1、,英语书面表达,English Composition Writing,写作内容 1. 以约30词概括上文的主要内容。 2. 以约120词就“制定规划与达成目标”这一主题进行议论，内容包括： (1) 海狸修水坝的故事给你的启示是什么？ (2) 请结合你的生活经历阐述“制定规划与达成目标”之间的关系。 写作要求 1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯,Beavers are very diligent dam-builders who can bui
2、ld extremely good dams. However, they sometimes dont know where to build the dams or which dams should be fixed only because they have no consciousness to make a plan.The beavers story illustrates the importance of planning. Without a plan the best intentions and efforts will not produce results. We
3、 shouldnt work blindly but have a clear idea of our purpose, the actions needed to achieve it, and how these should be ordered.,As a junior student, I achieved considerable success in learning English through the combination of hard work and planning. I prepared good materials with the help of my te
4、acher, made plans for my daily study and self-monitored the whole process of my learning. I made rapid progress and became very confident. I think I couldnt have done it without a good plan.,Diligence is a key to success, but in my opinion, good plan is also essential. Through planning, we can devel
5、op clear goals, find more efficient and effective methods and thus have more opportunities to reach our goals than through hardworking alone.,Appreciate and learn the three well organized compositions from students,The Essay,What makes a good essay?,Discussion,Content,Everything needed included whic
6、h is related to your view. (内容要完整),Structure,*Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed(结构合理,行文流畅) * Proper linking words between sentences,1. Based on this passage, _,making a plan before doing something is essential. 2. _, well complete our goal with areasonable pla
7、n. 3. _ its important to havea plan.,as far as I am concerned,On the contrary,as far as I am concernedon the contraryas a consequence,使用恰当的连接词 Use proper linking words,As a consequence,4. As an old saying goes, “no pains, no gains”, _, I think, only by takingpains to complete our goals with a plan,
8、can we attain success. 5._, I have realized thevital importance of a strong plan.,however Since then,however,Since then,Language,* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化),Adopt a variety of sentence p
9、atterns 使用较丰富的句式,this passage, as far as I am concerned, Something is essential. 2. Without a detailed plan, I couldnt even allocate my time sensible, making me idle away the entire vocation,1. Based on,making a plan before doing,Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式,For my part, I think tha
10、t a detailed plan is to a person what a lighthouse is to a ship. In a word, being a student, we should learn a rule, that is, a plan of vital importance for us to achieve success.,Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式,5. Although beavers are always the symbol of working hard, their unplanned working are always useless, leading to the waste of both their time and superb ability. 6. Therefore, the confinement to success lies not only in ones capacity for substantial actions, but also in ones advanced planning,assess,Please learn to Your composition,书面表达评价表,
