1、(英语)九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编试题( 有答案和解析 )一、中考英语书面表达汇编1( 江 泰州中学附属初中中考模 ) 根据下表中的信息用英文介 你的好友Lily。要求条理清楚, 句通 ,可做适当 。 数100 字左右,文章的开 已 出,不 入 数。外貌 ,笑眯眯的大眼睛;比我矮一点; 着小 眼 , 她看上去很机灵。1. 礼貌的女孩, ;我信任她,真正的朋友,因 。当我 ,她 是关心我,而且仔 听我的 ,。特点2有幽默感,擅 滑稽的笑 ;和她在一起,我很少感到。3. 喜 DIY, 3愿意和 人分享 西,帮助人 有耐心, 大后。I would like to tell you somethi
2、ng about my close friend Lily.【答案】 My good friendI would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.She has a round face and big, smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart.She is a polite and honest girl. I trust h
3、er because she never lies. She is my real friend. When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully.She also has a good sense of humor and is good at telling funny jokes. I seldom get bored with her. She also likes DIY. She once personally made her mother a music box for
4、her birthday. This madehis mother very happy.She is willing to share things with others. She is always patient when helping others. Shesaid “ she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.“【解析】【 解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 , 文章增色不少,如a little , a pair of, trust sb. ,care about , liste
5、n to , a good sense of humor , be good at , get bored , be willing to , share with , would like to do , grow up 等。而 She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a
6、 volunteer to help more people when she grows up. 等复 从句 构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多 化,是本文的亮点。在学 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ,写作 就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有 性,也更富有条理。【点睛】 面表达 既不是 英,也不是可任意 的作文。它要求将所 定的材料内容 整理后展开思 ,考 运用所学英 知 准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能 漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式,尽可能使用高 和 复 的句式 构以便得到 高的分数。2( 州市江都区第三中学中考模 ) 之 ,学校要求每位九年 学生 各自家 写封信, 要 三年来
7、初中生活的收 与存在的 。假如你是Jim, 根据下表的提示,用英文做一个 短的 。1.学到很多知 收 2.学会了与人相 :在校.,在家 3.遇到困 存在 学 力 目前想法1.感 2要求:( 1):表达清楚, 法正确,上下文 ;( 2):必 包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当 ;( 3):不得使用真 姓名、校名和地名等。( 4): 数 100 左右(开 和 尾已 出,不 入 数)Dear Dad Mum ,I ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you
8、what I have done in the past three years_Jim【答案】例文Dear Dad Mum ,I ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years.I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt
9、about a lot of famous people all over the world. Tan dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and help each other too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. When I meet difficulty, I can talk to
10、 my friends about it.However, I feel stressed in my study. I have a lot of homework to do everyday .As a result, I have no time for my hobbies.I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well.Yours
11、sincerelyJim【解析】【 解】 是一篇 信作文。在 之 ,学校要求每位九年 学生 各自家 写封信, 要 三年来初中生活的收获与存在的问题。假如你是Jim,要求根据表格的提示内容,用英文做一个简短的汇报。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。在写作过程中,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为
12、文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。3( 广东中考模拟)假如你是班长李华,今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教 David 对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息,给 David 写一封电子邮件,告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。比例计划原因50%去国内外旅游1.放松 ;2.欣赏美景30%多读一些书1.增长知识; 2.培养兴趣20%参加社会实践1.锻炼自己 ;2.结识朋友你的计划? (至少一个)?(请你补充)注意:( 1)邮件应包含所有要点( 2)词数 80 个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);( 3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分注:社会实践
13、social practice activitiesDear DavidIm writing to tell you something about our discussion today._Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】 Dear DavidIm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students p
14、lan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading canincrease knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activ
15、ities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.Im going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and getgood experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如how to do , spend ameaningful summer vacation ,h
16、alf of , plan to do , travel at home and abroad ,enjoy the beautiful scenery , take part in , social practice activities ,make new friends 等。而非谓语动词结构 The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 和宾语从句 T
17、hey believe that reading can increase knowledge. 的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4( 广东中考模拟)马上要初中毕业了,大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场 “My Li
18、fe At School 主题” 班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示,写一篇发言稿。美好的回忆1.与同学融洽相处;2.得到老师的帮助;3.获得交换生机会;4.参加志愿者活动。不开心的事情1.好朋友李华转学;2.不擅长语文写作。1. 升上理想的学校;未来展望2.能结识更多朋友;3. 请你补充(至少两点)My Life At SchoolHow time flies! Its unbelievable that Im going to graduate from my beloved school.【答案】 My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It s un
19、believable that I many things to remember. m going to graduate from my beloved school. There areIn the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange student
20、s and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides,
21、I was not good at Chinese writing.I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School 为题,写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式,展示了文章的具体内容,学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知,这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,
