1、仔细检查，认真抄写,抓住要点，运用高级短语及句型,开门见山,发表己见，画龙点睛,罗列要点，写好提纲,结尾有力,【满分技巧记在心】,作文备考范文学习与训练 1（2021年广州中考英语作文真题）,今天，跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文日记，记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点： 1. 授课者：李华，14岁，红星中学学生； 2. 上课内容：跳绳讲解和示范等； 3. 你的收获和感受。注意：1. 参考词汇：跳绳(rope skipping)、冠军(champion)； 2. 词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。,写
2、作过程,罗列要点词汇：1.红星中学 _2.讲解 _3.学到很多 _4.永不言弃的精神 _选用正确时态：_。,learn a lot of,Red Star Junior High School,explain,spirits of never giving up,一般现在时和一般过去时,Monday,May 3lstDear Diary， Today we had a special online PE lesson.It was taught by a 14-year-old rope skipping champion,Li Hua. Li Hua is a student of Red
3、Star Junior High School.Today he worked as a teacher to teach us how to skip ropes As a teacher,he tried his best to teach his students.First, he explained carefully about how to skip ropes.Then he skipped ropes himself to help us learn better. We were amazed by how he skipped ropes so fast and so w
4、ell. He encouraged us to have a try. He said:Never give up and youll be successful.” From the special lesson,I learnt a lot of tips about rope skipping.Whats more,I felt encouraged by Li Huas spirits of never giving up., 优秀满分范文,亮点：运用了宾语从句和直接引语，句式多样，全 文逻辑清晰，表达地道，结尾有力，充满正能量,作文备考范文学习与训练 2,某英文报举办“家乡的变化”
5、主题征文活动。 请根据以下表格提示，用英语写一篇短文，可适当发挥。,注意：（1）词数80个左右；（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。,提示词：broken 破旧的 ；attract 吸引,写作过程,罗列要点词汇：1.污染 _2.严重 _3.宽敞明亮 _4.众多游客 _选用正确时态：描述过去部分要用_，描述现在可用_，结尾展望未来可用_。,big and bright,pollution,serious,thousands of trvelers,一般过去时,一般现在时或一般将来时,一般现在时或现在完成时,In the past, my hometown was very sm
6、all. We lived a hard life in old and broken houses. The water pollution was serious. And it was not easy for us to travel around. However, great changes have taken place in the past few years. Now we live in big and bright houses. The environment is getting better. The mountains have become greener
7、and the water has become clearer. So my hometown attracts thousands of travelers every year. I wish my hometown a bright future, and I hope all of us can do what we can to help its better develpment., 优秀满分范文,整体亮点：短语和句型用得非常好,作文备考范文学习与训练 3,人口问题已经成为目前人类社会所面临的最为严重的问题之一。 过多的人口带来了一系列的社会问题。 请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短
8、文，谈谈你的看法。,注意：（1）词数80个左右；（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。,人口过多,房价过高,交通拥挤,年轻人就业困难,能源和水资源短缺,写作过程,罗列要点词汇：1.大量人口 _2.房价 _3.交通 _4.能源和水资源短缺 _选用正确时态：_。,traffic,large population,the price of the houses,less and less energy and water,一般现在时或现在完成时,As we all know, the large population has caused many social problems.
9、To young peoples confusion, the price of the houses is getting higher and higher. They cant afford to buy houses. The traffic is so heavy that many accidents happen every day. Its also difficult for young people to find jobs. Less and less energy and water cant satisfy peoples needs. Therefore, I th
10、ink the government should take measures to solve these problems so as to help people live a better life., 优秀满分范文,整体亮点：短语和句型用得非常好,作文备考范文学习与训练 4,假如你的学校今年将举办主题为“把希望带给贫困孩子”的活动。请根据以下提示，以学生会的名义用英语写一份倡议书。 要点提示：1. 无力承担学费 2. 孩子没有钱购买学习用品等； 3. 你的观点：我们应该注意事项：1.必须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear st
11、udents, In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school because,写作过程,罗列要点词汇：1.承担学费 _2.购买学习用品 _3.尽力 _选用正确时态：_。,try our best,afford tuition,buy school things,一般现在时,Dear students, In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school because their family cant afford th
12、eir tuition. At the same time, children dont have enough money to buy school things and clothes. So what can we do to help? In my opinion, each child should have the right to receive education. So we should try our best to do something to help them, such as giving them school things, clothes and so
13、on. We believe if we work together, we can make a better future for them. Looking forward to your joining! The Students Union, 优秀满分范文,亮点：短语运用恰到好处,作文备考范文学习与训练 5,假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bill想了解你家乡的雾霾（smog）情况。请根据以下提示，用英语给他回信。,注意：（1）词数80个左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dear Bill, Im glad to receive you
14、r e-mail. Now let me tell you something about the smog.,写作过程,罗列要点词汇：1.政府 _2.采取措施 _3.应对雾霾 _选用正确时态：_。,deal with the smog,the government,take measures,现在完成时和一般现在时,Dear Bill, Im glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about the smog. Since last winter, the smog has happened a lot of t
15、imes in my hometown. It has done great harm to our daily life. Many traffic accidents happened just because of the heavy smog. More and more people get sick because of breathing polluted air.Luckily, the government have taken measures to deal with the smog, such as planting more trees and cutting do
16、wn on air pollution. As for me, I always go to school by bike or on foot. Do you have any better ideas? Im looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Liu Hua, 优秀满分范文,亮点：现在完成时运用得十分恰当,高分作文小结：拿到作文应首先仔细审题，包括人称，时态，内容点的踩点（思考那个点是你最擅长的，恰当发挥）。分段（一般都是三段式写作），关键词，连词，句型，万能句运用要到位。如：It is +adj. for sth to do sth /Doing sth is 以及恰当运用被动语态、状语从句、宾语从句等，以丰富句式结构。3. 写完好好读一遍，及时发现语法错误，不雅涂黑应避免，万 一写错一斜杠划掉订正即可。4. 书写、书写、书写，真的很重要！,Thank you!,
