema. We went to the cinema after dinner.,13）She is a wonderful tennis player. I played her last week.She is a wonderful tennis player. I played with her last week.14) Though the soldiers are very tired, but they keep on work
35、ing. Though the soldiers are very tired, they keep on working.15) What WTO is what we are eager to know.What WTO is, is what we are eager to know.16) You should permit the student you refered to make a speech at the meeting.You should permit the student you referred to to make a speech at the meetin
36、g.17) The shy girl is always afraid of being laughed.The shy girl is always afraid of being laughed at.,（2）中文的主语不一定是英文的主语1）The rain keeps falliing for three days.It keeps raining for three days.2) My body is healthy.I am in good condition.3) The city has built a new modern high school.A new modern h
37、igh school has been built in the city.4) The winter in the north is very cold.It is very cold in the north in winter.5)When she returned back to school, she found she hadnt taken her dictionary.When she returned to school, she found she hadnt taken her dictionary.,6）The teacher entered into the clas
38、sroom, book in hand.The teacher entered the classroom, book in hand.7)She is about thirty years or so.She is about thiry years.,3. 高分简练的表达,1）Almost everyone in this world desires to be health.Everyone wants to be healthy2) Generally speaking, we should learn to say “no” when you can t help them whoe
39、ver he is, especially when you think what you are doing is more important, or when you are helpless.we should learn to say “no”, especially when you do not have the time to help.3)If you ask me what is developing most rapidly today, I will answer you without hesitation:media.,Media is rapidly develo
40、ping.4) we need money to purchase things so that we could assure the quality of life.we need money to insure our quality of life.5) In conclusion, the world is getting smaller and smaller because of the development of modern science.Modern science has made the world smaller.6) You can depend on your
41、 parents and let them pay for your education; you can earn money by yourself and find part time jobs; you can also loan money form banks and pay for it after you graduate from school; you could earn scholarship by studying hard in school.,you parents could pay your tuition; you can pay for it yourse
42、lf; you can take out loans or you can earn scholarships.7) no matter he is right or wrong, its no doubt that money is important in our life nowadays.there is no question that money is important in our lives.8) once upon a time, people consider this world as vast and mystery, because of the limitatio
43、n of vehicle.people used to consider the world vast and mysterious.9) the ways of tap energy has transformed from the primitive one of absorbing sunlight energy directly into the great modern variety of alternatives such as batteries, nuclear power station, electronic power, etc.Humankind has evolve
44、d energy from primitive sources such as sunlight into varieties such as batteries and nuclear and electronic power.,10) one of the changes is the computer emerged, which can nearly be seen in the corner of the world.one of these changes is the emergence of the computer in nearly every corner of the
45、world.11)As people are getting busier and busier today, they rearely have chance to move their bodies. people today are often too busy to exercise.12) For example, if you dont do it in proper way, you may get hurt when you take sports, or it may take you too much time and energy so that you cannot c
46、oncentrate on your job.if not done properly, sports can result in injury and if overdone, it can result in lack of concentration.13) You may even consider them as your friends because you found they have so many problems and so many thoughts the same as yours, not just a famous star who is defintely
47、 different from you.,You may find out you have a lot in common with them.14) they can ring up a good friend and chat with him, as if they are talking face to face, even though the distance between them may be thousands of miles.friends can now talk on the telephone no matter where in the world they
48、are.15) different people have different views about money.people view money differently.16) so, it is not easy to conclude that it is important to balance the time of both relaxation and studying in order to make full use of your two-day weekend time.As a result, it is inconclusive whether a two-day weekend is useful to balancing relaxation and studying.17) Actually, a job interview is a two-day evaluation, and during the process, interviewers and interviewees can get to know each other,and decide whether they are the right choices.,
