1、续写中的环境描写一、环境描写的素材 环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。客观环境描写：Part1环境描写的adj要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道thebluesky(蓝天） thesongsofbirds（鸟鸣） thethunderingclouds（电光闪雷鸣）the fragile flowers (娇嫩的花）;（thedark,rainingevening 雨夜交加的夜晚）thegreengrass（青草） thefragrantroses（艳丽的玫瑰）; thesetting/rising s
2、un(落日/冉冉升起的太阳）Part2环境描写的verb （viheknewtheanswer!He raised hishands.Whenheansweredthequestion,his voice shook.However,hegottheanswerright!Hesaid,withMr.Rowe,hisdaysofthefourthgradepromisedwonderful.Thatisnottosaythateverydaywentsmoothly,butitwasevidentthatStevengrewtoloveMr.Rowemoreandmorewitheachpas
3、singday.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Timepassedquicklythatyear,andbeforeweallknewit,itwasthelastdayofschool._ _ _ Paragraph2:Manyyearslater,Mr.RoweandIweresurprisedwhenahandsomeyoungmanwalkedintoourclassroom,dressedintheMarineC
4、orps(海军)uniform. 参考答案Timepassedquicklythatyear,andbeforeweallknewit,itwasthelastdayofschool.Ourschoolhadaveryspecialtraditiononthelastday.Alltheteachers filledthesidewalk,wavinggoodbyetothekidsasthebusedpilledoutwiththeirhornshonking.Butonthatparticularday, Steven walkedslowlytothebus,hisheaddown,te
5、arsinhiseyes.Heboardedthebusreluctantly,hesitated,andthenranbackoffthebustohugMr.Rowe.“Idontwanttoleaveyou.”Hesobbed.Withred-rimmedeyes, Mr.Rowe comfortedhim,“Iwillmissyou,too.”Manyyearslater,Mr.RoweandIweresurprisedwhenahandsomeyoungmanwalkedintoourclassroom,dressedintheMarineCorps(海军)uniform.Theyo
6、ungmanstoodtallandproud.ItwasSteven!Mr.RoweandIcouldntbelieveoureyes.HesalutedandhuggedMr.Rowetightly!“Ihavecomebackto school todayjusttosaythankstoyou!”Itismyhopethateveryteacherisblessedwithsuchanexperienceofaformer student comingbacktosay,simplytosayaverysimpleTHANKS.读后续写三In1971wewerelivinginWich
7、ita，KansasLincolnwasaboutseven，BrendanwasthreeandKristenwasababy.Momwasstayingwithusduringtheholidays.On ChristmasEveIstayedupverylate.Iwastotallyalonewithmythoughts，alternatingbetweenjoyand sorrow，andIgottothinkingaboutmypaperroute(送报历程)，that tree，whatmymotherhadsaidtomeandhowdadhadtriedtomakething
8、sbetter. Iheardanoiseinthekitchenanddiscoveredthatitwas mom.Shecouldntsleepeitherandhadgottenuptomakeherselfacupofhotteawhichmadeherfeelbetter.Asshewaitedforthewatertoboil，shewalkedintothelivingroomanddiscoveredmethere.ShesawmyopenBibleandaskedmewhatIwasreading.WhenItoldher，sheaskedifIwouldreadittoh
9、erandIdid.Whenthekettlebegantowhistle，shewentandmadehertea.Shecameback.Itoldherhow happy IwasthatshewaswithusforChristmasandhowI wished thatdadcouldhavelivedtoseehisgrandchildrenandtoenjoythistimebecausehealwayslovedChristmassomuch.Itgotveryquietforamomentandthenshesaid，DoyourememberthattimeonTwelve
10、MileRoadwhenyouboughtthattreewithyourpaperroute money?”“Yes,” Isaid，“ Ivejustbeenthinkingaboutit,youknow.”Shehesitatedforalongmoment，asthoughsomethingwasbottledupsodeeplyinsidehersoulthatitmighttakesurgerytogetitout.Finally,greattearsrolleddownherfaceandshecried，”Oh,son,please forgive me.Thattimeand
11、thatChristmashavebeenaburdenonmyheartfortwentyfiveyears.IwishyourdadwereheresoIcouldtellhimhowsorry IamforwhatIsaid.”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1: TheimageofanexcitedmedraggingaprettyChristmastreehomeappearedclearlybeforemy
12、eyes.Paragraph2: “Weweresopooratthetimethatweevencouldntaffordthedailyfood,butitdidntmeanthatlosingmytemperandhurtingyourfeelingswereright.Paragraph1TheimageofanexcitedmedraggingaprettyChristmastreehomeappearedclearlybeforemyeyes.Youcantimaginehow happy IwaswhenIboughtthistreewithallthemoneyIearnedb
13、ypaperroute.Whenmy momsawit,however,sheexclaimed,“Youveusedupallthe money tojustbuyatree!?”Allmyenthusiasmfadedaway.Shewentonblamingmeforthestupidideaofspendingallthemoneyonadumbtreethatwouldbethrownoutandburnedinafewdays.IjustcouldntbelievewhatIwashearingandstartedtocry.Thatwastheworst Christmas.Pa
14、ragraph2: “Weweresopooratthetimethatweevencouldntaffordthedailyfood,butitdidntmeanthatlosingmytemperandhurtingyourfeelingswereright.Imso sorry toyou.Ivewantedtosaythisforsolong,anditcameoutfinally.”Webothcriedandthenwehuggedeachotherclosely.I forgave her,ofcourse,sincenowIcanunderstandtheresponsibilitytoafamily.Allmybitternessandsorrowintheseyearsweregone.AndIbelievethisthebestgiftforChristmas,understandingandforgiveness.
