1、每个正文段的第一句话要清楚地表达你这段的观点,要具体,不要写得太含混。举例的时候,要向听众说明你的例子,如大禹,要说明大禹是谁,因为外教不清楚。 每次拿到每个 saying 的时候,要找重点词,重点的意思去阐述。 通常后半句才是重点, 尤其是句子中有转折意思的时候。 在阐述的时候,要尽量保持人称的一致性,如果用 we, 一直用 we. how we spend their (应为:our) time尽量不要使用过去式,除非你是在讲过去的事情。when we go to school, we were(应为 are ) taught the knowledge from the books by
2、 teacher. 单复数要一致: We may learn a lot from it (应为 them)which would really do good to our life. But there are(应为 is )much more important knowledge exist in the world7. 不要写中式英语: But there are(应为 is )much more important knowledge exist(应为:existing ) in the world梁Remember that a persons name is to that p
3、erson the sweetest and most important sound in any language.Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Today the topic of my impromptu speech is remember that a persons name is to that person the sweetest and most important sound in any lamguage. (先解释一下你对这句的意思)As to this saying, I couldnt help agreeing with
4、 it any more. From my standpoint, My reasons are as followings.In the first place, the name, as for a person, is so vital and it contains special meaning, so it shows respect and attention to the person if you can remember his or her name. . Your own name shows the roots of your own idendityidentity
5、, and in the same way, the other peoples names indicate the idendity of themtheir identity. Therefore, remembeing a persons name is not the name itself but is a kind of respect and attention to that person. That has crucial significance. For instance, my name, Liang Wenbo, Liang Wenbo does not just
6、mean that these three Chinese characters are lined together. It stands for foe me, this the personhuman, who is tough, optimistic, confident and kind. For these reasons, this it is given special meaning and very important to me. Now if you could remember my name and call me “Hey, Liang Wenbo, how ar
7、e you doing?”. For me, I would say, “Wow! Wonderful, he remembers my name! Thats so sweet.” And this would make me happy all day long. Thats the magic of remembering a persons name. And also, In the second place, for a teacher, remembeingremembering the students names is also a very effective way to
8、 improve their teaching. That can narrow the gap that exists between the teacher and the students and they can establish a close relationship. In this way, the atmosphere in the class room will be more relaxed and comfortable and the students will be more active and interested in learning. I believe
9、 that many of you will agree with me that a foreign teachers class is often more atractive and active. Why? I also asked myself this question and by observing I found out the secret. What is that? The secret is name. In the first class, the teacher knows the students names, but and at the second tim
10、e, he can call students names correctly. Thats wonderful. The students like that, they receive the information of respect and attention from the teacher calling their name, so they are more willing to be cooperative in calss. Hence, it is of significant meaning to remember peoples names.Finally, to
11、sum up, it is fantastic to notice realize that it is very important to someone remembers your name and it is also very important to try to remember other peoples names.remember peoples names and be remembered. So, lets remember each others name. Thank you!单数可数名词不能单独存在,name 不能单独存在,如果存在一定是 a name, the
12、 name, her name, names 等,但绝对不能是 name. Be not angry that you can not make others as you wish them to be, since you can not make yourself as you wish to be.Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Today the topic of my impromtuimpromptu speech is that be not angry that you can not make others as you wish th
13、em to be, since you can not make yourself as you wish to be. In my opinion, it means that(不要说太多无关紧要的话,直接解释这句的意思,表达的时候不要绕弯)Well, frankly speaking, at my first glance of this saying, it likes that there is a sonorous thunder sounds in my ears. It wakes me up. I am lightened. And I believe that many pe
14、ople have the same feeling as me. That is, I totally agree with this saying. Here are some of my arguments.Regarding the wish, I want to say that dont dream of expecting others to be what you want them to be. Why? Since, mMost of the time, you yourself can not make yourself as you wish to be. If we
15、are sensitive enough, it will be not difficult to find that many things that has happened around us have prove d this saying is a truth. Many people are doing these useless things. However, they have no idea that what they are doing is harmful to those who they love as well as harmful to themselves.
