1、Section Writing 描写你梦想中的房子写作技法指 文体指 本 元写作任 是描写梦想中的房子。描写梦想之屋 ， 通常要包括 一些方面：梦想之屋的 型，梦想 的房屋的原因、位置， 有描述它的形状、大小、材料、 构、内部 施、功能、独特特征， 个梦想之屋的 价等。当我 描写梦想之屋 ，常常要包括以下步 ：1梦想之屋的 型： 殿、木屋、 墅，并 明理由。My dream house is a small wooden cottage so that I can get close to nature.Id like a big villa for my big family.2梦想之屋的位
2、置：在市中心、郊区、 下The house should be located on the coast.Id like a house in the centre of town.3梦想之屋的特点：形状、材料、 色、 格The house is made of stone.It is very big and modern.4梦想之屋的内外 施、配 家具、 成部分。Trees surround the house.In front of the house is a swimming pool.It is equipped with fine furniture.5 梦想之屋的整体 价或 束
3、 。That is my dream house.The dream house is really pleasant.亮点句式 1It looks like./It is like./It is big/small.2It is.long/tall./It has an area of./It covers.3There is.in it./It has.4It is made of./It is constructed with./.is used to build it.5It is convenient/easy/good for./It provides./It makes. 分佳作
4、构建 写作任 以 “My Dream House” ，根据下面的提示写一篇作文。第 1页1位于绿树之间的一座两层楼的大房子；2一楼是个大客厅，有舒适的沙发和电视；3最主要的房间是楼上的起居室，有很多家具，如书架等；4屋顶有太阳能帆板 (solar panel)，供应洗澡和学习；房子有特殊材料，冬暖夏凉；5喜欢住在这样的房子里，因为设计的既节能又环保。注意： 1.词数 100 左右；2不要逐句翻译。审题谋篇 体裁描写性说明文时态以一般现在时为主主题梦想中的房子人称以第三人称为主第一段：简单介绍自己的理想房子结构第二段：房内外环境第三段：表达自己的感想遣词造句 .对接单元词汇1locate v位于
5、2electricity n.电3furniture n.家具4bathe v.洗澡，沐浴5provide v.供应，提供6comfortable adj.舒适的7energy- saving adj.节约能源的8environment- friendly adj.有利于环境的9special material特殊材料10a large two-storey house一座两层楼的大房子.巧用单元句式、语法(一 ) 完成句子1我理想的房子是一座两层楼的大房子。My dream house is quite a large two- storey house第 2页2它位于绿树之间。It is
6、located among green tall trees.3一楼是个大客厅，有舒适的沙发和彩电。On the ground floor is a big hall with comfortable sofa and color TV.4最主要的房间是楼上的起居室。The most important part in the house is the sitting rooms upstairs.5楼上的起居室有很多家具，如书架，书桌等。In the sitting rooms upstairs there is a lot of furniture ， such as bookshelve
7、s anddesks.6屋顶有太阳能帆板，供应电能以便洗澡和学习。On the roof there are solar panels，which can provide electricity to let me bathe and study with.7房子还有特殊材料。The house also has got special material8房子冬暖夏凉。It is cool in summer and warm in winter.9专门设计既节省能源又环保。It is specially designed to be both energy-saving and enviro
8、nment- friendly (二 ) 句式升级10用过去分词作定语合并句1 和句 2My dream house is quite a large two- storey house located among green tall trees.11将句 4 和句 5 合并成含有定语从句的句子The most important part in the house is the sitting rooms upstairs，where there is a lot of furniture ，such as bookshelves and desks.12用 so that 改写句 7 和
9、句 8The house has got special materials so that it is cool in summer and warm in winter.妙笔成篇 【参考范文】My Dream HouseMy dream house is quite a large two- storey house located among green tall trees第 3页with a large garden in front of it.It is specially designed to be both energy- saving and environment- f
10、riendly.On the ground floor is a big hall with comfortable sofa and color TV .The most important part in the house is the sitting rooms upstairs，where there is a lot of furniture ，such as bookshelves and desks.On the roof there are solar panels，which can provide electricity to let me bathe and study with.The house has got special materials so that it is cool in summer and warm in winter.I would like to live in such a dream house forever.第 4页
