1、,Grammar Filling(语法填空),Close Test （完型填空）,Writing （写作）,Reading & comprehending（阅读理解）,高考题型：,Basic Writing,平远中学谢舒娜,以2010高考作文为例,谈谈如何通过使用正确、规范的语言提高基础写作。,内 容：公共场所禁烟 实施时间：2011年1月1日起 实施范围：全国 目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟 措施：张贴禁烟标志 相关数据： （1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿 （2）分布：男性75；女性：25 （3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿 （4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年,以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报
2、道的主要内 容。,2010年高考基础写作,基础写作的推荐步骤：,1、认真审题 2、归纳、整合信息点 3、确定短语和句型 4、连词成句 5、组句成篇 6、检查修改,step1:审题,时态：,文体：,应用文（通讯稿）,现在完成时（Present perfect） 一般现在时 （Simple present ） 一般将来时 （Simple future ）,step2：归纳、整合信息,1. 中国大约有3.5亿人吸烟,其中男性75%,女性25%.,2.受二手烟影响的人数约5.4亿，而且每年有超过10万人因二手烟死亡。,3. 中国政府决定从2011.1.1.起全国范围内禁止在公共场所吸烟。,4.到时，政
3、府会张贴一些禁烟标志。,5.大家一起行动，我们才能使所有室内公共场所无烟。,step3：,1、3.5亿 ： 2、受到的影响： 3、二手烟： 4、全国： 5、禁止做某事 ： 6、室内公共场所：7、张贴 ：8、无烟：,affected by,350 million,second-hand smoke,all over the country,forbid doing sth.,indoor public places,put up,free of smoke,确定短语、基本句型,使用正确、规范的句子， 保证句子成分完整。,step4:连词成句,1.公共场所禁烟。,Forbid smoking in
4、 pulic places.,The government will forbid smoking in public places.,主语,谓语,宾语,(No subjuct),.所有室内公共场所无烟. All the indoor public places no smoke.(no predicate),There will be no smoke in all the indoor public places.,3.中国政府决定禁烟 The Chinese government decides forbid smoking.,(double predicates),The Chines
5、e government decides to forbid smoking.,4.每年受二手烟影响的人数约5.4亿. Every year because second-hand smoke affect people number abuot 540 million .,(Chinese English),About 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke.,小结：正确、规范的句子意味着它要有主语和谓语（必要时还要有宾语)。,A correct sentence is a beautiful language.,二、尝试灵活
6、多变的句式，避免通篇单一的句式,方法一：使用非谓语动词，使句子简洁时尚。,每年受二手烟影响的人数约5.4亿.,About 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke. （ordinary sentence）,The number of people is about 540 million.,affected by second-hand,smoke,方法二：使用复合句（特别是定语从句），使句子的信息容量大, 紧凑连贯。,中国大约有3.5亿人吸烟,其中男性75%, 女性25%.,There are 350 million smoke
7、rs in China. 75% of them are men, and 25% of them are women.,There are 350 million smokers in China, _ _ 75% are men, and 25% are women.,of,whom,方法三. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,make all the indoor public places free of smoke.,we can make all the indoor public places free of smoke if everyone takes part in it .,
8、Only if,can we,everyone takes part in it,2.受二手烟影响的人数高达5.4亿，而且每年有超过10万人因二手烟死亡。 The number of people affected by second-hand smoke is about 540 million and more than 100 thousands of them die each year. 3. 中国政府决定从2011.1.1.起全国范围内禁止在公共场所吸烟。 The Chinese government has decided to forbid smoking in public
9、places all over the country from January 1st, 2011. 4. 政府会张贴一些禁烟标志。 Signs will be put up to forbid smoking.,step5：连句成篇,_, there are about 350 million smokers in China, of whom 75% are men and 25% are women./ The number of people affected by second-hand smoke is about 540 million _ more than 100 mill
10、ion of them die each year. / _, the Chinese government has decided to forbid smoking in public places all over the country from Jan1st, 2011. / _, signs will be put up to forbid smoking. _everyone takes part in it ,can we make all the indoor public places free of smoke.,As it is reported,Face with s
11、uch a situation,Therefore,By then,Only if,and,by then only if therefore As its reported because and,Step6：检查修改,检查全文是否用五个句子表达，文章当中的单词拼写是否正确、时态运用是否恰当，短语搭配是否规范，前后人称是否一致等，尽量避免低级错误。,show time,Now please try using your correct language to write your beautiful compositon.,A possible version:According to a
12、report by the Chinas government, there are about 350 million smokers in China, of whom 75% are men and 25% women./ People affected by second-hand smoke add up to about 540 million and more than 100 million of them die each year. / Faced with such a challenging situation /therefore, the Chinese gover
13、nment decides to forbid smoking in public places all over the country from January 1st, 2011. / By then, signs will be put up to forbid smoking. Only if everyone takes part in it ,can we make all the indoor public places free of smoke.,射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。,Shooting was originated as a means
14、of survival. It developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.,Shooting, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.,in the late 19th century _ _ develop into a sport from a means of survival.,which was originated as a means of,survival,你来试试：,Only,did shooting,1896射击第一次成为奥运项目; 1904
15、、1928曾经中断（suspend）;,The sport , was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.,which first appeared in 1896,Homework：,Write a competition using the six steps,2008广东高考基础写作你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。 写作内容 请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍： 背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 1896：第一次成为奥运项目; 1904：中断; 1928：中断; 1932：重回奥运会； 1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛； 现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。,Thank you,
