1、,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,突飞猛进,契,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,“就”改为“又”,删去“上海世博会”,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,2,交口称赞,赞不绝口,绚,炫,“不但又”搭配不当，可改为“既又”或“不但而且”。,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,铿锵,不仅美在形体，更美在风骨。,B,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1
2、2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,一位复旦附中高二男生,复旦附中一位高二男生,引起人们对“男孩危机”的警惕,引起人们对“男孩危机”的关注,阴盛阳衰,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,5,闲暇,粗制滥造,去掉“图利”,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,7,8,9,10,11,12,6,答案,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,曝光,竭泽而渔(或“涸泽而渔”“焚林而猎”,将“不”字删去(“防止”与“不再发生”矛盾),“杀鸡取卵”),1,2,3,4,
3、5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,分号或“；”,喧嚣,示例一：对汉语最好的“保护”莫过于全民崇尚优雅的语言,示例二：全民崇尚优雅的语言，是对汉语最好的“保护”,“指日可待”,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,10,11,12,9,答案,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,蔑,肆无忌惮,“有时会遭遇肆意践踏你的尊严”改为“有时会遭遇肆意践踏你尊严的人”。,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,不约而同,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,12,11,赵本山不仅成为了春晚的一块醒目的招牌，而且成为了当下中国大众文化的一个标志性的符号,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,姹紫嫣红(或“万紫千红”),竟,竞,“促进”与“品位”动宾搭配不当，应改为“灰色提升着品位”或“灰色促进着品位的提升”。,