22、注意根据表达需要使用正确时态,并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分:首先是初中三年里的美好回忆;然后是不开心的事情;最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示,但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语,应把他们变成自己的话,并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意:文章中应包括表格中的所有信息,不能遗漏要点;第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充,注意应合情合理,与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯,用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分,使文意连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文,
23、短文作者根据题目要求,回忆了自己的初中生活,并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点:首先文章内容完整,结构清晰。短文分三段,第一段基本是题目中给出的开头,作者使用一句话引出下文;第二段是主体,介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情;最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理,有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体,表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语,如 The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The m
24、ost unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent twomonths in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a g
25、ood college. 等。5( 山东中考模拟)为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, 程“门立雪( Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully) ”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。内容提示:1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口2. 通过介绍这个故事 , 发表你的看法或者观点。要求:1. 可以适当增加细节 , 以使行文连贯:词数: 100 左右 .2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。【
26、答案】 Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher,Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn t wake up the teacher. Sohe stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and itwas very cold. But yangshi
27、 still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacherwoke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, theteacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文,主要介绍中国的经典故事,
28、程“门立雪(Stand in the snow to wait forMaster Cheng respectfully ) ”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时,灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息,通过介绍这个故事,发表看法或者观点。写作时,避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题,例如:There was/were. 注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,具有条理性。6( 北京中考模拟) 中国传统文化源远流长,代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。某网站正在开展以 “弘扬中国传统文化 ”为题征文,请你用英文写一篇报道,介绍你校上周举办的 “讲中国成
29、语故事 ”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。提示词语: Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示问题: What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did you learn from the activity? What do you think of it?【答案】 The activity of“Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last wee
30、k.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our
31、 teacher.I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ab ility has improved greatly. What more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity. s【解析】【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇提纲类书面表达,只给了一些要点提示,但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外,还要进行适当拓展,使文章内容充实。2.例文点评:例文采用
32、三段式;用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动;因为活动已经举办,所以时态采用一般过去时;对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点:短语:in order to,take part in , lots of , learn from, in the process of , Whats more, have agood time 。句型:被动句型。7( 北京中考模拟)环境保护人人有责,如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源,相信我们的家园会越来越美好。某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green为”主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么,为
33、改善环境我们能做什么,以及你的期望。提示词语:pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示问题: What are the main environmental problems we have? What can we do in ourdaily life? What s your wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems._【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollu
34、tion and so on. I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it
35、into different bins.I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we canmake a big difference. Let s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【详解】题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作,写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么,为改善环境我们能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括。例文点评:例文采用的是三段式;用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么;时态采用的是一般现在
36、时,描述建议时,描写具体,条理清晰。高分亮点:短语: save energy; brush our teeth ; put it into different bins;take action ; make a bigdifference 。句型: When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different binsAlthough each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。;【点睛】首先认
37、真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达,例如save energy; brush our teeth; put it into different bins; takeaction ; make a big difference 。以及状语从句等;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。8( 河南中考
38、模拟)有一种爱,它是无言的,是严肃的,在当时往往无法细诉,然而,它让你在过后的日子里越体会越有味道,一生一世忘不了,它就是那宽广无边的父爱。父亲节马上就要到了,你准备为敬爱的父亲做些什么?请以“Warm Fathers Day为”题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要求: 1.词数 80 左右;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;_【答案】 Father s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father.Different people like different
39、 kinds of gifts.If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I thinkyour father will like it. But if you don t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from wor
40、k, he can drink it.No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father s Day. Don t you think so?【解析】【 解】 是一篇命 作文。要求以 “Warm Fathers Day为” ,用英 写一篇短文, 你将如何与父 一起度 “父 ” 个特 的日子。首先我 要 真 ,看清 意,确定文章的中心思想、主 。在写作 ,注意 扣主 , 句成篇,保持文章的 性。同 要注意准确运用 和人称, 言的表述 符合 法的 构,造句 符合英 的表达 ;尽量使用自己熟悉的