1、Welcome!,( a small loose spike钉子 ),(a little burning butt烟头),(a short crack裂缝),What can you learn from the disasters?,书面表达：,简要描述下列三幅画的内容，并陈述你从画中悟出的一个道理。参考词汇： spike (钉子); butt（烟头）; crack（裂缝）注意：1）短文应包括图中的信息， 可适当发挥， 使行文连贯、完整。 2）词数：100左右。,1. (审)文体 结构：切题, 有序,2. (编)词汇 表达：准确, 丰富,3. (写)润色 连接 ：活泼, 流畅,4. (查)检
2、查 成文：无误, 整洁,What is this article about?What evidences can support the statement?What can we learn from the disasters?,审题：人称,时态,字数,要点,体裁,Something small leads to great disaster.,Facts shown in the pictures.,Nothing is small.We should ,阅读下列两篇文章，想想哪篇文章可作为作文的结构？,I did survey about our school uniform. I
3、asked groups of my classmates what they thought about our uniform. The majority liked it . 60% of them said it was very fashionable and the color was nice. They thought it neat and tidy and a symbol for students. In some students opinion, when we wore our school uniforms, we felt equal and no need t
4、o follow the fashion. But 30% didnt like the school uniform. Some of them felt it uncomfortable and the color too dull. Some considered it old-fashioned. In the eyes of others, its style was very simple. The rest had no idea about it.,Reading does a lot of good to human beings. Many people like read
5、ing books in their spare time. It has become part of their lives. On one hand, reading can enrich our knowledge and widen our eyesight. When we read at home we can travel around the world and understand the things around us clearly. Meanwhile,we can share the writers ideas and communicate with him w
6、ho lived long ago. On the other hand, we can talk about the book that we have read. This helps us make friends with other people. Therefore, those who can enjoy books can get much happiness from books. Generally speaking,books are our best friends.Reading good books should become our life-long hobby
7、.,词汇vocabulary：,1. 因为小事而经常发生了一些灾难 .,frequently,constantly,continuously,because of,as a result of,due to,owing to,on account of,often,Some disasters often happen because of something small.,用同义词替换,2.这些灾难给人们和社会造成了巨大的损失。,The disasters caused great loss to both people and society.,用同义词替换,cause,lead to,r
8、esult in,bring about,great,incredible,unbelievable,1.A plane crashed because a rail spike was loose. It is shown in the picture.(用定语从句连成一句话),As is shown in the picture, a plane crashed because a rail spike was loose.,2. A great crack appeared in a bridge , which was not found.(用without+分词结构替换定语从句）,A
9、 great crack appeared in a bridge without being found.,3. We dont pay attention to the small fault until the disaster happens.(用强调句型）,It is not until the disaster happens that we pay attention to the small fault.,3.在生活和工作中，我们要仔细、负责。,We should be responsible and careful in our life and work.,相关的派生词,r
