1、1四级写作总论课程安排：四级写作总论：1）考试流程 2）复习计划 3）学习方法 4）大纲解读应用文：1）个人简历 2）书信 3）口头作文 4）告示论说文： 1）评卷实例 2）万能句型翻译： 最新大纲 最新真题考试流程：08：45 验证入场（身份证、准考证、学生证缺一不可）09：00 发答题卡（答题卡 1 正面为作文题，背面写作文） ，9：00之后无法入场。09：1009 ： 35 写作（09：35 发试题册）09：3509 ： 40 翻译09：4009 ： 55 快速阅读理解（在答题卡 1 背面作答）09：5510 ： 00 收答题卡 1，建议快速浏览听力选项10：0010 ： 35 听力理解
2、（以下在答题卡 2 作答）10：3511 ： 05 仔细阅读理解（选词填空或简答篇章阅读理解）11：0511 ： 20 完形填空（11:05 监考教师提醒 15 分钟后交卷）复习计划：攻克词汇：词汇书：俞敏洪四级词汇词根+联想记忆法 2软件：新东方背单词 （5）真题：最新 10 套四级真题精研真题：最新 10 套四级真题，尤其是 2006 年 6 月 24 日以后真题词汇：没有一个词汇不认识选项：没有一个选项不了解提高实力：背诵：10 大必背范文1）Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a compositi
3、on on the topic My Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩考生可能带来的副作用我对考试的看法In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a partic
4、ular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous（巨大的）.To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques. No subjects can be ta
5、ught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take 3examinations. In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rat
6、her than to think creatively.In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?2）Directions: For this part you a
7、re allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Favorite Novel. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:我最喜爱的小说是该小说的内容我为什么喜爱My favorite novel is Around the World in Eighty Days which is written by Jules Verne. The author was born in France and
8、devoted himself to literature and wrote several scientific romances, which gained him the nameFather of Modern Science Fiction.This is a book of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his clubmates and manages to travel aro
9、und the world in eighty days. It 4gives us a vivid（生动地） description of the many difficulties and incidents which happen on his journey.From this story, we can see the authors deep love for the sea, travel and adventure, which played a vital（生死攸关极其重要的） role in his life. We are also astonished（惊讶） and
10、 convinced（确信信服） by his fertile（丰富的） imagination and scientific and geographical knowledge.3）Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Person I ever Know. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outlin
11、e below:我生活中最难忘的人是为什么他（或她）令我难以忘怀结论 In my life I have met a great many people who are really worth recalling. But perhaps（或许） the most unforgettable person I ever know is my English teacher.What frequently（频繁的） brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. First and foremost（首要的
12、）, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offeran awakening（唤醒） of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty 5and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused（唤起） our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Furthermore, I w
13、as attracted by his lively wit（风趣，妙语）. I remember that we students always anticipated（预料，提前预习） his class with great eagerness（热切的，渴望的） because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke（引起） chuckles（咯咯的笑） or loud laughs.Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last c
14、lass, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.4）Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them individually:邀请他们参加晚会，说明举办晚会的原因，为他们安排了什么活动Dear Snoopy,I am greatly honored to formally invite you to particip
15、ate in Mr. Guo Jings wedding ceremony with Ms. Fujiwora to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on April 1, 2008. As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy. The occasion will start at seven 6oclock in the evening, with the sh
