1、高考英语专题复习,05书面表达评析及指导,高考复习-书面表达评析及指导,How to improve the writing skills,Chinglish,horse horse tiger tiger open water watch sister up street buy things give you some colour see see heart flower angry open I call Li old big. toyear 25. American Chinese not enough,You see no see people mountain people se
2、a You ask me , me ask who ? How are you ? How old are you? You no see, I now very busy. One side play go! We two who and who？ You give me stop!,I this morning eat breakfast. Have you eat meal? Im a larger school student. Im very like play basketball. We should hard study. But I better like listen mu
3、sic. Live to old, study to old.,I had breakfast this morning.,Good morning/afternoon/evening!,Im a college student.,We must work/ study hard.,Its never too old to learn.,But I like listening to music better.,I like playing basketball very much.,应用文：书信、通知、便条 记叙文：看图作文、日记 说明文：人物介绍、活动 议论文：,高考书面表达题型,高考链接
4、,高考书面表达评分原则以及给分范围,第五档（很好）：完全完成试题规定的任务（21- 25分）,第四档（好）：完全完成试题规定的任务，漏掉1、 2个次重点。 （16-20分）,第三档（适当）：基本完成试题规定的任务。（11-15分）,第二档（较差）：末完成试题规定的任务。 （6-10分）,第一档（差）：末完成试题规定的任务。 只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。 （1-5分）,未能传达读者任何信息 ： 0分 。,半期考作文假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点: 1. 我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下取得
5、了一些进步； 2. 但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法； 3. 今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用流利的英语和你写信； 4. 我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化； 5. 如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的家乡。,注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 June 8, 2008 Dear Peter, Im very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study a
6、nd hometown. .,read and write,find it hard,fluent English to write,Great changes,roads,had taken place in my hometown,buildings,widened,It will be wonderful when,you come to China if you are free,show you around,I will be glad to,语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多，得分13分,progress,it,well,widened,roads,My hometown is
7、 becoming more and more,are,词汇有错误;卷面有涂改;得20分.,learn,of the teachers and my,progress,read and write,it hard to learn,hard work.,write letters in fluent English,found,had become,Welcome to China if you have time,show you around,语言素质 较好;基本功不差;语句仍有毛病；得15分.,影响书面表达得分的因素：,“大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中式英语等，如： My hom
8、etown had big change, build many houses, My hometown has great changes.,语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误”,Great changes had taken place in my hometown there. For example, many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.,3. If you get to China that have time, me with you look my hometown. 4. I will welcome
9、 to you. “小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面,如：Under my teacher and classmates all help to me ,.,I hope youl l get a chance to come to China and Ill show you around my hometown if you are free .,Welcome to China.,With the help of my teachers and classmates,没有使用高级词汇和复杂句 1. I will visit my hometown with
10、you. 2. If you have time, I will take you to travel around my hometown.,I will show you around my hometown if you are free.,书写是否工整清晰也会影响答卷得分。卷面不整洁，涂改多；大小写;标点符号;书写不清，得分会很低！,Bad sample,卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分, 审题不认真，要点有所遗漏,1. 彻底理解题意，看准答题要求（包括字数要求）。 2. 把内容要点在稿纸上列成提纲。 3. 连词成句，连句成文。 4.成文后认真检查，确信无一遗漏。
11、,注意：,字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。, 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但 为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,书面表达评分最高标准（第五档 21-25分）,One possible versions: June 8, 2008 Dear Peter, Im very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study and ho
12、metown. It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made some progress in English. However I still find English hard to learn, such as some difficult idioms which made me confused. No matter how hard it is, I have made up my mind to master this
13、 useful language by my hard work.,Not long ago I returned to my hometown and found great changes had taken place there. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened. My hometown is getting modern and more and more beautiful. I hope if you have a chance to come to China and I ll show you
14、 around my hometown when you are on leave. Best wishes, Li Hua,Six steps for writing (写作六步骤）,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great
15、man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.,Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,I. 怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all think highly of him .,A good idea occurred to me.,/ A good idea suddenly struck me.,4.The students there neednt pay for their books.5. She went to Australia in order to study music
16、. 6. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.,She went to Australia for the purpose of studying music.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,Books are free for the students there.,II. 丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句 How happy I was when I received your letter!2.强调句 It was
17、this young boy who helped the old granny.3.倒装句 Only in this way can you solve this problem.4.省略句 They read while walking or riding on a bus.,5、with短语I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. 6、定语从句 Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands
18、 the school library.7、各种名词性从句 Thats what I should do.8、各种状语从句 Time passed quickly before we knew it.,III.常用的连接词 1. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：whats more; besides;also; moreover; in addition 2. 表示转折关系但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet;instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.,3. 表示因果关系因为，因此，所以: since; as; bec
19、ause (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示条件关系如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that );as long as除非: unless 否则: or else,5. 表示时间关系当 的时候 : when ; while在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 直到才: notuntil一就 : as soon as 后来， 然后: later; afterwards不久: soon 近来: lately; recently自从 :since 从那时起: from then on,6. 表示
20、特定的顺序关系首先:firstly 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end7. 换一种方法表述换句话说: in other words;that is to say;,8. 进行举例说明例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, for this reason 9. 用于陈述事
21、实实际上: in fact; actually;as a matter of fact 跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth,10. 对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word, finally, in conclusion, generally speaking, as you know, in the end ,其它常用到的副词therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; alt
22、hough ; afterwards ; personally;,12. 表示结果： thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that, luckily, unfortunately 13. 表示强调： above all, indeed, surely, certainly, of course, after all, without any delay, at least, at most , most important, undoubtedly,Practice 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。 Xiao Ming wa
23、s walking in the street_ he heard someone cry for help. 2. It was not long _ the police came . 3._he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.,when,before,As soon as,4. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay avisit to some places of interest. 5.I shared the c
24、ost of the gas with myfriends ._, I saved $80. 6. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.,In addition,As a result,Whats worse,Pre-writing - Fill in the blanks with the proper words or phrases according to the meaning of the passage: World Englishes come from those countries where
25、English _ _ _ _ , either because of foreign rule _ because of its special role as an i_ language. Today, more people speak English _ their first , second or foreign language t_ _ _.,plays an important role,or,international,as,than ever before,China may have the l_ number of English speakers. Native
26、English speakers can understand each other _ _ they dont speak the same kind of English. English has changed _ time. Nowadays the number of people _ (学习) English in China _ increasing _ (迅速地) .,largest,even if,over,learning,is,rapidly,假定你是李华, 你的一位内地朋友张贵来信向你咨询如何才能学好英语，请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点: 1. 学英语的意义； 2. 参
27、加英语口语学习班; 3. 看英文书刊、电视； 4. 学唱英文歌曲； 5. 与以英语为母语的人交朋友。,Writing,Homework,注意： 1. 词数100-120左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。November 26, 2008 Dear Zhang,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn English well. _Best wishes,Li Hua,Why should we learn English?,to use for business,t
28、o use in school,to write to pen friends,to talk to native speakers,to read English books,to listen to Englishmusic and watch movies,to take a spoken English course; read more English newspapers and magazines ;watch more English TV programmes;to learn and sing English songs; make more English friends/ make friends with the people who speak English as their first language/mother tongue,Brainstorming,在行文的整体性上，要合理使用到一些连接词或短语结构，比如：youd better; I think; I suggest that.; first/ at first/first of all; secondly; then; as a matter of fact; generally speaking; I wish/I hopeetc.,TIPS,goodbye,