10、esponsible,responsibility,careful,carefulness,4. 无论是多小的失误都有可能演变成巨大灾难。,No matter how small a fault is, it is possible to change into a great disaster.,5. 仔细的重要性再怎么强调都不为过。,The importance of carefulness cannot be emphasized too much.,because, due to, owing to, thanks to, as a result (of), thus,therefor
11、e,first , second,on one hand, on the other hand, besides, whats more, in addition,in short, in general, in all, in a word , in conclusion,generally speaking, ,找出下列文中的错误：主谓一致，时态，单复数，介词搭配，连接词，词性，遗漏，多余,In our daily life, some great disaster frequently happen not because of something big but something s
12、mall. As is shown in the pictures, a plane crashed because of a rail spike was loose; a great forest broke out as a result of a burnt butt thrown; a great bridge was destroyed because a crack was appeared in a dam without being found, that have caused great loss to both people and society.,of,_ whic
13、h,_ disasters,_are,_ burning,From the above examples, we can learn that anything is small in our works, in addition that everyday life and any behavior of careless or lack of responsibility or a small fault will result in great damage or disaster. So we should be very strict to ourselves and learn t
14、o be responsible and carefully in our life and work.,_carelessness,_ with,_careful,_ nothing,_work,Nothing is small!,Make a speech about the article,Thank you!,From small beginnings come great things.,现在有很多家长想把自己的孩子送到国外去读书。请你为你校校报就此现象写一篇英语短文，叙述其有利和不利的方面，并发表你自己的看法。提示：1. title2. introduction3. There a
15、re some advantages of 4. There are some disadvantages of5. conclusion要求：词数：100左右,； http:/ 金坛人才网 hwh80jyd 来哉？”乐韵叩头称是。“你们 ，最近有什么打算？”明秀徐徐问道。这就是给乐韵一个效忠的机会。乐韵立即回答：“我们 让几位大娘把最近三年册子都报过来，给她看成例。”同明秀了解的一式一样。明秀又问：“你们 看下来，心里头有了谱？”乐韵答道：“回四 的话，几本死簿子看下来，恕奴婢放肆，哪那么容易就能通晓呢？要那么容易，当初嘉颜和宝音姐姐，也不用两个人没白没黑的熬折。”说在明秀的心坎上。明秀又问
16、：“然则你们 打算怎么办呢？”“谁知道？”乐韵竹筒倒豆子，一五一十全交代出来，“她脸皮薄，又不爱问人。就算问人，大娘们一来没这个精力从头说起，二来也未必高兴什么细节都报她知道。她自己坐在房间里，想想，下个令。下的令倒是也没什么差的啦！总之叫人备几只鸡鸭、检点猪杀了没、鱼糟上没。但三天才下两个令的样子，婢子在旁边看着都担心，到那一天，那么多明面上暗面上要的活计，就能自动到位？老太太可说了，这次没有 发话，下头一样不能擅专。她不发话，什么东西出得来？”又说在明秀心坎上。老太太存心要看两位 通盘筹划的能力，件件事都要她们亲自出手，尸位素餐可行不通。这会儿明秀信乐韵可用了，筱筱也已送走了文大娘回来。明
17、秀给筱筱一个示意，筱筱取出银票来，锦城、栖城等西南一带城池，共十家最大商行牵头发署、近百家殷实商户签押作保的宝票，半新不旧的沉着票面，目光落在上面就让人生起一种“通汇保付”的安全感。明秀亲手把银票交给乐韵，乐韵不敢接，明秀牵起乐韵的手，郑重把银票压在她手心上：“拿去吧！你爹那样，需要花钱。”乐韵感动得双唇颤抖，又给明秀磕了个头，明秀扶起她来，软言款语：“别害怕了。从今以后，就都好了。”叮咛乐韵再有任何情报，都得第一时间回报乐韵，乐韵都应下了，正待告退，明秀似笑非笑忽问一句：“对了，笙妹妹的雨屐，是你负责检查里头有没有石子儿？”乐韵心肝一颤，复跪下道：“回四 的话，是洛月。表 身边诸样事物，都是她盯着。那天巧了，她看我们 的雨屐被众人挤得连廊阶太远，要去拿进来一点，好叫 套起来方便，一拿，阳光一映，她看到个尖东西，就取出来，告诉表 ，表 拿在手里看着，送汤的来了，表 就说，扎套上去。谁欺负我？叫她看着，醒醒”胆怯的瞄明秀一眼，“醒醒眼睛”明秀安然的“哦”了一声，仿佛这石头跟她没任何关系似的，道：“你们家 ，怎的叫起表 来？没的这般生份！”便让乐韵下去了。筱筱送乐韵出来，替她理了理衣裳头发，反复叮咛乐韵万事小心，只要办好差，绝受不了亏待。乐韵回到宝音院子，洛月还在劳作，宝音亲自披着氅子、倚在门帘边望她。乐韵慌慌的,
