1、期中考试作文讲评,假定你是李华，为了丰富学生的文化生活，你校学生会开展了主题为 “秋天的校园”的摄影作品比赛。请结合以下要点写成一篇新闻稿，发表你校英文网站上。1. 过程：同学踊跃参加；2.方式：微信平台展示；3.结果：公众好评如潮。 注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：微信 Wechat 校园 campus,存在问题,1. 书写潦草, 卷面不整洁，难辨认。 2. 审题不仔细，要点不完整，格式混乱。 3.整体时态错误；将来时与现在时混用。 4. 句式简单，罗列。缺乏连接，没有适当的添加，缺乏逻辑性，行文不流畅。 5.语言表达错误多，词性混用，单词拼写出错较
2、多，如inrich ，competation, 等。,新 闻 报 道 新闻报道属于说明类或记叙类的文章，是对最近发生的事实的报道。它具有迅速、及时、简短、明了的特点。 一篇新闻报道要包括六个要素，即who, when, where, what, why, how (五W一H)。 新闻报道一般包括四个部分：标题、导语、主体、结束语。,新闻报道 （news）,标题 (headline),导语(instruction),主体 (body),结束语(conclusion),简洁明了,核心内容(who, when, where, what),进一步展开和阐释(what, how),概括性的总结或提出令人
3、深思的问题,Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly,On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with
4、 flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beau
5、tiful day that they would remember it forever. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.,标题,导语,主体,结束语,By Chen Jie, School Newspaper,1. 体裁： 2时态： 3结构：,新闻报道,一般过去时及一般现在时,标题,导语,主体,结束语,1. 丰富学生的文化生活 2. 开展了摄影作品比赛 3. 踊跃参加 4. 表现出极大的热情 5. 微信平台展示
6、 6. 好评如潮 7. 获得巨大成功 8.收益匪浅,In order to enrich the students school life, the students union held a creative photography work competition, with the theme “ Autumn Campus” .To our delight, students showed their great enthusiasm for the competition. Not only did they participate in it actively, but also
7、improved some photographic skills by communicating with each other. All the works were displayed through Wechat platform, many of which became popular with the public.All in all, this competition undoutedly achieved a great success, which was highly thought of by the public. We hope more activities like this will be held next time.,Thank you !,
