1、【英语】初三英语书面表达及其解题技巧及练习题( 含答案 ) 及解析一、英语书面表达1 面表达李 所在的国 学校正在开展“My Favourite Traditional Festival 交流活 ”，假定你是李 ， 你向来自不同国家的同学介 中国 日端午 ，内容包括：1. 今年 祝 （ 6 月 18 日）2. 日由来： 念（ be in memory of ）屈原3. 吃粽子， 舟，挂菖蒲和艾草（calamus and Ay Tsao） 4. 迎大家一起体 个 日注意： 1. 数 80100 ；2.可适当增加 ，以使行文 ；3.文中不能出 与本人相关的信息；4.开 已写好，不 入 数。Dear
2、 fellows,The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar._.【答案】 Dear fellows,The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Ch
3、inese calendar.People celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragon-boat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragon-boat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and
4、Moxa on the day.We welcome to experience thistraditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文，向来自不同国家的同学介 中国 日端午 。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：People celebrate，People hold，We can watch，We welcome to等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符
5、合 关系。点睛：本文 构 凑， 言 。开 介 了今年端午 祝 ，接下来介 端午 的由来以及 祝活 ，最后 迎大家一起体 个 日。此 according to, in memory of,a kind of, on the day, welcome to do sth, all over the world 等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。2（题文）书面表达在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：1. 定时做饭、洗衣服；2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打 120）假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要
6、求： 1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；2. 词数 80 词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）3. 参考词汇：at a fixed time定时emergency紧急情况ccompany sb.陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I d like to introduce my new inventionu. to all of yo【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I d like to i
7、ntroduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do somewashing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat,playing chess or doing exercise. What s more, it can deal with some emerg
8、encies. For example, ifan old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I m suremy new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如t
9、hank you for doing ， I d like to do，introduce sb. to ， all of you ，at home ，do some washing ， at a fixed time ，have a chat， play chess， do exercise，deal with ，a great help ， in the future 等。而 Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I th
10、ink in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help ofnew robots. 等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3 “ inspire 一词的汉语解释是”“激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。请以 “ T
11、heperson who inspired me 为题”写一篇不少于80 词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she ？2. How did he/ she inspire you ？要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。The person who inspired me【答案】 The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspi
12、red me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesnt talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the o
13、ne that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in la
14、st years ping-pang competition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，
15、充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分
16、三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如 But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. 、 Wang Peng is a small thin boy wit
17、h two big black eyes. 、 He doesnt talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. 、 If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. 、 He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. 、 He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good a
18、s he is. 等等。4书面表达根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown 的英语短文（80 词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息开头已给出，不计入总词数内容要点： 去 在1旧房1高楼2河水 2河水清澈（ clean and clear）3步行、 自行 上班3乘公交 、小汽 上班4道路狭窄（ narrow ）4街道 （ wide ），干 整 5居住条件（ living conditions ）差5生活越来越好， 境（ environment ）越来越舒适6你的感想 （写两到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten
19、years ， great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】 Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not
20、 rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfo
21、rtable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it ant to remembersstill import the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【 解】亮点 明： 篇 作的 次清晰，内容 ，表达流 。文中使用了非常好的短 ，例如take place， in our hometown ， in the past ， use
22、d to be ，go to do ， on foot ， by bike，betterand better ， more and more 等。而 I think its still important to remember the past/It tells thatwe should cherish the present life. 等 从句 构的运用，丰富了 作内容，使表达多 ，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】 面表达 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求将所 定的材料内容 整理后展开思 ，考 运用所学英 知 准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和
23、句式，尽可能使用高 和 复 的句式 构以便得到 高的分数。5共享 自从2016 年在江阴投入使用以来， 人 来了 多便利，受到人 的追捧，改 了人 的出行方式，但同 也遇到了一些挑 ，是国民素 的“照妖 ”， 你根据表格中信息的提示， 21 世 英文 写一篇关于共享 看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。随处可见，出行方便诸多优势有益健康，减少污染费用不高，负担得起未及时归还存在问题占道挡路你的观点我认为 -参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles注意事项： 1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2.表格中 “你的观点 ”一栏用 2-3 句话展开合理想象，做适当
24、发挥。3.词数在 90 个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have wonhigh praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can beseen everywhere
25、 so that itor useasytogetf around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles notonly is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What s more, using public bicyclcosts so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people caneturnpublic bicycles in time. Sometime
26、s because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it living a green life.【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应包括 4 个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下文的连贯，将
27、这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇短文表达流畅。6书面表达以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。请用英语写一篇约100 词的短文。要求： 1.完整叙述图画内容。2.简要陈述你从中学到了什么。【答案】 One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided t
28、o do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,“ Please take care of trees. ” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their
29、 teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作提纲。通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序，
30、这样可以使文章条理清楚。还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达的信息，表述准确。作者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述，条理清晰。文章最后的两句话也点明了文章的主题。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过
31、去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。语法规范、准确。短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They found that a young tree neededwatering and it was going to die. 这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如 So they decided to do something for the young tree 这句话中使用了句型 decided to do sth. 决定做某事； After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully.
32、Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them. 这两句话中用了短语 after that, speak highly of 等等。7自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。提示词语： powerful ， happy， believe in ， keep doing提示问题：Why is it important to be
33、confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we become more confident?Its very important to be confident【答案】 It s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick towhat we do. So it s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a
34、speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then Ibreathed deeply an d relaxed myself. You can t believe how happy I was when I recalled thespeech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my perfor
35、mance and I got muchencouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident. To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can fi
36、nally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of ；know about ； make a speech 等； When ； Although ； Then ； From then on, 等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇
37、不错的范文。8 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。提示词语：Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示问题： When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp? What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am v
38、ery glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10t
39、h to July 30th this summer.The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, whic
40、h will impress you deeply.What s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。
41、学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。2.例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称I 进行写作，在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。3.高分亮点：短语： as follows，take part in ， Whats more， look forward to 。句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。9为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化 , 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事 , “程门立雪（ Stand in the
42、 snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully ） ”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示 , 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。内容提示：1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口2. 通过介绍这个故事 , 发表你的看法或者观点。要求：1. 可以适当增加细节 , 以使行文连贯：词数： 100 左右 .2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。【答案】 Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teache
43、r,Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn t wake up the teacher. Sohe stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the sn
44、ow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, 程“门立雪（ Stand in the snow to wait forMaster Cheng respectfully ） ”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/were. 注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。10 你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。
