1、书面表达常见错误,1,错误类型一: 汉式英语错误,书面表达常见错误,2,不少考生在英语书面表达时易受汉语习惯影响,所写句子虽然语法正确,却不符合英语表达习惯,造成不少汉语式英语病句.要减少汉式病句必须做到: (1)养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯,注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达. (2)平时多归纳总结,纠正汉式英语. (3)多收听对外广播、收看英语节目、广泛阅读英文版书籍、报纸及其它材料.,书面表达常见错误,3,误:He cost five yuan to buy a dictionary. 正: 或 误:Good good study, day day up. 正:,It cost him f
2、ive yuan to buy a dictionary.,If you study hard ,you will make progress every day.,The dictionary cost him five yuan.,书面表达常见错误,4,误:Here is suitable to grow cash crops. 正: 误:There is a notice in the park saying “ To take notice of safe; the sidewalk is very crafty.” 正:,It is suitable to grow cash cro
3、ps here.,There is a notice in the park saying “Watch your step. Slippery sidewalk.”,书面表达常见错误,5,误: His fever is high. 正: 误: The student is standing there is my brother. 正: 或,He has a high fever.,The student standing there is my brother.,The student who is standing there is my brother.,书面表达常见错误,6,误: T
4、he price of the computer is expensive. 正: 误: The population of China is many. 正:,The price of the computer is high.,The population of China is large.,2011-10-18,书面表达常见错误,7,误: Recently our village have taken place great changes . 正: 误: There are twenty students in our class have been to Beijing. 正:,R
5、ecently great changes have taken place in our village.,Twenty students in our class have been to Beijing.,书面表达常见错误,8,误: That factory broke out a fire last Sunday. 正: 误: This building likes a school. 正:,A fire broke out in that factorylast Sunday.,This building looks like/is a school.,书面表达常见错误,9,误: H
6、e will able to write articles in English next year. 正: 误: I will by bus to Beijing. 正:,He will be able to write articles in English next year.,Ill go to Beijing by bus tomorrow.,书面表达常见错误,10,误: Professor Li comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. 正: 误: His friends are few. 正:,P
7、rofessor Li from Beijing Universitywill give us a lecture tomorrow.,He has few friends.,书面表达常见错误,11,误: Wei Fangs father scolded her coming late to school. 正:,Wei Fangs father scolded her for her coming late to school.,书面表达常见错误,12,误: To attend this meeting is important. 正: 误: His teaching methods are
8、 many. 正:,It is important to attend this meeting.,He has many teaching methods.,书面表达常见错误,13,错误类型二: 句子结构不完整或结构错误,书面表达常见错误,14,一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(祈使句除外)。如果把句子的某一个部分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。两个各含有主语和谓语的分句不能写在一起，也不能只用逗号隔开。,书面表达常见错误,15,误: There were foreigners came to our school. 正: 误: Without a friend will feel lon
9、ely. 正:,There were foreigners who cameto our school.,Without a friend one will feel lonely.,书面表达常见错误,16,误: The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, the boys mopped the floor. 正: 正:,The girls cleaned the desks and chairs; the boys mopped the floor.,The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, and the boys
10、mopped the floor.,书面表达常见错误,17,误: The book was interesting. I read it rapidly. 正: 正:,The book was interesting; I read it rapidly.,The book was interesting,and I read it rapidly.,书面表达常见错误,18,误: The woman talked to you just now is our English teacher. 正: 误: I cant imagine what life would be like if hav
11、e not any TV sets. 正:,The woman who talked to you just now is our English teacher.,I cant imagine what life would be like if we have not any TV sets.,书面表达常见错误,19,误: China is no longer what used to be . 正: 误: Although rained, we went on working. 正:,China is no longer what it used to be .,Although it
