1、高考英语基础写作 五句话作文-新闻通讯类,,真题再现 【2013年广东高考 分值-15分】 请根据以下信息， 写一篇关于移民火星的快讯。,【写作指导 Writing Instruction】,1. 认真审题 Check Information Carefully,2. 整合信息 Organize Information Logically,1）确定题材 新闻报道类 news,2）确定文章主题 第一句,3）确定人称/时态,根据要点的逻辑关系进行组合： 1 2,3,4 5,6 7, 8,3. 翻译组句 Make Sentence Correctly,报道客观真实，语言通俗易懂,4w-who/wha
2、t when/where,第三人称 / 一般过去(现在/将来)时,1) 参考句型和词组：,1. 到2015年， 在全球选出约30名去火星(the Mars)的志愿者。,1.1 About thirty volunteers who want to immigrate to the Mars will be chosen from all over the world by the year of 2015.,志愿者： 选 出： 全 球：,choose， select, pick out,volunteer, person, people,all over the world, the whol
3、e world, the global different part of the world,1.2 By 2015, about thirty volunteers will be selected from the whole world and sent to the Mars.,2) 参考句型和词组：,志愿者的条件 2. 至少18岁；3. 做好不回地球的准备；4. 愿与他人保持良好的关系。,2.1 The volunteers should be at least 18 years old, be prepared not to return to the Earth, and be
4、 willing to keep a good relationship with others.,至少 ： 做好不回地球的准备 ：愿与.保持良好的关系：,be prepared not to return(go back) to the Earth Be ready for living on the Mars forever,at least,be willing to keep a good relationship with. Like contecting with.,2.2 The volunteers should be at least 18 years old, be rea
5、dy for living on the Mars forever, and like contecting with different people.,3) 参考句型和词组：,专家的观点 5. 火星生活条件太艰苦；6. 面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。,3.1 The living conditions on Mars are very hard because they have to face the extremely cold climate, loneliness and fear.,火星生活条件太艰苦 ：面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧：,the living conditions on M
6、ars are very hard it is very difficult for us to live on Mars,face the extremely (severe/ very) cold climate, loneliness and fear(scare),3.2 It is very difficult for us to live on Mars, because of the severe cold climate, loneliness and scare.,4) 参考翻译：,志愿者观点 7. 厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活；,4.1 Volunteers are eag
7、er to experience different life on Mars, for they feel bored of the life on Earth.,4.2 Because volunteers are tired of living on Earth, they want to experience different life on Mars.,5.1 If they succeed, they will be regarded as the heroes of human kind.,5.2 If successful, they will become humans h
8、eroes.,到2015年， 在全球选出约30名去火星(the Mars)的志愿者。,1.1 It is reported that about thirty volunteers who want to immigrate to the Mars will be chosen from all over the world by the year of 2015.,1.2 As is reported, by 2015, about thirty volunteers will be selected from the whole world and sent to the Mars.,4.
9、 润色成篇 Polish Article Properly,【写作指导】,据报道：,It is reported that., As is reported., According to the report.,志愿者 2. 至少18岁；3. 做好不回地球的准备；4. 愿与他人保持良好的关系。,2.1 However，the volunteers should be at least 18 years old, be prepared not to return to the Earth, and be willing to keep a good relationship with othe
10、rs.,2.2 But the volunteers should be at least 18 years old, be ready for living on the Mars forever, and like contecting with different people.,4. 润色成篇,However, But,然而(可是) ，,5. 火星生活条件太艰苦；6. 面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。,3.1 Experts reminded us that the living conditions on Mars are very hard because they have to fa
11、ce the extremely cold climate, loneliness and fear.,3.2 Scientists pointed out that it is very difficult for us to live on Mars because of the severe cold climate, loneliness and scare.,4. 润色成篇,专家提醒我们科学家指出,志愿者 7. 厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活；,4.1 In spite of this, volunteers are still eager to experience differen
12、t life on Mars, for they feel bored of the life on Earth.,4.2 Even so, volunteers are tired of living on Earth, so they want to experience different life on Mars.,8. 如果成功， 就是人类英雄。,5.1 Whats more important, some of them think that, if they succeed, they will be regarded as the heroes of human kind.,5
13、.2 Most importantly, if successful, they will become humans heroes.,4. 润色成篇,In spite of this，Even so,尽管如此，,更重要的是，有人认为. 最重要的,.,1.1 It is reported that about thirty volunteers who want to immigrate to the Mars will be chosen from all over the world by the year of 2015.,【范文一】15分,2.1 However，the volunte
14、ers should be at least 18 years old, be prepared not to return to the Earth, and be willing to keep a good relationship with others.,3.1 Experts reminded us that the living conditions on Mars are very hard because they have to face the extremely cold climate, loneliness and fear.,4.1 In spite of tha
15、t, volunteers are still eager to experience different life on Mars, for they feel bored of the life on Earth.,5.1 Whats more important, some of them think that, if they succeed, they will be regarded as the heroes of human kind.,1.2 As is reported, by 2015, about thirty volunteers will be selected f
16、rom the whole world and sent to the Mars.,【范文二】15分,2.2 However, the volunteers should be at least 18 years old, be ready for living on Earth forever, and be willing to keep a good relationship with others.,3.2 Scientists pointed out that it is very difficult for us to live on Mars, because of the se
17、vere cold climate, loneliness and scare.,4.2 Even so, because volunteers are tired of living on Earth, they want to experience different life on Mars.,5.2 Most importantly, if successful, they will become humans heroes.,【 总结 Summary 】,1.认真审题 2. 整合信息 3. 翻译组句 4. 润色成篇,1. 据报道：It is reported that., As is
18、 reported., 2. 然而：However 3. 专家提醒我们：Experts reminded us that. 科学家指出：Scientists pointed out that. 4. 尽管如此：In spite of this, Even so, 5. 更重要的是：Whats more important, .最重要的：Most importantly, .,1. 新闻报道是记叙文的一种, 新闻报道的关键在于客观真实，通俗易懂。因此语言可以相对平实一点。不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。 2. 新闻通讯的第一句往往为全文的中心句(topic sentence), 这个句子常包含4W - who/what, when/where；而how和why即事件的过程和细节则在下文交代。 3. 平时多练习英语从句的翻译及写作，熟能生巧。 4. 注意收集一些新闻题材类的常用语及文章的连接词,Practice Makes Perfect!,【Homework】,Practice Makes Perfect!,谢谢观赏,Thanks for Your Listening!,