16、owing of their wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior（优先的） appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company. Yours s
17、incerely,Li Ming5）SpeechMr. President, ladies and gentlemen,Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing! To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself. I am the president of Motorola(China) Electronics Ltd.The following is my introduction to the conference. First, it
18、is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference fo International Trade Cooperation. Second, on behalf of our company , I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates（代表）. Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive. .I
19、wish all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you. If you have any question for me, please 7feel free to ask at any time. Thank you for your attention.6）LetterDear Sir or Madam,I am a senior from the Department of Business Administration of Beijing
20、University. I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position for a staff member.I am sure that I am qualified for it. Fist, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications a
21、nd work experience. Second, not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member. Last, my hobbies include sports and music.Words fail me when I try to express my h
22、eartfelt gratitude to the help you render（给与） me. Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely,Li Ming 7）RESUMELi MingP. O. Box 237, Beijing University85, Yiheyuan Road, Haidian District, Beijing 100871Tel: 62768888 Email: LCareer Objective: A positi
23、on with management potential in the banking business specializing in international corporate financingEducational Background: Sept 2003 to Beijing UniversityJuly 2007 Major in International Business ManagementMain courses include English, Computer, Business Management, Accounting, International Comm
24、ercial LawWork Experience: July 2006 to Bank of ChinaJune 2007 Internship, Secretary to Deputy Manager of MarketingDraft business correspondenceSchedule deputy managers appointmentsQualifications: University graduation certificate and bachelor degree to be conferred upon graduation (2007)College Eng
25、lish Test Band 4 June 2005Honors & Awards: Twice awarded scholarship by Beijing University 2005& 2006Special Skills: Familiarity with Microsoft Word, ExcelAbility to work independentlyGood Organizational skills9Experience: President of Student Union 2005presentPersonal Data: Date of Birth: 9/17/1985
26、Gender: FemaleMarital Status: Unmarried8）AnnouncementDirections:The Students Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:1) the purpose of the contest,2) time and place of the contest,3) what is required of the candida
27、tes,4) details of the judges and awards.Do not sign your own name at the end of the announcement. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature.Chinese-Speaking ContestJune 10, 2007To improve students ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students Union of Chinese Langu
28、age and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on 10Saturday next week (17june) at the Students Recreational Center. Those who are interested in talking part in it may sign up with the monitors of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be inv
