1、写作专题突破,【写作要求】 假如你是李华，上周日去动物园，看到游客对动物乱扔石子甚至往一头熊的头上泼水，对此你感到非常气愤。现在请你用英语就此事给某报社编辑写封信，并提出你的建议；请求该报帮着呼吁人们保护和爱护动物。 要求：词数120左右。,【审题谋篇】 第一自然段为总写：写明写信目的，你的感受(应用一般现在时态)。 第二段：反映你的所见所闻，应用一般过去时态。 第三段：你的建议，应用一般现在时和将来时态。 最后一段：请求该报帮助。 本文应用第一人称；可以用first，second，but，even等词连接或过渡。,【写作要点】 1.我写信是要告诉你上星期天我在动物园的经历。 (1)_you
2、about my experience in the zoo last Sunday. (2)Here I write to tell you about_ in the zoo last Sunday. 答案：(1)Im writing to tell (2)what I saw,2有很多动物被养在动物园内，它们好像没有得到很好的对待。 (1)There were many animals_in the zoo and _they were not being treated well. (2)Many animals_and they_ _treated well. (3)_many an
3、imals_ were not being treated well.,答案：(1)kept；it seemed that (2)were kept in the zoo；seemed not to be (3)It seemed that；kept in the zoo 3首先要教育人们：动物是我们的朋友。动物对人们生活的重要性。 (1)First we should make people know that_ _and_.,(2)_，we should tell people_ animals and that they are our friends. (3)_，we should m
4、ake people know animals are our friends and important to peoples life. 答案：(1)animals are our friends；important to peoples life (2)Firstly；the importance of (3)First of al,4任何虐待动物的人都要被罚款。 (1)_badly should be fined. (2)_badly should be fined. (3)_badly should be fined. 答案：(1)Anyone who treats animals
5、(2)Whoever treats animals (3)Those who treat animals,5我建议把动物放回到自然界去。 (1)I suggest that_in nature. (2)_is that these animals should be set free in nature. (3)_that these animals should be set free in nature. 答案：(1)those animals should be set free (2)My suggestion (3)It is my suggestion,【连句成篇】 _ _ _,【
6、佳作欣赏】 Dear Editor， Here I write to tell you about my experience in the zoo last Sunday.I feel terribly sorry and ashamed of what people did to the animals. There were many animals kept in the zoo and it seemed that they were not being treated well.I saw many visitors throw some stones at them and so
7、me visitors even poured water onto a big bears head. Some people just looked and laughed，but no one thought those were wrong.,Here is what we should do.First we should make people know animals are our friends and important to us.Second anyone who treats animals badly should be fined.Last，if people c
8、ant stop doing so，my suggestion is that these animals be set free in nature. I hope you can help educate people to love and respect animals.Thank you. Yours sincerely， Li Hua,【类文点津】 写一封反映问题或提意见、征求意见的信 1一般书信体的组成： 正式信件(多用于外交、商务、社交等场合)：开头(start)，一般用Dear或Dear姓/身份/职务等，如Dear editor，Dear mayor，or Dear Smit
9、h. 正文(body)：正式信件讲话要含蓄一点，用词要谨慎一些。 结尾(ending)：Yours sincerely，Sincerely，Sincerely yours，Yours truly，Yours faithfully等较正式用语。,非正式信件(多用于亲友、同学、同事之间) 开头：Hi，My dear；Dearest等。 正文：因彼此情谊笃厚，讲话可以直率一点、开门见山，意见要中肯。 结束语：Love，Cheers，Regards，Best wishes，Yours等相对随便的词语。 2常用表达： 反映现象的常用开头句式： Im writing to tell you that. R
10、ecently we have made a survey that.,Many people are worried about. It worries more and more people that. 提出措施的常用句式： We intend to.to help/save/protect. We are ready to call on people to. We feel like doing.to teach the illegal hunters a lesson. Wed rather not.but do. Wed like to.to punish those who d
11、o harm to wildlife.,征求对方支持的常用表达： We need your support to made more and more people. Would you please help us to.by.? Well appreciate it if you can. In order to.，we need. .so that. I hope that I can get help from. I expect that you can.,As we know ，the number of some wild plants and animals has alrea
12、dy decreased and some animals have already died out.So it is high time for us to pay much attention to wildlife protection.But how can we prevent endangered animals from being in danger of disappearing？Firstly，we should protect them from being hunted.Its of importance to educate people to regard ani
13、mals as our friends.Those who,want to get large income from hunting animals for their fur should be punished.Secondly，some nature reserves and zones should be set so that animals can live in peace.It is also necessary to employ some people to look after them.Only in this way will animals not be harm
14、ed more often. Thirdly，the habit of eating the meat of some endangered animals should be got rid of.According to some reports，some restaurants are still serving such dishes now.The government should,正如我们大家所知，野生动植物的 数目已经减少，一些动物也已经灭 绝了。所以是时候我们该密切注意 保护野生动植物了。但是我们怎样能够阻止濒临灭绝的动物面临消失的危险呢？首先，我们应该保护它们免遭捕杀。教育
15、人们把动物看作是我们的朋友很重要。那些想通过猎杀动物获取它们的毛皮而获得暴利(income 收入)的人应该受到惩罚。第二，应该设立一些自然保护区和保护带，为,的是动物能够平静地生活。雇用一些人照看他们也是有必要的。只有这样动物才不会经常受到伤害。第三，应该摒弃吃濒危动物的习惯。据报道，有的饭店现在依然供应此类菜肴。政府应该制定更强有力的法律来阻止类似事件的再次发生。如果这样，濒危动物任人摆布(mercy仁慈；宽恕)的日子将一去不复返。如果我们每个人都有保护野生动植物的意识，那么保护野生动植物的氛围必然会形成。这对人类和野生动植物来说将会是一个幸福的结局。,本部分内容讲解结束,点此进入课件目录,按ESC键退出全屏播放,谢谢使用,