12、rained, we went on working.,书面表达常见错误,20,误: They finished the homework, they went out. 正: 误: I am tired, I must go to bed. 正:,Since/As they finished the homework, they went out.,I am tired, so I must go to bed.,书面表达常见错误,21,误:The sun gives off heat and light, this makes it possible for the plants on t
13、he earth to grow. 正:,The sun gives off heat and light,which makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow.,书面表达常见错误,22,误:You practise more reading, you will improve your reading ability. 正:,If you practise more reading, you will improve your reading ability.,书面表达常见错误,23,误:I arrived at the st
14、ation, the train had left. 正:,When I arrived at the station, the train had left.,书面表达常见错误,24,误: China is still a developing country, most people cant afford a car. 正:,Because China is still a developing country, most people cant afford a car.,书面表达常见错误,25,错误类型三： 重复累赘,书面表达常见错误,26,有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需
15、要不能再出现某个单词，而学生基本功夫不够扎实，常常出现累赘现象。,书面表达常见错误,27,误: The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it. 正: 误: We hope to improve our work better. 正:,The box is too heavy for the weakboy to carry.,We hope to improve our work.,书面表达常见错误,28,误: We are very like his lesson. 正: 误: Yours class was interesting. 正
16、:,We like his lesson very much.,Your class was interesting.,书面表达常见错误,29,误: In spite of the fact he is lazy, I like him. 正: 误: Personally I think he is a good student. 正:,In spite of his laziness, I like him.,I think he is a good student.,书面表达常见错误,30,误: I seldom go to the Shanghai Library due to the
17、reason it is far away from my home. 正:,I seldom go to the Shanghai Library because it is far away from my home.,书面表达常见错误,31,误: Mary married with John. 正: 误: I returned back the book to you yesterday. 正:,Mary married John.,I returned the book to you yesterday.,书面表达常见错误,32,误: The teacher repeated the
18、sentence again. 正: 误: My most favorite song is “Hand in Hand”. 正:,The teacher repeated the sentence.,My favorite song is “Hand in Hand”.,书面表达常见错误,33,误: The train is entering into the tunnel. 正:,The train is entering the tunnel.,书面表达常见错误,34,错误类型四： 句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性,书面表达常见错误,35,一个句子必须表达一个完整、 前后语意一致的意思。如果把不相
19、干的意思放子一个句字里或一个句子表达不完整，就会出现逻辑问题。 句子无论长短，在安排上要合乎逻辑，衔接自然，使句内语意关系明确。而学生在习作过程中常出现悬垂修饰语、指代不明、缺少过渡词语、非平行结构和语意不完整的分割句等错误。,书面表达常见错误,36,误: Being an honest man, Tom worked very hard. 正: 误: Liu Hua is a kind-hearted girl. She will be successful in anything she tries. 正:,Being an honest man, Tom never tells a li
20、e.,AS she has a strong will and confidence in herself, Liu Hua may be successful in anything she tries.,书面表达常见错误,37,误: Rose is in love with John, John is in love with Mary. 正:,Rose is in love with John, but John is in love with Mary.,书面表达常见错误,38,错误类型五： 语法、词法错误,书面表达常见错误,39,许多考生写作中易犯关系不一致、词性混用、选词或搭配不当
21、，时态语态错误、指代不清、语序不当等方面的错误。,书面表达常见错误,40,误: In the bedroom there are a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 正: 误: He closed the door and hurries away to class. 正:,In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.,He closed the door and hurried away to class.,书面表达常见错误,41,误: 60% of the students again
22、st the idea of entrance fees. 正: 误: 2 days past before his letter arrived. 正:,60% of the students are againstthe idea of entrance fees.,2 days passed before his letter arrived.,书面表达常见错误,42,误: In order to learn English well, I should increase/raise the method of study. 正:. 误: Tom was in such a hurry
23、that he forget his schoolbag on the bus. 正:,In order to learn English well, I should improve the method of study,Tom was in such a hurry that he left his schoolbag on the bus.,书面表达常见错误,43,错误类型六： 拼写错误及注意标点符号,书面表达常见错误,44,考生出现单词拼写错误的原因： 一是因为发音错误导致拼写错误，如：strick（strict）；二是因为不知道动词的不规则变化所导致的，如： teached（taught）等。 标点符号是一种变相文字，是书面表达不可缺少的重要手段，很多学生不了解不同标点符号的用途或英汉标点差异，结果出现错误。,
