1、（英语）九年级上册英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题一、英语书面表达1假如你即将在学校英 趣小 的活 中 言， 你用英 写一篇 言稿。要点提示如下: （1）几个月前，奶奶晚 后去跳广 舞（do square dancing ）。（ 2）从那 起，奶奶喜 上了广 舞。（ 3） 在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4） 有些 居有意 ， 音 很吵，无法入睡。（5） 你 人 可以跳广 舞，但要求：（ 1）开 和 尾已 出，不 入 数。（2）要点 全，行文 ，可适当 。Boys and girls,I m very happy to speak here and I d like to talk abou
2、t my grandma._That s all. Thank you!【答案】 Boys and girls,I m very happy to speak here and Ikaboutdlikemyto talgrandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has beenin love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What smore, she has a
3、 lofriends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing.They think that the music is so loud that they can t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But theyshould think about the feelings of oth
4、ers and they shouldn t make a lot of noise.That s all. Thank you!【解析】 是一篇 材料作文，根据要点提示写一篇学校英 趣小 的活 中的 言稿。要注意随着文章推 的 化，一开始 一般 去 ，而后面 用一般 在 ，最后表达自己 点的 候也 使用一般 在 。人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致关系，构思文章框架，列 出可能会用到的好 好句， 住千万不能漏写信息要点。参考 就是必用 ，一定要运用到文章当中。在写作中注意运用恰当的 ，使文章更加 ，自然。2近年来，各大城市 霾（ haze）情况越来越 重，整个国家的空气 染状况令人担 。 分析
5、空气 染的 象，原因， 措施，写一份英文的倡 ，呼吁大家保 境，减少 空气的 染。要点提示：（1）我国空气污染的现象。（至少写2 点）（2） 空气污染产生的原因。（至少写2 点）（3）减少空气污染的措施。（至少写2 点）要求：（ 1） 80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。（ 2） 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Dear students ,As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us ofthe seriousairpollution
6、_【答案】 Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, t
7、he peoples activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. Whats more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop facto
8、ries from sending out waste air, whats more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。所提供的材料中列举了近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，主要从空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当
9、发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。这里后面跟动词原形，take a bus 表示乘公共汽车。had better表示最好，【高分句型二】Protecting the environment is our duty.environment 做主语，用的是动词的保护环境是我们的职责。这里 ing 形式。Protectin
10、g the3书面表达地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳 ”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几点：1. 节约用水、用电； 2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；地上种树； 4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；3. 节约粮食，在更多的土要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80 词左右提示词： the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The ea
11、rth is our home. _If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】 How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school stude
12、nt, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees wont be cut
13、down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment. If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do ， live in
14、 ， aroundus， such as， as a middle school student ，and so on， close down the water ， turn off the lights， cut down ， make a contribution to our earth ， pollute our environment ， better and better 等。而固定结构 But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle? 和 I think as a middle school student, we shoul
15、d save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】
16、书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括：1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出 真 的学校名称和姓名；2. 意 ， 数80左右。开 已 出，不 入
17、 数。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,【答案】 As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ
18、.Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attent
19、ion to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文， 我 代通 工具的使用及看法。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：thereare ， I prefer to ，Mobile phones bring ，we can ， we should ，So let 等s句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中
20、注意叙述 序，符合 关系。【点睛】本文 构 凑， 言 。开 介 了我喜 使用的通 方式有哪些；接下来介 它 的 点和缺点是什么，以及使用 代通 工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用 代通 工具。此 prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in ones opinion,try one s best等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。5 面表达“小手拉大手 ,同做文明人。 ”自 建文明城市文明 村以来 ,淄博人民万众一心人点 的行 随 可 。作 中学生 ,我 也做出了自己的努力。 根据以下所,众 志成城 ,让 要点
21、 ,写一篇 100 左右的英 短文。1.种植花草 木；2.遵守交通 ；3.公共 合不大声喧 ；4.公交 上主 有需要的人 座；（自主 ,至少两点）参考 : civilized 文明的make joint efforts 共同努力obey 遵守【答案】 Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts （共同努力） . Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we h
22、ave also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition （此外） , we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.Whats more, when on a bus
23、, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never litteringanywhere. Furthermore （而且） , we are accustomed to （习惯于） queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to mak
24、e ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如 make joint efforts ， as junior students ， for example ， obey the traffic rules ， run red light， in addition ， no longer ，in public ， and so on ，whats more ，on a bus， in need， be accustomed to ， queue up ， all in all
25、等。而 to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized. 等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它
26、要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。6马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“ My Life AtSchool ”主题 班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。美好的回忆1.与同学融洽相处；2.得到老师的帮助；3.获得交换生机会；4.参加志愿者活动。不开心的事情1.好朋友李华转学；2.不擅长语文写作。1. 升上理想的学校；未来展望2.能结识更多朋友；3. 请你补充（至少两点）My Life
27、 At SchoolHow time flies! Its unbelievable that Im going to graduate from my beloved school.【答案】 My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It s unbelievable that I many things to remember. m going to graduateelovedschoolfrommy.Thereb areIn the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers
28、are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy thing
29、s. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and
30、can go to a good college.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以 My Life At School 为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥
31、想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词
32、准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The mostunforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent twomonths in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails
33、. Besides, I was notgood at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and cango to a good college. 等。7书面表达假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail 。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾h
34、aze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数 80 左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze._Yours,Li Ming【答案】 Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and t
35、hank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something aboutthe haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by
36、 the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In
37、 addition, I will tell the people I meet to protectthe environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主
38、要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达
39、清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy
40、 weather now. 、 The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. 等。8 “美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她 ”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。要求
41、：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4. 词数 80 左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,_
