1、（英语）九年级下册英语书面表达专项训练100( 附答案 ) 含解析一、英语书面表达1近日，某中学“ iPad 堂 ”的消息引起了学生和家 的 。你 学校的EnglishNewsletter 正在以 iPads, coming into the classrooms 行征文活 ， 根据右 表格提示的内容，用英 写一篇征文。1.不需要背沉重的 包去上学学生 2.很新 ，学 更感 趣3. 1.影响孩子 力家 2.增加家庭 担1. 你的 点2. 注意：1）表达清楚， 法正确，上下文 ；2）所写内容必 包括表格中所有的相关信息， 点可作适当 ；3） 数： 90 左右（开 已 出，不 入 数）；4）不得使
2、用真 姓名、校名和地名等。iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method._【答案】 iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and paren
3、ts are arguing about the new teaching method.The students don t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It s cool to have lessons oveiPads. Itery interestingv to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence chi
4、ldren s eyesight. And some pfamilies can t afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at anytime. It s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【解析】根据 目要求，需要 写一篇 文，探 iPad 堂 一 象，以及人 此的不同 点和 度。文章需要使用一般 在 ，
5、第三人称。 合 点式 文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出 象，第二段表达支持 种行 做法的原因和好 ，第三段描述反 人的 点及原因，最后一段表达自己的 点。注意多使用固定短 ，固定句型，使文章增色。点睛： 立 点式第一段：提出 象。第二段： Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that _支持 X 的第一个原因。 They also argue that _ 支持 X 的另一个原因。第三段： However, other people stand on a different ground.
6、They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that _反 X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: _一个例子。第四段： There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring abo
7、ut, X also may X 的有一个坏 。2 的同学 ，初中生活即将 束，你 一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。 以My junior high school life为题 ,写一篇80 左右的短文。提示：1.个人基本情况介 2.校园（校园干 而美 ，活 非富多彩）；老 （ 授知 ，教会做人, 常鼓励）；同学（和睦相 ，互相学 ，共同 步）。3. 学校、老 、同学表达感 和祝福。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当 。2.文中不能出 真 的校名和人名。【答案】 My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am s
8、tudying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life iscoming to an end. I m glad to tell you something about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also enco
9、urage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文，介 我的初中生活。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 和一般将来 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，
10、比如：My name is，I m glad to ，Our campus is，Our teachers teach us等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth,all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make pr
11、ogress 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5 点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。Time to leave school at 5 o clockat 4:45 at 5 o clock.Activities to do after schoolexercise to keep healthy and read books do what we want, such as listening to music take a
12、part-time job.注意：（ 1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；（ 2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（ 3）词数： 80-100；（ 4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。短文开头： “What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we haveheld a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion._【答案】 “What time should junior high school st
13、udents leave school?”This week we have held aclass meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should l
14、eave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving schoo
15、l at five oclock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【详解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 ， 文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting ，talkabout ， the result of ， keep healthy ， after school ，have more time to do ， want to do ， such as， listen to music ， in favor of ，clean the room ， pl
16、ay tennis 等。而复 并列 构 They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school. 和 Most students thinkthat students should leave school at about 5 o clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as li
17、stening tomusic.等复 从句 构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多 化；同 Most studentsthink / Some think / A few think使叙述条理， 次分明，是本文的亮点。在学 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，写作 就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有 性，也更富有条理。【点睛】 面表达 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求将所 定的材料内容 整理后展开思 ，考 运用所学英 知 准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，尽可能使用高 和 复 的句式 构以便得到 高的分数。4 面表达假定你是李 ，最近你 班就低碳生活方
18、式 行了 ，你的英国朋友Peppa 向你来信 情况。 你用英 写封回信， 介 以下 果：1 水 2垃圾分 3少用 巾，重拾手帕4步行、 自行 或公交出行、参考 ： low carbon 低碳； tissue 巾 数： 100 左右。开 和 尾已 你写好，不 入 数。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it _Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Peppa,Than
19、k you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here issomething about it We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal o f low carbon life. First, welights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also d better turn of
20、fmatters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we goout, walking, riding
21、 bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to acleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa 写信，介 我 班就低碳生活方式 行的 情况。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：We can do， wedbetter，we suggest，which contributes to等句式的 用。写作中注意运用
22、代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。【点睛】本文 构 凑， 言 。开 我要介 我 班就低碳生活方式 行了 ，接下来介 我 低碳生活可以做的事。此 ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of,contribute to等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。5 写作假定你是李 ，在一位名叫Tiger Mom 的学生家 的博客上，你看到以下内容。 你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求， 位家 回复。I m the mother of a fourteen-year old . I have a rule for my da
23、ughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?写作要点： 1. 表明自己的看法。2. 述自己的理由。3. 提出至少 2 条建 。【答案】 Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzz
24、le for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future universityadmission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored.There aremany examples aroun
25、d us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow upmentally and
26、physically.So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl； letherhave more friends and social activities ； and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagersoften do.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文， 学生家 的博客 行回复。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，
27、注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：My idea is that，There are， Some all-Astudents in school have， Thereason. is，So I suggest that等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。点睛：本文 构 凑， 言 。开 表明自己的看法，接下来 述自己的理由，最后介 自己的建 。此 turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, makemistakes, of one等s这own些 的运用也 文章增色
28、不少。6 面表达假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信 你的家 是否有 霾天气，情况如何。 你按照以下提示 他回一封e-mail 。内容如下：1. 由于大气 染程度十分 重，去年已 生数次 霾天气；2. 人 已 意 到 霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其 生；3. 你在日常生活中打算 此做些什么。参考 ： 霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出 真 姓名和学校名称；2. 言通 ，句子 ，条理清楚， 写 范；3. 数 80 左右，信件的开 与 尾已 出，不 入 数。Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your ca
29、ring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze._Yours,Li Ming【答案】 Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. NowI d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of tim
30、es in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The gover
31、nment suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protectthe environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I m looking forward to your reply.Yo
32、urs,Li Ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和
33、复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and mo
34、re people have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 In addition, I will
35、tell the people I meet to protect the environment. 等。7自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。提示词语： powerful ， happy， believe in ， keep doing提示问题：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we becom
36、e more confident?Its very important to be confident【答案】 It s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick towhat we do. So it s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I
37、 still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then Ibreathed de eply and relaxed myself. You can t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then
38、on, I have become more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运
39、用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of ；know about ； make a speech 等； When ； Although ； Then ； From then on, 等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。8书面表达初中就要毕业了，校报 “英语角 ”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你的计划。活动毕业晚会时间6 月 28 日晚上七点地点学校礼堂 school hall参与者全体初三学生和老师活动内容1.邀请校长作演讲；2.互赠礼物送祝福；3.各班表演精彩节目4.要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整洁。3.80 词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party._
