1、九年级下册英语书面表达试题经典含解析一、英语书面表达1 写作假定你是李 ，在一位名叫Tiger Mom 的学生家 的博客上，你看到以下内容。 你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求， 位家 回复。I m the mother of a fourteen-year old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends k
2、eep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?写作要点： 1. 表明自己的看法。2. 述自己的理由。3. 提出至少 2 条建 。【答案】 Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating
3、students and for their future universityadmission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored.There aremany examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the press
4、ure from their parents allowsthem almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choiceto help them grow upmentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl ； let herhave more friends and social
5、 activities ； and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文， 学生家 的博客 行回复。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：My idea is that，There are ， Some all-Astudents in school have， Thereason. is，So I suggest that等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意
6、叙述 序，符合 关系。点睛：本文 构 凑， 言 。开 表明自己的看法，接下来 述自己的理由，最后介 自己的建 。此 turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, makemistakes, of one等s这own些 的运用也 文章增色不少。2 信是中 民族的 美德，也是社会主 核心价 内容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling 很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的
7、道歉。请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise 为题”，内容要点如下：1、简述事件；2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。注意：1、词数 80100；2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Promise is
8、 very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【答案】 The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend D
9、aming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, itwas really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling s anger, but also made her lo trust in him.
10、Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. WhatDaming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中
11、，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。【详解】首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。【点睛】文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but ， so，because of 等，使文章更加通顺。3今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机，一些学生和老师有不同的观点。你们学校的校刊英文
12、版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。观点理由一些学生赞成拥有方便与家长联系；一些老师反对拥有有学生用手机玩游戏；有学生用手机作弊；你的观点1.2.要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2. 必须包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适当发挥；3. 词数： 80-100 词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily lifetoday._【答案】 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With
13、 the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile
14、 phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily.Some teachers are against it They think that some students cant control themselves andoften play games. Whats worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too
15、 much does great harm to students eyes.In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly ， students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phon
16、es be of help to their studies.【解析】【 解】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可 漏。需在平 累相关的 ，写作中注意 通 ，符合 关系，上下文之 可以适当使用 接 。如but, so, then 等。可以适当使用高分句型。【点睛】高分句型： I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way 我 正确的方式使用手机 学生是有帮助的。I think+ 从句。It is+形容 for sb to do sth 做某事 某人来 是的。4 面表达 忘的初中三年学 生活已 接近尾
17、声，你一定既有收 又有不足，也有 多 自己未来的期待。 以 My Unforgettable Middle School Life ，根据下面的思 ，写一篇短文介 自己 忘的校园生活并描述 未来的期盼。注意 :1. 数 90 左右。短文的开 已 你写好，不 入 数;2.短文 包括所有要点，并 充相关信息，可适当 。 言 、通 3.短文中不得出 真 的人名、校名等相关信息。;How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.【答案】 How tim
18、e flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and s
19、adness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn t have a good senseftimeo. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the futu
20、re, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize mylife and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】 分析：本篇 面表达以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life ，” 合本 所 的写作信息， 述自己 忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般 去 和一般将来 ，注意一些常 句式的 用。写作中注意 、固定短 的交替使用，使文意 接 密， 要
21、注意使用丰富的 句，注意叙述 序，符合 关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文 构 凑，要点 全， 言 。文中not onlybut also，help a lot ，share happiness and sadness， do well in ， give up, besides， so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.， therefore, be proud of 等 （ ）恰当使用，使上下文意 接 密；文章的最后 I hope one day, my school and teachers will
22、be proud of me! 表达了自己愿望与想法，使文章增色不少， 得学 。5 面表达假 你将代表你校2009 届 生在学校 典礼上 言， 你用英 写一篇 言稿， 言稿的内容要点如下：回 美 的校园、生 有趣的教学、三年来的收 ；感 老 的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿（考生自 ，至少两点）。注意： 1. 90 左右。 言稿的开 和 尾已 你写好，不 入 数；2. 言稿 包括所有要点，不要逐 翻 ，可适当 ，使短文 、通 ； 言稿不得出 真 的人名、校名等相关信息。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fe
23、llow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009. Thank you for listening!【答案】 Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It
24、has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers efforts, our parents support and our classmates help. At this moment, I
25、would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿，在写作中
26、适当发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿的格式，没有出现自己的真实姓名。6书面表达为了配合 “足球进校园 ”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。历史悠久，深受喜爱常 识世界杯 4 年举行一次男生女生皆可参加好 处利于培养团队精神考生自拟（至少1 点）偶 像梅西，有足球天赋梦 想考生自拟（至少1 点）注意： 1. 词数 90 左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：梅西MessiDear
27、 classmates,I m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.Thank you for your attention.【答案】 Dear classmates，I m very excited to hear that China will build 20， 000 football-themed schools by 2020 Football has a very long history It is liked by people all over t
28、he world The World Cup takes place every four years Playing football has lots of advantages First ，both boys and girls cantake part in it Second， it helps develop team spirit What s more， playing football is good for our health I m a football fanMessi is my hero He has a gift for playing football My
29、 dream is to become a famous football player like Messi I hope China will hold the World Cup some day Thank you for your attention 【解析】【详解】试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像
30、第二自然段的 Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop teamspirit. What s more, playing football is good for our health等等.句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second 等使得短文层次清楚。7 假如你是李华，你
31、的英国笔友 Jack给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。提示词语：Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示问题： When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp? What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know
32、 that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th t
33、his summer.The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress y
34、ou deeply.What s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you shouldprepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【 解】1. 干解 ： 是一篇提 面表达，只 了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所 要点提示都表达出来外，
35、 要 行适当拓展，使文章内容充 。2.例文点 ： 要求写作体裁 信格式，所以例文用第一人称I 行写作，在文章 尾也按照 准 信格式 行了收尾。文章 用一般 在 和一般将来 。文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并 行了适当拓展，所 也都全部用上。3.高分亮点：短 ： as follows，take part in ， Whats more， look forward to 。句型：被 句型， 在分 作状 ，主 从句。8你是一位九年 的学生李明，你用英 写一封 件 你的笔友Amy，感 她 你关心，并告 她目前你在全力以赴 中考而学 ，并与她交流一下目前的学 和生活情况。要点如下：（ 1） .
36、 然你大部分功 你都学得比 好，但是你 自己不 意。你 自己学 上 要多花工夫。（ 2） . 你的父母 你 格要求，但是也很关心你。（ 例 明，适当 23 句） （ 3） . 老 很 意帮助你 。他 希望你 自己的理想。他 （适当 23句） 注意：（ 1） . 要求 句通 ，意思 。（ 2） . 第 2 要点和第3 要点要用23 句 作适当 。（ 3） . 数 90 个左右， 件开 和 尾已 出，不 入 数。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance
37、 examination._How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.YoursLi Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend mor
38、e time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They
39、 hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. Its important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.YoursLi Ming【解析】【详解】本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生
40、活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+ 时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, beready to, tell sb to do, try one s best to以do,及 beitisfulladjofto do st
41、h 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各