29、ited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students UnionDepartment of Chinese Language and Literature9）InternetOwing to the speedy economic development, the number of the people who use Internet has considerably increased. It
30、 is universally acknowledged that Internet playa a crucial role in modern society.Due attention has to be paid to the issue of Internet. With the reform and opening-up in recent decades, people in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of Internet. Unfortunately, if we let this situa
31、tion continue as it is, we do not know where humans will be in the forthcoming future.Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. To begin with, we should cultivate the authorities to make strict laws to control Internet. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people th
32、at Internet. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that Internet is essential to us. Only in this way can we solve the problem.1110）Jobs for Graduates (1)Job hunting has always been a headache for college graduates. Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some a
33、re not. Most serious of all, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.The reasons for this phenomenon are various. On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the
34、number of graduates was greater than the need in the market. On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.I think the problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures. First, they should research the market and
35、 develop special skills to suit its need. Second, students attitude towards employment should be changed. They should go to some small cities and country. There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge. In a word, if we pay much attention, the problem can be solved.参 考 译 文1）在绝大多数
36、大学里，考试都是作为衡量学生是否掌握某一课程的主要手段。虽然考试这一工作做的比较有效，但其副作用也相当大。12首先，考试造成教学水平下降。由于教师的好坏往往根据学生考试的结果来判断，所以教师被迫训练学生的应试技巧。而几乎没有什么课程是仅仅通过教授应试技巧可以教好的。其次，考试最坏的副作用是使学生养成不良的学习习惯。由于考试分数是衡量学生学习好坏的唯一标准，学生只能被迫机械的死记硬背，而不是创造性的去思考。实际上，很少有人承认考试对学生的学习会有重要作用。如果确实如此，我们为什么不做一些改革，设计出比考试更有效、更可靠的评估方法来呢？2）我最喜爱的小说是儒勒凡尔纳写的八十天环游地球 。该作者出生
37、于法国，并且致力于文学事业，并写了很多科幻小说，使他赢得“现代科幻小说之父”的美名。这是一本科幻小说，讲述了一位英国绅士的一个激动人心的故事。菲利弗格先生跟他的俱乐部伙伴打了个赌，并设法在八十天之内环游了地球。书中生动描述了他的旅途中发生的许多困难和故事。从这本书中，我们可以看出作者对于海洋、旅行和冒险的热爱。这些在作者一生中影响深远。作者丰富的想象力和科学地理知识也使我们惊讶并折服。3）在我生活中我遇到过很多值得回忆的人，但在我认识的人中让我最难忘的人可能要算我的英语老师了。让我常常回想起他的是他那些特殊的品质。首先，他教给我们13学生一位老师所能给予的最珍贵的东西，即唤起我们学习的激情。他
38、不仅培养我们欣赏英语语言文学的美丽与完美，而且激起我们在这方面深入研究的兴趣。其次，他的才智深深吸引了我。我现在还记得我们学生总渴望上他的课，因为他讲课生动幽默，总能引起我们微笑或哄堂大笑。虽然我们没听他的课已近两年了，但我们聚在一起时总要谈起他。我知道他的形象已深深留在我心中了。4）亲爱的史努比：2008 年 4 月 1 日，我将在我家里举办一个晚会来庆祝郭靖先生和 Fujiwora 小姐的婚礼。由于你是我们的好友，我们非常希望你能够参与庆典并分享快乐。活动将在晚上 7 点开始，首先是婚礼的录像，接着是晚会。大约 10 点的时候，我们将举办一个小型的音乐会，一支乐队将演奏一些巴赫和施特劳斯的
39、曲目。如果你 4 月 1 日没有预约的话，我们期待着你的光临。您真诚的，李明5）主席先生、女士们、先生们：女士们、先生们，早上好！欢迎来到北京！首先，我想做一个简单的自我介绍。我是摩托罗拉（中国）电子公司的总裁。14下面是我对这个大会的介绍。首先，我很荣幸和大家来到一起，并且宣布国际贸易合作大会的开幕。其次，谨代表我们公司，我想表达对于所有贵宾和代表的衷心欢迎。最后，我相信我们的齐心协力一定是富有成果的。我希望大家在这次大会中愉快，并希望上述信息能对您有所帮助。如果您对我有任何问题，请随时自由提问。感谢您的关注。6）尊敬的先生或女士：我是工商管理系大四的学生。我写这封信是为了申请进入您的著名大
40、学（申请您最近招聘的职员职位） 。我确信自己符合条件（胜任职位） 。首先，随信附上我的简历，进一步详述了我以前的学历和工作经历。其次，不但我的资历和经历使我成为合适的人选，我令人愉快的个性也非常适合在您的著名学府学习（做一名职员） 。最后，我的爱好包括体育和音乐。当我想表达对于您给我帮助的衷心感谢的时候，言语无法表达。非常感谢您对我询问的迅速并且好意的关注。您真诚的，李明7）个人简历李明北京大学 237 号邮箱北京市海淀区颐和园路 5 号 10087115电话：62768888 电子邮箱： 求职目标：银行业国际融资方向具有管理前景的职位教育背景：2003 年 9 月至 2007 年 7 月
