1、写作-续智贤一、万能理由万能理由- 好处 生活角度 we always consider recreational activities as something to relax ourselves or something that can add color to the dull routine of every day life.时间角度 Collecting, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom. It provides relax
2、ation for leisure hours, as just looking at ones treasures is always a joy. A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. The majority of student
3、s believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets. 大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。 知识角度 Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our hori
4、zons will be greatly broadened. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities. 现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会。 Now people in growing numbers are beginning to
5、 believe that some certain sports contribute directly to our body health by giving us some physical exercises. For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 对大多数人来讲，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源 For peop
6、le who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn. 对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老，学到老 By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve the
7、ir academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks. 通过做一份和专业相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到的经验。 科技角度 In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past. 在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们
8、比过去活的时间更长成为可能。 经济社会角度 Although many people claim that, along with the rapid economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information Ive collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely
9、important roles in modern society. Many people believe that international tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism. 许多人认为国际旅游对经济发展有积极作用，应鼓励地方政府发展国际旅游。 环境角度 Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution
10、not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet. 环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。 But what these people fail to see is that international tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment and local history
11、. 但是这些人忽视了国际旅游可能会给当地环境和历史造成的灾难性的影响。 越来越多,成为焦点 The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of e-books. Coincident with the advancement of information and technology, e-books pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. 得知 When reports came in
12、to London Zoo that a wild puma had been spotted forty-five miles south of London, they were not taken seriously. 回忆 There was a time when the owners of shops and businesses in Chicago that to pay large sums of money to gangsters in return for protection. 机会 As she is not rich, the chances that she w
13、ill ever be able to afford such purchases are remote. 不知道 It has never been explained why university students seem to enjoy practical jokes more than anyone else. Why people are prepared to tolerate a four-hour journey each day for the dubious privilege of living in the country is beyond me. 人们为什么情愿
14、每天在路上奔波 4 个小时去换取值得怀疑的乡间的优点，我是无法理解的。 万能理由之重要性 Punctuality is a necessary habit in all public affairs in civilized society. Without it, nothing could ever be brought to a conclusion; everything would be in a state of chaos. (抽象) （具体） It is widely acknowledged that computer and other machines have beco
15、me an indispensable part of our society, which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious. 人们普遍认为计算机和其他机器已经成为我们社会必不可少的一部分。 它们使我们的生活更舒适，减少了大量劳动。 At the same time, young people should be encouraged to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help t
16、hem greatly to reduce dependence on their parents and are essential in the maintenance of healthy mental condition. 同时，应该鼓励年轻人和他们的同龄人交往，发展他们的交际能力，这将帮助他们极大地减少对父母的倚赖并且保持健康的精神状态。 付出代价 Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price. 任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。 万能理由之坏处 TV takes up limited pr
17、ecious childrens time which can otherwise be used for more valuable activities such as sports or homework. Therefore, results in poor academic performance and self-humiliation . In the first place, extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of children. Educational experts point
18、out that, it is equally important to take some sport activities instead of extra studies when children have spent the whole day in a boring classroom. 首先，额外的学习对孩子们的身体发育是不利的。教育专家指出，孩子们在枯燥的教室里呆了一整天后，从事一些体育活动，而不是额外的学习，是非常重要的。 采取措施 Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists an
19、d the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism. 应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。 In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. 考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采
20、取有效的措施。 万能理由之喜欢 Cats never fail to fascinate human beings. The quiet life of the country has never appealed to me. They always go into raptures at the mere mention of the country. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework. 最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。 A
21、n investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement. 一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。 现象 There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study. 当前在高校和研究机构对教育存在着大量争论，其中
22、一个问题就是教育是否是个终身学习的过程。 There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students doing a part-time job. 对于大学或高中生打工这一现象，校园里进行着广泛的争论。 万能理由之影响 Antique shops exert a great fascination on a great many people. Many experts point out that physical exercise contribut
23、es directly to a persons physical fitness. 许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。 万能理由之表示变化 Some changes have taken place in the past five years. 例如：Some changes have taken place in peoples diet in the past five years. The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek. Nowadays，more and more people are switchin
24、g from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins. 万能理由之表示事实、现状 1）We cannot ignore the fact that. 2）No one can deny the fact that. 3）There is no denying the fact that.（坏） 例如：We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution. To
25、 solve these problems，we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution. The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take s
26、trong measures to deal with it. 无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。 People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation. 人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。 A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that they had completed their education when they fin
27、ished their schooling. Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that a persons education is a most important aspect of his life. 许多人存在这样的误解，认为离开学校就意味着结束了他们的教育。显然，他们忽视了教育是人生重要部分这一基本事实。 万能理由之表示比较 Compared with A，B. 例如：Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides
28、being affordable. 万能理由之表示结论 From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society. 通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：自行车的优点远大于缺点，并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。 From what has been discussed above, we m
29、ay safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole. 通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：业余工作对学生们会产生深远的影响，我们应鼓励学生从事业余工作，这将有利于学生和他们的家庭，甚至整个社会。 From what
30、 has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that the leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern society, it is not necessary a bad thing. 通过以上讨论，我完全相信，随着现代社会的进步，幽闲的生活方式正在消失并不是件坏事。 万能理由之结尾句 Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a
31、 slice of unfavorable impacts. We should，therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. （中间线路） 二、万能短语 欣赏大自然的风景 to appreciate the scenery of nature 欣赏古典文学 to appreciate the classical literature 开拓视野 to broaden the horizon 开拓心胸 to broaden the mind 启迪心灵 to enlighten the mind 陶冶品德
32、 to cultivate the character 培养公德心 to cultivate the public mindedness 维护健康 to maintain health 松散身心 to relax oneself 调剂生活 to make life pleasant 提升生活质量 to promote the qualities of life 提升生活的水平 to raise the standard of living （比较少） 增加生活的情趣 to increase the pleasures of life 解除紧张和焦虑 to relieve the tension
33、 and anxiety 关心社会 to be concerned about the society 贡献国家 to contribute oneself to the country 面临困难 to be confronted with the difficulty 克服困难 to overcome the difficulty 注意卫生 to emphasize the importance of hygiene 对 有益 to be beneficial to 对 有害 to be harmful to 采取步骤 to take steps to take measures 有很深的了
34、解 to have a deep understanding of 有广泛的知识 to have a wide range of knowledge 扮演重要角色 to play an important role in 强烈愿望 express a strong desire to According to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more mon
35、ey to support their family. 根据最近的一项调查，越来越多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补贴家用的强烈愿望。 不遗余力 to spare no efforts to 不辞辛劳 to take the pains to写作之谋篇布局 背景句（展现问题） 问题的常用词：question, problem, issue 1.Recently, the issue of has been brought into public focus. 近来，_的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。 Recently the issue of whether or not has
36、 been in the limelight（成为引人注目的中心）and has aroused wide concern in the public. 近来，是否_的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。 Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is 随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是_。 Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities
37、 and innovations, and great changes have taken place in peoples attitude towards some traditional practice. 现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。 改写题目 Most of us ，however，have formed a different picture of 第三句 And we rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue. 对于这种极具争议的话题，
38、我们很难作出绝对的回答。 第二段（文章的主体部分） Some people take the attitude that +万能理由( 简单到复杂，注意万能理由中的不同角度 ) 过渡句 The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. Other people hold the view that +万能理由( 简单到复杂) 结论段 Perhaps there is an element of truth in both these pictures. As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of the former view. 在我看来，我较同意前一种观点。 One of the things that fascinates us most about is the popular belief that