16、 Therefore, these scenes can pfthen be seen in public. A parent, a child, the parent tries to persuade the child to a tutorial class. The child does want to go, he wants to enjoy the right to be a child. Nevertheless, in the name of love, the parents would say, “baby, I love you so much. All these t
17、hings that I did are just good for you . I want you have a bright future; I want to see that you can enter a key university or go abroad.” In tears and unwillingly, the child is pushed into that boring tutorial classroom. At any time, I witness this occasion, I feel painful.the parents say that they
18、 love the child, but they dont know that this love may ruin a childs happy childhood. For this reason, I have to say that this love bears too much the weight of the parents wishes. Entering key university, going aboad or any thing else, all just the parents unaccomplished dreams and now they impose
19、these dreams to the next generation in name of love. If the children can not achieve what they want, the parents would be disappointed so that punish or scold the children. Another family tragedy will quickly on show.All the reasons are rooted in the fact that these parents are too ignorant to know
20、the truth that be not angry that you can not make others as you wish them to be, since you can not make yourself as you wish to be.Finally, ladies and gentlemen, we must keep this truth in our mind. Be not angry, because you can not control the fate of others, so just be good to yourself first, do w
21、ant you should do. Thats enough.Thank you!(这篇的整个结构太乱,这句话的两个重点是:不要期望别人能想你想的那样,因为你自己本身就不能做到你想的那样,所以你的论点应该围绕这两点来写,至于父母孩子的这个例子,我认为并不是很有说服力,因为父母有指导性的职能,指导孩子的未来,因为孩子毕竟较小,但是你可以说父母让孩子上辅导班是好的,但是有些父母自己并不能做到他们想做的,却强迫孩子来做。重新组织这篇的语言)Home is where the heart is.Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Today the topic of
22、 my impromtu speech is that home is where the heart is. When I first saw this topic, I was a little bit excited, because it reached the softest part of my heart.(直接进入主题) Home is the harbor of both our body and mind. Home is the never ever changed inner sustenance. There is no need to mention the sig
23、nificance of home. Many people may say that where there is home, there is heart, but I want to say that where there is heart, there is home. (这两句的差别是什么?) Concerning this saying, I have three points to back me up. Regarding the first point, if only we have love, and care for the parents in our hearts
24、incerely, then home is just there near us. We still can be together if our hearts are connected. The reason why home is so important to us is that there are our blovedbeloved parents waiting for us. No matter how far we are away from home, their solicitude is always there. In the same way, whether w
25、e are near at hand or far away in at the end of the world. This let me think ofTake an ancient Chinese flood-combatting hero-Da Yu for example. At that time, Da Yu was assigned to preventcombat the flood throughby water control. He passed his home for three times, but never went in for a secondfor a
26、 look. Didnt he want to go in? I dint dont think so. I believe he miseed missed his family so much in his heart, but he knew what the more important thing was. Therefore, he put his home in his heart and regulated waters forstfirst. AcordinglyAccordingly, we can see that as long as we have a caring
27、heart, home is not distant from us.Now moving to the nextSecondly, if onlywhere there is love and affection in your heart, then there must beis your your home. Take To illustrate, San Mao, a Taiwanese writer, and her husband, as an example, she and Hexi lived in the Sahara Desert happily. Though the
28、y lived in the harsh environment and they didnt have enough food supplies, they were still contented with what they hadve got. Neither San Mao nor He Xi was the original resident there, but for love in their hearts, they treated there as their home. Thats can be best explainedThis fully explained wh
29、y San Mao finally left the Sahara after He Xis death. Still, because of love. If love has gone, then the home will not exist any more.Lastly, if only there is dream in your heart, then mhome is along side, too. Think of the international communist soldier-Bethume, he was a Canadian, but in order to
30、help the liberation of China, to pursue his dream, resolutrly he came to China and devoted himself to the career. He shouldnt have any relevance with China before he came. Nevertheless, love pushed him to and he really took China as his home and he did all these unconditionalyyy. So no matter where
31、you are, as long as your dream is there, there will be your home.Bringing this my arguments to a close, heart is the starting pointharbor of home. Only if we are full of love towards our families, home is always there with us no matter how far it is geographically. 举例的时候,要说明是什么人,因为听众不一定都对你举的例子很熟悉。所以
32、要先说明一下。 Unless we put home in our hearts, then even if we live right in the home, well still wonder where we are where the home is.When it is dark enough, you can see the stars.Today the topic of my impromtu speech is that when it is dark enough, you can see the stars. I canntcant agree with this sa