41、北京大学国际商务管理专业主要课程：英语、计算机、商务管理、会计、国际商法工作经历：2006 年 7 月至 2007 年 6 月 中国银行实习，市场部副总经理秘书起草商务函件安排副总日程资 历：大学毕业证及学士学位（将在毕业时授予）大学英语四级证书 2005 年 6 月所获奖励：两次获得北京大学奖学金（2005、2006）特 长：熟练使用 Microsoft words, excel擅长独立工作卓越的组织技能大学经历：2005 年至今 校学生会主席个人资料：1984 年 9 月 17 日性别：女婚姻状况：未婚8）中文演讲比赛2007 年 6 月 10 日16为提高同学们中文演讲的能力并丰富课外活
42、动，中文系学生会将于下周六（6 月 17 日）在学生大礼堂组织全校中文演讲比赛。有兴趣参加的同学请于下周二之前在本班班长处报名。我们将邀请五位教授担任评委，并将给前六名获奖者颁奖。欢迎大家积极参加。中文系学生会9）由于社会的迅速发展，使用互联网的人数已经急剧上升。普遍公认互联网在现代社会中发挥重要作用。我们应该对互联网的问题给予充分重视。随着近年来的改革开放政策，越来越多的人开始认识到互联网的重要性。如果我们让这种情况听之任之的话，我们不知道在不远的将来人类的未来会在哪。因此，我们急需采取严厉措施，首先，我们应该呼吁我们的政府制定严格的法律来控制互联网。另外，我们应该提高人们的意识：互联网对我
43、们很重要。只有这样我们才能解决这个问题。10）找工作对于大学生来说是一个头疼的问题，虽然很多人在毕业之后立即找到了工作但是有些却没有找到工作。更严重的是，即使毕业了很长一段时间，有些人还是不知道去哪儿工作。有很多原因来解释这种现象，一方面，几年前大学采取了很多热门专业的学生，比如经济、金融等，这类毕业生的人数大大超过了市场的需求：另一方面，大多数毕业生如果没有找到合适的工作宁愿呆在大城市里，也不愿去农村工作。17我觉的只要校方和学生都采取一定的措施，这个问题是能够解决的。首先，大城市应对市场进行调查并发展学生的特殊技能来满足市场的需求。其次，学生就业的观念应该有所转变。他们应该去小城市或农村就
44、业，在那儿，他们也能够充分发挥所学的专业知识。一句话，如果我们引起足够的重视，这个问题是能够得到解决的。默写：发现写作弱点中译英：提高写作实力写作：模仿掌握技巧：万能框架大纲解读：两大黄金原则印象原则：书写工整、卷面整洁、字迹清晰语言第一位、结构第二位、内容第三位：语言：基本正确丰富多变（词汇+句型）结构：逻辑性段落结构：总分总主题句：翻译提纲，1 句论证：2 句小结：1 句评分标准：关联词18同义替换（词汇+句型）代词替换内容：不跑题大纲原文：（一）写作要求根据全国大学英语四、六级考试委员会 2006 年 11 月出版的大学英语四级考试大纲（2006 修订版） ：写作（Writing）和翻译
45、（Translation）部分测试学生用英语进行书面表达的能力，所占分值比例为 20，其中写作 15，翻译 5，考试时间 35 分钟。写作选取考生熟悉的题材。考生需根据规定的题目和提供的提纲、情景、图片或图表等，写出一篇不少于 120 词的短文。写作要求是思想表达正确、意义连贯、无严重语言错误。考试时间 30 分钟。大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到教育部高等教育司最新大学英语课程教学要求 （教学大纲）中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性写作任务；能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等；能写常见的应用文；能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出 120 个词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。能
46、掌握基本的写作技能。 ”（二）考核技能写作部分考核的技能是：A 思想表达1. 表达中心思想写作192. 表达重要和特定信息3. 表达观点、态度等B 篇章组织4. 围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点5. 连贯地组句成段、组段成篇C 语言运用6. 运用恰当的词汇7. 运用正确的语法8. 运用合适的句子结构9. 使用正确的标点符号10. 运用衔接手段表达句间关系（如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等）D 写作格式11. 运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式（三）评分原则CET 用以检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。CET 作文题采用总体评分（Glob
47、al Scoring）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（Reward Scores） ，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清20楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。（四）评分标准本题满分为 15 分阅卷标准共分五等：2 分、5 分、8 分、11 分及 14 分。各有标准样卷
48、一至二份。阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如 8分）相似，即定为该分数（即 8 分） ；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分（即 9 分）或减一分（即 7 分） 。但不得加或减半分。评分标准2 分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5 分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8 分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11 分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14 分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。21（注：白卷，
49、作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给 0 分）字数不足应酌情扣分： 字数110119 100109 9099 8089 7079 6069 5059 49扣分1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9（注：1. 题目中给出的主题句、起始句、结束句等，均不得记入所写字数。2. 规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。3. 如果扣为 0 分，要慎重处理。 ） 为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准，现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表于下，称为得分率。其中 9 分的得分率为 60（相当于百分制的 60 分） 。作文分15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1得分率100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7第二节 应用文个人简历：22RESUMELi MingP. O. Box 237, Beijing