33、ying any more. In my opinion, Darkness is about the frustrations. “enough” is about the effort and the “stars” are the hopes, dreams or success. So this saying teaches me three things: making my objective and direction clear, being prepared for wrestling with frustrations and difficulties and import
34、antly, keeping in faith. So, I have three points to support my opinion. First, we should make our objective and direction clear before we set out. We cant see the stars during the day time. Is it because that there are no stars here? Of cause not. The stars are over there in the sky all the time. We
35、 cant see them because they are hidden behind the sunlignt. So, we shouldnot waste our time. Rather, we should turn to the night to find our stars. So before we set out for our dreams. Its very important to know what exactly we want and which direction to go to find it. (要保持人称的一致性,如果是第一人称,尽量都用第一人称。这
36、段写得非常好,很有说服力)Second, we should be prepared for wresting with frustrations and difficulties. We cant expect that the way to our objective are smooth and easy. In the darkness, we may feel cold, lonely and be afraid of some unexpected frustrations, just as on the way to our dreams and success. But, on
37、ly in darkness could we see the stars. Similarly, only by experiencing harships and setbacks can we be clear about our goals and objectives. So, we should be not afraid of the difficulties we have to experience. Rather, we should hold a positive attitude to fully prepared for them. The last but not
38、the least point is that we should keep in faith and dont give up. Sometime we may feel disappointed after having been working hard for such a long time but still cant reach our dreams. But, we shouldnt give up and instead we should just keep in faith. May be our efforts are not enough. We need to wo
39、rk hard and keep waiting for a little bit longer, and we will see the hope soon. To conclude, if we choose the stars, we should be aware that we choose the darkness, too. if we want to enjoy the stars, make every efforts we can to defeat our fear to the darkness and keep in faith on ourselves. In th
40、e end, we will surly see our own stars. (注意全篇的人称)老师,这是重写的Today the topic of my impromptu speech is that victory wont come to me unless I go to it. My understanding of this quotation is that we must be positive, if we dont make efforts, we will never gain victory. I totally agree with this sentence.
41、My reasons are as follows.First of all , Since victory is the thing of stillness ,it wont come to you on initiative. There is a saying going like this, theres no such thing as a free lunch, so we have to earn bread with our own hands.The bread is here, but it would not come to us unless we go to it.
42、 So ,in short, its no use sitting here waiting victory to come to us. If we want it,we have to make efforts to earn it. In Addition to that, we should realize that the process of going to victory is not easy. As an illustration, Liuxiang , the famous Chinese athlete, won the gold medal in the mens 1
43、10 m hurdles final on August 28, 2004, at the Athens Olympic Games. He claimed the victory, but victory didnt come easily. He has to be trained everyday. It has included hundreds of sit-ups, holding the barbell, doing squat stand up, and crossing countless column.He gave up all his leisure entertain
44、ment, and only aimed at the victory. Hard work has been paied off, and finally, he succeeded.Therefore, victory wont come easily, and in the process of going to it ,we have to make great efforts to achieve it!To conclude, where there is a will ,there is a way, victory wont come to you, but if you ma
45、ke efforts to go for it, it will finally be yours!这是新的这句话的意思是:教育最主要的目的,不是教你挣得面包,而是使每一口面包都香甜。The topic of my impromptu speech is, the primary purpose of education is not to teach you to earn your bread, but to make every one mouthful sweeter.(解释一下) Well, I partially agree with this sentence, and my t
46、ow reasons are as follows.In the first place, I dont think the primary purpose of education is not to teach students to earn their bread. Rather, the primary purpose of education is to equip the students with abilities so as for them to make a living after they go to the society. Everyone receives e
47、ducation, people go to primary schools, high schools, then universities, or even further, the graduate schools. The knowledge they have learned in school has enabled them to know this world, including nature, science and civilization. Only when they are taugh the basic knowledge, can they be able to
48、 live in this world ,and make a living. So, it cannot be denied that the primary purpose of education is to teach people to earn their bread.However, I agree with the second half of the saying, that the primary purpose of education is to make every one mouthful sweeter. (这部分才是这句话的重点,要重点解释)In conclus
49、ion, I think the primary purpose of education is not only to teach you to earn your bread, but also to make every one mouthful sweeter. Education is really beneficial to us,primary education lead us to earn bread, further education teach us to make every one mouthful sweeter. (这个理解是错误的,这句话的意思是教育的主要目的并不是教会学生生存的本领,而是教会学生做人的道理,让学生懂得珍惜他们所拥有的,教会学生积极的生活态度。)So ,we must look on education from different aspects, and youll find the real primary purpose of education includes both. The topic of my impromptu speech is, education is an admirable thing